Helpless
(Note: I'm back fully with my life on track. To Time Mage: Thanks. You are
the first criticism ever. And when I post the full story on ff.net, you'll
find that Kai isn't his real name. Thanks)
" Aaaaaargh!" Yami cried. " What's up?" Kevin said, noticing the pained look on the Dark Apparition. " Dylan. something is wrong. His energy is drained, and he has lost all confidence. He needs me!" Yami said, anger dominating his carefree features. He grabbed the biker jacket with the Millenium Pendant on it ( He needs to be with it to maintain physical presence.) and ran out the door. " Where are you, man." He muttered. He tried his best to locate his hikari, but the energy was to different from the one he was used to. " So, Dylan. I've failed. I can't be there to bail you out, like with Laura. But I can give you your hope for salvation! Spirit Form, Now!" Yami shouted, and become a true apparition.
" Really, Nasakki. You beat me last time. Why can't you pull yourself together?" Kai cackled. This was fresh. His nemesis, whom he had expected to be at least steadfast, was slumped against his rail. " I have no hope of winning now. Please accept my sur." Dylan was about to utter his surrender, when a golden light impacted. " What the he." He began, but another voice, from deep within started to speak. The voice spoke, " Dylan, I would merge with you, but fate tells me to let you fight this yourself. Since you have no hope, I'll give you mine!" Dylan glew with a white light, and when it cleared, he was back, as a warrior, ready for battle. " OK, Kai. Time to cripple that mechanized nightmare." He said. ' Alright. I can't attack. I can't hope to win, even with me powered up. And all magic goes back at me, thanks to that metal. Wait! Rules say that Machines are protected by METAL PLATES THAT COVER THERE BODIES! Loophole! If I can strip him of just one plate, and get at whats inside, He'll lose his Orgon for sure!' Dylan thought. " I play Swords of Revealing Light! And two cards face down." He announced.
"Got your act together. Good. One card face down. And Alpha, The magnet warrior, in defense mode." Kai shouted. " Death orgon may be restricted for now, but the countdown to your destruction is near. " I draw. And play fiend mirror, plus metal morph on it's mirror!" Dylan cried, and the mirror gained a gray shine. " Another sword ticks away. I play amplifier, on Alpha. I end my turn. " I draw, play one card face down, and end my turn.
" 1 turn left, so I'll just end." Kai said, smirking. " I do, too." Dylan said, smirking also. " Now, I charge my Death Orgons Radiation Flare. Next turn it fires!" Kai cackled. " And It cant fire before it's destroyed! I activate Ring of Magnetism, on My mirror! I order Alpha to attack! His Magnet sword meets magnet ring, and dispels one big Magnetic blast. I activate Turbine of Power, to power up Rebel of Set by 400 . The Turbines charge moves the Blast to Death Orgon! One Metal Plate is stripped, and Now, Rebel of Set will attack the innards! Because all power is at the cannon, Death Orgon implodes! The beam is released, But I'll defend with Mirror Force!" Dylan shouted. " And Reflect the attack at what's left of the Orgon!" The scrap heap was incinerated. " You.destroyed my baby!" Kai screamed.
" And a good portion of your life points. Face it, I'm a lot better than I even gave myself credit for. Now to finish you. Make your move." Dylan ground out, features tightening. " You'll pay! I play Time Wizard, In defense mode!" Kai growled. " Huh? That makes little sense. Oh well. Rebel of Set, Attack Time Wizard, now!" Dylan shouted. " Not quite. I must have discovered The Rebel of Set's weakness before you. Take a look." Kai grinned. " What?!" Dylan yelled. The Rebel was smoking, his attack having just blown up in his face. " Observe. Rebel of Set is a rebel, therefore, he never learned to control his power. All I need is to place an avid spellcaster on the field, no matter how weak, and I can do the controlling for him!!!"
" Oh no!! You turned his attack against him! How could I have been so ignorant to something that obvious! Yami never would have made that mistake." Dylan slumped to the floor. " I figured that just by the way he attacked Death Orgon he was winging it. One huge blast instead of a focused spell. In lamens terms, He loses all his powers when someone who knows this weakness plays a true spellcaster." Kai laughed. " And now, with that small a point count, you have little hope." He cackled.
" Damnit! All that work, and he loses to the Rebel's only weakness. Wait, he still has 250. Pull something, man!" Yami shouted. "Wait. Kai and the Rebel share the same weakness. Zero control. He loads his deck with the best of the best, and if he truly got how to use them, Orgon would have beat the rebel. He could have won, but he showed he didn't know anything about ulterior powers, such as the optional Trap Paralysis of The Rebel, usable once per duel. Dylan finds a loophole, and he can finish this!"
