Disclaimer: I do not own Legend of Legaia.
Thanks you for the review, I have no clue as too why I choose Luctes/Noa as a couple. It's odd and different I guess. If you have any thing to ask or comment on please, I'm begging you, to review. I've been writing for years, though I'm extremely young, the more reason I ask help from people who know about writing. All I can say is this those of whom under stand why I keep writing stupid stories like this, which write stories of their own and hardly get reviews, no matter how hard you put work into it. It would be nice that you tell me your views on the story, or chapter, you know that's what makes better writers. When they think they actually did some good.
Sorry I'm kind of upset about the reviews I got on my other story so no flames for this chapter please!
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Ch 2 Cort to Gaza, Noa to Mom
Noa rode silently; her son ran a head of her, a grin apparent on his milky skin. They, of course were heading to the Drake kingdom, well they were making a stop at Ura Mais to give prayer to Tieg/Rem and of course a remembrance for Hari. It was a tradition, every year at this time, the anniversary of the end of the mist era, Gaza and her self would visit the site.
Praying, and remembering all those who had lost their lives in that terrible time period. Why she choose to pray at the Ura Mais, rather than any of the intended shrines, was simple. No one ever really visited the Ura Mais, so she and her son were left alone to pray as long as they wised with out any interruptions involved.
Noa taught Gaza all about the mist, telling how horrible it had been. Not telling him that he was the one that had created the mist, and was her brother. Gaza also knew that he was named after Gaza the swordsman in Sol. Noa told him about Gaza's craziness, his poor life. The thing he did to repent for all the lives he took. Of course little Gaza was proud to be called after such an admiral man, though his feats at first were bad.
Though the boy wondered why he looked rather different from his mother. With his silver hair, and miss matched eyes, one crimson red the other blue- green. He wondered if he looked like his father, though he had never met his father. At first he thought Luctes was his father, but after over hearing his mother and the once Soren man talk one night that idea was scratched out. Luctes spook about some thing rather odd, something about a man named Cort, about him self maybe remembering something about the Mist, or this thing called Juggernaut, or this guy called Songi.
Luctes always talked to his mother, like she was the most important thing in the world, and his mother looked at him with this weird look. It confused him; Luctes practically raised him, every other day he would appear, bringing presents for them. Gaza's mother seemed pleased by the simple gesture, well he was happy that someone cared for them both, but the things his mother and Luctes spoke of was odd, most likely about the past.
And now as they reached the village of Vinda, his mother refused to stop for a rest. They were already late, at least by a day. And they were to meet up with some guy named Lord Biron. Luctes's idea of fun was weird, were ever this Drake kingdom was, Luctes was making it hard to just hurry up and get there.
Noa watched in awe as her son rode with speed across the path, they were very close to Biron. Luctes was leading them, well barely; because Gaza was constantly passing him up. The young boy seemed so excited, almost ecstatic; at the thought of meeting the people that helped destroy the mist. Or that he might find out who he really was.
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"Vahn, are you ready to go, tomorrows the celebration, don't you remember?" Mei complained, tossing her long tassels of green hair, pursing her lips in irritation at her husband's disappearance.
With a startle she felt strong arms wrapped around her waist. And a low chuckle emit from her aficionado (love).
"Oh dear me, are we going to be late." Vahn said affectionately.
"Yes, Grantes said he was meeting up with us at Drake an HOUR ago, I'd say were late." Mei complained, trying to scold her laughing husband.
"Oh come now love, we use the simple invention called Door of Wind, wow!!!!!!" Vahn faked amazement.
"Oh please honey, with the kids and all. Do you think that's wise?" Mei asked, pulling away from her husband and packed some clothing and other various stuff for the trip.
"Its fine, I'm not really worried about it, they should be use to it by now, don't you think?" Vahn stated, helping his wife pack.
"Okay fine, go get the kids, were going now!" Mei demanded right before slamming the door on her husbands face.
Vahn laughed again, putting his hands behind his head in his merriment.
"Daddy are we ready to go yet, it mommy done packing yet, is she daddy, is she?"
Two young kids ran up to Vahn, the oldest was like the exact replica of Vahn, his name was Ra. And the youngest just like Mei, her name being Fiona. The two were tugging on their father's tunic irritable. Then turned to their mother as she came walking out of the house, holding bags on each side of her hips.
"Momma ready to go?" Fiona asked, smiling wide.
"Yes we are!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My last breath
Hold on to me love You know I can't stay long All I wanted to say was I love you and I'm not afraid Can you hear me? Can you feel me in your arms?
Holding my last breath Safe inside myself Are all my thoughts of you? Sweet ruptured light it ends here tonight
I'll miss the winter A world of fragile things Look for me in the white forest Hiding in a hollow tree (come find me) I know you hear me I can taste it in your tears
Holding my last breath Safe inside myself Are all my thoughts of you? Sweet ruptured light it ends here tonight
Closing your eyes to disappear You pray your dreams will leave you here But still you wake and know the truth no one's there
say goodnight don't be afraid Calling me calling me as you fade to black ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay that was the chapters' song, I know there short, but I'll make them longer as long as you review people.
Thank you very much for reviewing. Sorry for the wait it took me about three weeks to get off my lazy ass.
So should I make this some romance, simple mush-mush story? I'm thinking of maybe bringing Songi back?
So what do you think, please tell me!
