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THE VAMPIRE QUEEN
Chapter Two: The Attack
Trunks rolled over in his sleep. Off in some dream. He didn't know that he was being watched. The eyes watching him were hungry.
He felt a cold chill run through him. He simple pulled the blanket over him and rolled on to his stomack, ignoring the feeling. He drifted deeper into sleep.
Nimphra walked up to the bed. He was so small. It amazed her how much power Tok decribed was in that. It didn't matter to her how young he was.
She rolled him on his back. Put her hand on his chest and started to feed. His eyes opened in panic and he threw a wild punch. Tok held the boy down. He realized he was in trouble and started to scream.
"Silence him." she hissed. Tok covered the boy's mouth. His muffled crys were beginining to slow down. Tok felt him weaken, felt him begin to die. She smiled.
The door flung open, a woman and a man stood there. Nimphra snarled and got up to face them. Tok shook his head, "No master. It the other one." She starred at the man. He was collecting energy for an attack. She and Tok stepped out of the window.
Vegetta went running to the window. He didn't see them or feel their energy. "Damn it." He heard Bulma scream. He run up to her. Trunks was lieing there. Vegetta couldn't feel his energy.
He placed his hand on his forehead and Trunks let out a ragged breath. He was alive, barely. A huge black circle was on his chest. "What happen to him, Veggeta? What wrong with my son?" Bulma cryed on the verge of losing it. Veggeta shook his head, "I don't know."
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So, how was that? Good? Bad? Too short? Too long? Tell me. I might rewrite bad stuff so that it is good. That way you will be pleased. That all I do, try and please you.
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THE VAMPIRE QUEEN
Chapter Two: The Attack
Trunks rolled over in his sleep. Off in some dream. He didn't know that he was being watched. The eyes watching him were hungry.
He felt a cold chill run through him. He simple pulled the blanket over him and rolled on to his stomack, ignoring the feeling. He drifted deeper into sleep.
Nimphra walked up to the bed. He was so small. It amazed her how much power Tok decribed was in that. It didn't matter to her how young he was.
She rolled him on his back. Put her hand on his chest and started to feed. His eyes opened in panic and he threw a wild punch. Tok held the boy down. He realized he was in trouble and started to scream.
"Silence him." she hissed. Tok covered the boy's mouth. His muffled crys were beginining to slow down. Tok felt him weaken, felt him begin to die. She smiled.
The door flung open, a woman and a man stood there. Nimphra snarled and got up to face them. Tok shook his head, "No master. It the other one." She starred at the man. He was collecting energy for an attack. She and Tok stepped out of the window.
Vegetta went running to the window. He didn't see them or feel their energy. "Damn it." He heard Bulma scream. He run up to her. Trunks was lieing there. Vegetta couldn't feel his energy.
He placed his hand on his forehead and Trunks let out a ragged breath. He was alive, barely. A huge black circle was on his chest. "What happen to him, Veggeta? What wrong with my son?" Bulma cryed on the verge of losing it. Veggeta shook his head, "I don't know."
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So, how was that? Good? Bad? Too short? Too long? Tell me. I might rewrite bad stuff so that it is good. That way you will be pleased. That all I do, try and please you.
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