Well im hoping for feedback, i know atleast one person read my fanfic, so im content. i can write this for one person if only one person is reading this. This chapter is dedicated to kagome/inuyasha for being the first person to give me feed back. On with the story

Strong Language. this goes for this chapter and alot of the upcomming chapters.

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Kagomes heart torn

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Kouga jumped in and saved kagome just in time. (You really think i was gonna let kagome get raped?!?! NO WAY! Kouga held her as she fainted in his arms. "Stupid Dog-turd. what was he thinking? Going to that undead bitch. poor kagome. she must be heartbroken. He had rather save the undead bitch than this pretty treasure. what a shame." Kouga put a blanket over her (dont even ask me where he found the blankey lol)

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Kagome.. I wonder what happened to her. Shes probably raped by now. Its all my fault. I think i should go back and apologize.

Inuyasha went back to the abandoned castle. The lights wre still on, all he found was blood, a kagomes ripped up skirt, and a piece of her blouse. Inuyasha didnt care. He had his beloved kikyou now. He went back to kikyo and got her some water.

"Hey kikyo theres a hot springs over there. we can go if you want.

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Kouga ran his fingers through kagomes hair. god her hair was soft.. he thought. "Inuyasha..." were the last thing that escaped her mouth before she jumped up. "Kouga! nothing happened to me.. Or did it? " She said fearfully with a lump in her throat, guessing it had. Kouga smiled. "Actually i saved you in time to prevent that but you were kinda revealing a bit.." Kagomes color drained. "but dont worry! All your personal spots were covered" he added in hastily. "Oh" Kagomes color came back. She tried to stand up