That's Just Wrong: Unknown as of yet.
Written by: bchan
Written from: Crash's That's Just Wrong
www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1269384
Okay, ff.net is being a biatch and not letting me see ALL of my 7 wonderful reviews I have. Only the last four. BAKA! Anyhow, here are what I have gotten so far...
Kawaii Oritsuru: I'm really sorry you didn't like this story. This is only a writers competition from the story at the address above. It was her idea, not mine. I'm only using my writing skills to create past events as I would see them. I'm not big on Kouga/Inu fan either. I prefer male/female pairings, because I'm not much of a yaoi fan. I like Sephiroth/Cloud when it comes to that as well. My favorite pairings for Inuyasha are probably Naraku/Inuyasha. But most don't like that, althought for some reason some of the stories pairing them together are really well done. I'll see what I can do about making a story for out favorite yaoi pair.
SwtxLilAznGrl: I guess you've read Crash's story too. Good!! Yeah, I guess I've made it all Kouga's fault, but I wanted to make it sort of like a master/slave kind of thing, and I hope it worked out that way. It just always seems that Kouga is very pushy and always seems to think he can get what he wants in the manga and anime. This is just so far as to what I've seen. :) I just think his personality is that way.
Neko-Sama: Thanks so much for that Neko, I really appreciated someone liking my writing. I have written quite a few stories, but I usually don't get many reviews, and thus I don't have any idea if anyone is actually reading my stories or not. :( So I appreciate you thinking that I did a great job. :)
Kota Magic: Okay I guess I did make Kouga seems like such a pig. I too would agree that Inuyasha would probably have just sliced Kouga up right there and then, if he had tried to push himself off on Inuyasha becuase he was horny from Kagome. Although, until someone is put into that position they never know what they would have to do. Since none of us knows how intoxicating it is for a dog or cat, when a female is in heat, we will never know how far they would go. I've actually seen male dogs and cats mating with other male's. It's just somethign that happens. They are there I guess, so if they gotta do it, they do it. It's kinda like dogs humping humans legs. :( No one really knows why they do it. It's just funny to watch. LOL Thanks for the comments though. :)
Okay on with the chapter.. :P
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Inuyasha was distraught at the look of terror and disquest that he saw on Kagome's face. She was looking up at him from where she had fallen to the ground. He could hear her sobs as they reached his ears, becoming more distant and softer as each second passed. He could smell flowers and the salt of her tears.
When he awoke, Inuyasha realized that they were not Kagome's tears of disguest that he smelled, but his own tears mingled with the smells of the forest around him. The only thing he registered was that he was laying on the cold hard ground, with his kimono wrapped about him.
'I'm NAKED!" his mind screamed, as he suddenly realized his nudest state.
Inuyasha scrambled to sit upright, but something was holding him down in the position he had awoken in. It was someone's arm. He had half expected it to be Kagome's face he looked into. It was, however, quite a shock to find the face of the wolf demon silently sleeping. Inuyasha looked down at Kouga, and then glanced down at himself, covered with his discarded clothing. His mind then drifted to what they had done during the night and he started to slowly cry again. He remembered his dream he had just recently awoke to, and the thought of Kagome looking at him the way she had made him cry harder.
Inuyasha again, reached for his clothes and left the area as fast as he could, skipping from one branch to the next. He had to get away from Kouga, away from them all. He had to have time to think everything through.
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Kagome had awoken at dawn, and started the fire again. It had died down considerably after Inuyasha left. The night air had come in and left her cold and shivering most of the night. Shippou only gave a small amount of heat, as the bodies of youkai were much warmer then that of normal humans. It had been lonely for her to not feel Inuyasha's presence nearby. It always comforted her to know that while she slept he was keeping a vigilant watch over them all. Sometimes she could even feel his eyes on her, while she acted like she was sleeping. It was comforting to know that he cared for her that much.
Lately, however, he had been so distant. Running off all the time and coming back in a worse mood then when he had left. Something was terribly wrong with him. He was so edgy lately, and his moods were as unpredictable anymore as the weather was. Kagome sighed when a thought struck her.
'Was it Kikyou? Did he meet with her again? If so, what happened to make him so distant?' she kept asking herself questions, while she started cooking their morning meal.
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Okay, how is this so far. This is only a little peak into what the story will be. :) Sorry for not updating to much, I really really have no time lately except on weekends. Then I usually have to much to do anyhow. Oh Kami-sama!
