Aaah! I feel so proud of myself! I've been getting new reviews, & they are all good!
But then again, I feel kinda lonely in the sense that I'm not on anybody's "Favorite authors" or "Favorite stories" list. So far, I've got three favorite stories, & no favorite authors.
Anyway, Gundam Wing & Tenchi Muyo are not mine.
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Kurenai
Chapter Three:
Changes
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Ryu-oh began getting hotter as it collided with the planet's atmosphere. Mayuka was still on the floor, crying her eyes out.
Ryu-oh passed through the atmosphere & began falling from the sky, making contact with a big lake. The impaxt made Mayuka's head bump against the floor, & she was knocked unconscious. Her ship had broken into big pieces, & she was out in the open. And she stayed like that until a certain brown-haired Preventer found her.
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Millions of light-years away in a big beautiful palace, two elegantly dressed females were talkingin an elaboratly decorated room.
The taller one wore her long purple hair in a strange pigtail-like hairstyle. Her big ruby red eyes were very watery.
The smaller one wore her bluish-green hair in two normal pigtails. Her pretty pink eyes were full of worry.
"Oh Aeka, what if she never comes back? She got really angry!" cried the smaller girl as her voice began to break.
Aeka Masaki Jurai, first crown princess of Jurai, sighed. "I hope Mayuka comes back safely."
Aeka walked to the pink-eyed girl, bent down, & put her hands on the other girl's shoulders.
"Mayuka'll come back. Don't worry, Sasami. I know she will, because she only does this when she's either really depressed or really angry, & that's hardly often," said Aeka soothingly.
Sasami Masaki Jurai, second crown princess of Jurai, looked up at her sister's face sadly.
Since Tenchi's passing, Aeka, Sasami, & Mayuka had all gone through changes.
Aeka had become a little more assertive, & she had a higher sense of responsibility.
Sasami became depressed, & kept to herself. She became much more quiet, & began worrying about things more often.
Mayuka also became quieter, but she got angry often. She also had the tendency to hop on Ryu-oh & cruise the galaxy when she was supposed to be learning how to be a proper ruler.
Other changes had taken place, & it was most noticeable in Sasami & Mayuka. Mayuka had attained her adult body again, & Sasami had also grown. She was much taller & curvier; she had a curvy waist & small round breasts. She looked like a 14-year-old human girl. But she acted much differently from one.
"How long until we start worrying for real?" asked Sasami.
"I give her two hours," sighed Aeka.
"I hope she's alright, wherever she is," muttered Sasami.
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To Be Continued...
Haha! I left you hanging!
Sorry for making the chapter so small. I'll make the next chapter much longer, I promise!
Oh yeah! Two chapters ago, instead of putting "big catlike ears", I put "big catlike eyes". Sorry for the error.
Love,
Mei Rose.