Ja Na
Thanks you for the review, I have no clue as too why I choose Luctes/Noa as a couple. It's odd and different I guess. If you have any thing to ask or comment on please, I'm begging you, to review. I've been writing for years, though I'm extremely young, the more reason I ask help from people who know about writing. All I can say is this those of whom under stand why I keep writing stupid stories like this, which write stories of their own and hardly get reviews, no matter how hard you put work into it. It would be nice that you tell me your views on the story, or chapter, you know that's what makes better writers. When they think they actually did some good.
Sorry I'm kind of upset about the reviews I got on my other story so no flames for this chapter please!
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Ch 2 Cort to Gaza, Noa to Mom
Noa rode silently; her son ran a head of her, a grin apparent on his milky skin. They, of course were heading to the Drake kingdom, well they were making a stop at Ura Mais to give prayer to Tieg/Rem and of course a remembrance for Hari. It was a tradition, every year at this time, the anniversary of the end of the mist era, Gaza and her self would visit the site.
Praying, and remembering all those who had lost their lives in that terrible time period. Why she choose to pray at the Ura Mais, rather than any of the intended shrines, was simple. No one ever really visited the Ura Mais, so she and her son were left alone to pray as long as they wised with out any interruptions involved.
Noa taught Gaza all about the mist, telling how horrible it had been. Not telling him that he was the one that had created the mist, and was her brother. Gaza also knew that he was named after Gaza the swordsman in Sol. Noa told him about Gaza's craziness, his poor life. The thing he did to repent for all the lives he took. Of course little Gaza was proud to be called after such an admiral man, though his feats at first were bad.
Though the boy wondered why he looked rather different from his mother. With his silver hair, and miss matched eyes, one crimson red the other blue- green. He wondered if he looked like his father, though he had never met his father. At first he thought Luctes was his father, but after over hearing his mother and the once Soren man talk one night that idea was scratched out. Luctes spook about some thing rather odd, something about a man named Cort, about him self maybe remembering something about the Mist, or this thing called Juggernaut, or this guy called Songi.
Luctes always talked to his mother, like she was the most important thing in the world, and his mother looked at him with this weird look. It confused him; Luctes practically raised him, every other day he would appear, bringing presents for them. Gaza's mother seemed pleased by the simple gesture, well he was happy that someone cared for them both, but the things his mother and Luctes spoke of was odd, most likely about the past.
And now as they reached the village of Vinda, his mother refused to stop for a rest. They were already late, at least by a day. And they were to meet up with some guy named Lord Biron. Luctes's idea of fun was weird, were ever this Drake kingdom was, Luctes was making it hard to just hurry up and get there.
Noa watched in awe as her son rode with speed across the path, they were very close to Biron. Luctes was leading them, well barely; because Gaza was constantly passing him up. The young boy seemed so excited, almost ecstatic; at the thought of meeting the people that helped destroy the mist. Or that he might find out who he really was.
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"Vahn, are you ready to go, tomorrows the celebration, don't you remember?" Mei complained, tossing her long tassels of green hair, pursing her lips in irritation at her husband's disappearance.
With a startle she felt strong arms wrapped around her waist. And a low chuckle emit from her aficionado (love).
"Oh dear me, are we going to be late." Vahn said affectionately.
"Yes, Grantes said he was meeting up with us at Drake an HOUR ago, I'd say were late." Mei complained, trying to scold her laughing husband.
"Oh come now love, we use the simple invention called Door of Wind, wow!!!!!!" Vahn faked amazement.
"Oh please honey, with the kids and all. Do you think that's wise?" Mei asked, pulling away from her husband and packed some clothing and other various stuff for the trip.
"Its fine, I'm not really worried about it, they should be use to it by now, don't you think?" Vahn stated, helping his wife pack.
"Okay fine, go get the kids, were going now!" Mei demanded right before slamming the door on her husbands face.
Vahn laughed again, putting his hands behind his head in his merriment.
"Daddy are we ready to go yet, it mommy done packing yet, is she daddy, is she?"
Two young kids ran up to Vahn, the oldest was like the exact replica of Vahn, his name was Ra. And the youngest just like Mei, her name being Fiona. The two were tugging on their father's tunic irritable. Then turned to their mother as she came walking out of the house, holding bags on each side of her hips.
"Momma ready to go?" Fiona asked, smiling wide.
"Yes we are!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ My last breath
Hold on to me love You know I can't stay long All I wanted to say was I love you and I'm not afraid Can you hear me? Can you feel me in your arms?
Holding my last breath Safe inside myself Are all my thoughts of you? Sweet ruptured light it ends here tonight
I'll miss the winter A world of fragile things Look for me in the white forest Hiding in a hollow tree (come find me) I know you hear me I can taste it in your tears
Holding my last breath Safe inside myself Are all my thoughts of you? Sweet ruptured light it ends here tonight
Closing your eyes to disappear You pray your dreams will leave you here But still you wake and know the truth no one's there
say goodnight don't be afraid Calling me calling me as you fade to black ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okay that was the chapters' song, I know there short, but I'll make them longer as long as you review people.
Thank you very much for reviewing. Sorry for the wait it took me about three weeks to get off my lazy ass.
So should I make this some romance, simple mush-mush story? I'm thinking of maybe bringing Songi back?
So what do you think, please tell me!
Ja Na