Written by: bchan
Written from: Crash's That's Just Wrong
www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1269384
Okay, ff.net is being a biatch and not letting me see ALL of my 7 wonderful reviews I have. Only the last four. BAKA! Anyhow, here are what I have gotten so far...
Kawaii Oritsuru: I'm really sorry you didn't like this story. This is only a writers competition from the story at the address above. It was her idea, not mine. I'm only using my writing skills to create past events as I would see them. I'm not big on Kouga/Inu fan either. I prefer male/female pairings, because I'm not much of a yaoi fan. I like Sephiroth/Cloud when it comes to that as well. My favorite pairings for Inuyasha are probably Naraku/Inuyasha. But most don't like that, althought for some reason some of the stories pairing them together are really well done. I'll see what I can do about making a story for out favorite yaoi pair.
SwtxLilAznGrl: I guess you've read Crash's story too. Good!! Yeah, I guess I've made it all Kouga's fault, but I wanted to make it sort of like a master/slave kind of thing, and I hope it worked out that way. It just always seems that Kouga is very pushy and always seems to think he can get what he wants in the manga and anime. This is just so far as to what I've seen. :) I just think his personality is that way.
Neko-Sama: Thanks so much for that Neko, I really appreciated someone liking my writing. I have written quite a few stories, but I usually don't get many reviews, and thus I don't have any idea if anyone is actually reading my stories or not. :( So I appreciate you thinking that I did a great job. :)
Kota Magic: Okay I guess I did make Kouga seems like such a pig. I too would agree that Inuyasha would probably have just sliced Kouga up right there and then, if he had tried to push himself off on Inuyasha becuase he was horny from Kagome. Although, until someone is put into that position they never know what they would have to do. Since none of us knows how intoxicating it is for a dog or cat, when a female is in heat, we will never know how far they would go. I've actually seen male dogs and cats mating with other male's. It's just somethign that happens. They are there I guess, so if they gotta do it, they do it. It's kinda like dogs humping humans legs. :( No one really knows why they do it. It's just funny to watch. LOL Thanks for the comments though. :)
Okay on with the chapter.. :P
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Inuyasha was distraught at the look of terror and disquest that he saw on Kagome's face. She was looking up at him from where she had fallen to the ground. He could hear her sobs as they reached his ears, becoming more distant and softer as each second passed. He could smell flowers and the salt of her tears.
When he awoke, Inuyasha realized that they were not Kagome's tears of disguest that he smelled, but his own tears mingled with the smells of the forest around him. The only thing he registered was that he was laying on the cold hard ground, with his kimono wrapped about him.
'I'm NAKED!" his mind screamed, as he suddenly realized his nudest state.
Inuyasha scrambled to sit upright, but something was holding him down in the position he had awoken in. It was someone's arm. He had half expected it to be Kagome's face he looked into. It was, however, quite a shock to find the face of the wolf demon silently sleeping. Inuyasha looked down at Kouga, and then glanced down at himself, covered with his discarded clothing. His mind then drifted to what they had done during the night and he started to slowly cry again. He remembered his dream he had just recently awoke to, and the thought of Kagome looking at him the way she had made him cry harder.
Inuyasha again, reached for his clothes and left the area as fast as he could, skipping from one branch to the next. He had to get away from Kouga, away from them all. He had to have time to think everything through.
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Kagome had awoken at dawn, and started the fire again. It had died down considerably after Inuyasha left. The night air had come in and left her cold and shivering most of the night. Shippou only gave a small amount of heat, as the bodies of youkai were much warmer then that of normal humans. It had been lonely for her to not feel Inuyasha's presence nearby. It always comforted her to know that while she slept he was keeping a vigilant watch over them all. Sometimes she could even feel his eyes on her, while she acted like she was sleeping. It was comforting to know that he cared for her that much.
Lately, however, he had been so distant. Running off all the time and coming back in a worse mood then when he had left. Something was terribly wrong with him. He was so edgy lately, and his moods were as unpredictable anymore as the weather was. Kagome sighed when a thought struck her.
'Was it Kikyou? Did he meet with her again? If so, what happened to make him so distant?' she kept asking herself questions, while she started cooking their morning meal.
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Okay, how is this so far. This is only a little peak into what the story will be. :) Sorry for not updating to much, I really really have no time lately except on weekends. Then I usually have to much to do anyhow. Oh Kami-sama!
