My Story chapter 4

Wow its been a while since I've bothered with this fic but now that I'm (hopefully) a better writer and I have more info on the game, I can continue it!

Besaid Village

The waves gently lapped around Tidus's body. Slowly his eyes opened and he became aware of his situation. He bolted upright, spluttering and cursing. Lying facedown in the water wasn't very pleasant. He wiped his face and looked around. Damn too blurry…

 * WACK *

Unfortunately something smacked him in the back of the head causing him to fall back into the water. He sat back up and rubbed his head grumbling…until he saw the culprit.

"Blitzball!" Ok so maybe it wasn't that bad. Someone on the shore yelled out to him.

"Heeeey, you okay!?'

  He waved back to the anonymous person and picked up the blitzball. Somehow he managed to recover from his shock and perform an amazing blitz move. Being in another world wouldn't stop him from showing off. No way.

The unlucky person on the beach had no way of catching this enormous throw and dodged it as it zipped past head. A cheesy grin appeared on his face. " Whoa…"

Tidus swam up to the shore and approached the, 'people'. The one in particular that had yelled out to him before spoke first. " You wanna…try that move one more time?"

Finally things were starting to look up.

He inwardly smiled and threw the ball up…before smacking it out again. Not unexpectaintly the people showed their awe and amazement. " You no armature, who you play for?"  Tidus smugly replied, " The Zanarkand abes" But he mentally kicked himself for saying so.

" Who you say again?"

" Er…forget that…I got to uuhh…close to Sin and my head's all fuzzy like"

" Sin's toxin got to ya, but you still alive. Praise be to Yevon" er what?

Tidus just kinda stood there…what else could he do?

" I'm Wakka. Coach and captain of the Besaid Auroch's brudda. Alright back to practice! Come on I'll show you the Village"

I felt like I could trust this Wakka so I just had to ask… " Hey Wakka…it's true right, Zanarkand was destroyed…a thousand years ago"

His face turned serious. " A long time ago there were a lot of cities in Spira. Big cities, with machina, machines, to run em. The people played all day and let the machina do the work. Then Sin came and well…look" She pointed the bits of rubble and buildings that poked out of the vegetation. Oh…I thought they were for decoration…  " Sin came and destroyed the cities and their machina" He paused for a moment. " But what really gets me is…we gotta pay for what some goofballs did way back when…but we always have to repent for our sins, that will make Sin go away"

He nodded and attempted to ignore the grumbling of his stomach.

" Come on I'll take you to Besaid Village"

And so Wakka and Tidus walked on through the lush vegetation and waterfalls, talking to some guys called…crusaders…and onto the Village.

" Besaid Village" Wakka told him. " This is where I grew up"

" Hey you got any food there?"

He laughed and took Tidus down. The only problem was a certain 'prayer' that Wakka showed him before ushering him over to the temple.

Go and present yourself to temple summoner he had said.

A/n: ok not a bad chapter but I suppose I could make a few adjustments…I'll try to make it better. Trust me! Review and tell me what you think.

Thanks to

The Angel Of The Lion~ Yeah thanks for encouraging me! your fics are great and I cant wait for the next songs of yesterday chapter! Thanks a bunch.

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Yunalesca78~ Wow! Thanks for support. Its reviewers like you that brighten my day!

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