To be continued
Note: Thanks to Time Mage, I'm revamping my duels, if you like my new way of doing things, please so yay or nay. Peace! ( P.S. To Time Mage, I took that weakness thing to heart)
" Aaaaaargh!" Yami cried. " What's up?" Kevin said, noticing the pained look on the Dark Apparition. " Dylan. something is wrong. His energy is drained, and he has lost all confidence. He needs me!" Yami said, anger dominating his carefree features. He grabbed the biker jacket with the Millenium Pendant on it ( He needs to be with it to maintain physical presence.) and ran out the door. " Where are you, man." He muttered. He tried his best to locate his hikari, but the energy was to different from the one he was used to. " So, Dylan. I've failed. I can't be there to bail you out, like with Laura. But I can give you your hope for salvation! Spirit Form, Now!" Yami shouted, and become a true apparition.
" Really, Nasakki. You beat me last time. Why can't you pull yourself together?" Kai cackled. This was fresh. His nemesis, whom he had expected to be at least steadfast, was slumped against his rail. " I have no hope of winning now. Please accept my sur." Dylan was about to utter his surrender, when a golden light impacted. " What the he." He began, but another voice, from deep within started to speak. The voice spoke, " Dylan, I would merge with you, but fate tells me to let you fight this yourself. Since you have no hope, I'll give you mine!" Dylan glew with a white light, and when it cleared, he was back, as a warrior, ready for battle. " OK, Kai. Time to cripple that mechanized nightmare." He said. ' Alright. I can't attack. I can't hope to win, even with me powered up. And all magic goes back at me, thanks to that metal. Wait! Rules say that Machines are protected by METAL PLATES THAT COVER THERE BODIES! Loophole! If I can strip him of just one plate, and get at whats inside, He'll lose his Orgon for sure!' Dylan thought. " I play Swords of Revealing Light! And two cards face down." He announced.
"Got your act together. Good. One card face down. And Alpha, The magnet warrior, in defense mode." Kai shouted. " Death orgon may be restricted for now, but the countdown to your destruction is near. " I draw. And play fiend mirror, plus metal morph on it's mirror!" Dylan cried, and the mirror gained a gray shine. " Another sword ticks away. I play amplifier, on Alpha. I end my turn. " I draw, play one card face down, and end my turn.
" 1 turn left, so I'll just end." Kai said, smirking. " I do, too." Dylan said, smirking also. " Now, I charge my Death Orgons Radiation Flare. Next turn it fires!" Kai cackled. " And It cant fire before it's destroyed! I activate Ring of Magnetism, on My mirror! I order Alpha to attack! His Magnet sword meets magnet ring, and dispels one big Magnetic blast. I activate Turbine of Power, to power up Rebel of Set by 400 . The Turbines charge moves the Blast to Death Orgon! One Metal Plate is stripped, and Now, Rebel of Set will attack the innards! Because all power is at the cannon, Death Orgon implodes! The beam is released, But I'll defend with Mirror Force!" Dylan shouted. " And Reflect the attack at what's left of the Orgon!" The scrap heap was incinerated. " You.destroyed my baby!" Kai screamed.
" And a good portion of your life points. Face it, I'm a lot better than I even gave myself credit for. Now to finish you. Make your move." Dylan ground out, features tightening. " You'll pay! I play Time Wizard, In defense mode!" Kai growled. " Huh? That makes little sense. Oh well. Rebel of Set, Attack Time Wizard, now!" Dylan shouted. " Not quite. I must have discovered The Rebel of Set's weakness before you. Take a look." Kai grinned. " What?!" Dylan yelled. The Rebel was smoking, his attack having just blown up in his face. " Observe. Rebel of Set is a rebel, therefore, he never learned to control his power. All I need is to place an avid spellcaster on the field, no matter how weak, and I can do the controlling for him!!!"
" Oh no!! You turned his attack against him! How could I have been so ignorant to something that obvious! Yami never would have made that mistake." Dylan slumped to the floor. " I figured that just by the way he attacked Death Orgon he was winging it. One huge blast instead of a focused spell. In lamens terms, He loses all his powers when someone who knows this weakness plays a true spellcaster." Kai laughed. " And now, with that small a point count, you have little hope." He cackled.
" Damnit! All that work, and he loses to the Rebel's only weakness. Wait, he still has 250. Pull something, man!" Yami shouted. "Wait. Kai and the Rebel share the same weakness. Zero control. He loads his deck with the best of the best, and if he truly got how to use them, Orgon would have beat the rebel. He could have won, but he showed he didn't know anything about ulterior powers, such as the optional Trap Paralysis of The Rebel, usable once per duel. Dylan finds a loophole, and he can finish this!"
To be continued
Note: Thanks to Time Mage, I'm revamping my duels, if you like my new way of doing things, please so yay or nay. Peace! ( P.S. To Time Mage, I took that weakness thing to heart)
