Author's notes- Oopsies, I made a mistake. The last chapter was actually
this story's prologue, thus it being shorter than the chapters. This
chapter is the story's actual chapter 1. Confused? Me to! Anyway.
Thank all my reviewers. I'm kinda nervous about writing a Chobits fic.
There aren't many people that read Chobits fics. But anyway. I hope you
like this chapter! And review!!
Chapter one
"Motosuwa! Get your ass in here!!" a voice rang from inside the office.
Hideki Motosuwa, a rookie cop who had recently joined the precinct, yawned and slowly got up. He walked over to where his best friend Shimbo stood. Shimbo, like Hideki, was a rookie cop. But unlike Hideki he actually got a few good assignments. All Hideki had gotten was giving out a parking ticket or two. Shimbo's black hair pointed out messily in different directions giving him an easygoing look. Hideki's dark brown hair was straight and tame. They both had the same dark brown eyes.
"Ha. The Captain wants you. Probably wants you to find a lost little kitty." Shimbo laughed, absolutely loving the fact that Hideki hadn't done anything interesting in a long time.
Hideki frowned and knocked on the Captain's door before entering.
Captain Nekoi was an easygoing cop who always had a toothpick or a cigarette clamped in his mouth.
"Well son. I've got an assignment for you. You need to go check out 457 West Drive. Got a call in saying that there was a persocom body found there recently. Let's see if we can bring her back here and salvage her." Captain Nekoi said through the toothpick.
Hideki sighed and nodded. Although when the occasionally persocom body showed up it was a matter of investigation, but it was nowhere near as important as finding a human body. Investigating a persocom's 'murder' was better than parking tickets, but not by much.
But Hideki didn't mind.
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"455...456...457. Here we are." Hideki said as he pulled up to the building.
Hideki couldn't help the whoa that escaped his mouth. He was standing in front of Advanced Persocoms Inc. or A. P. I. for short. It was an extremely huge building, over one hundred and twenty stories tall. Hideki leaned his head far back to look all the way to the top.
"Hello!!" a female voice called.
Hideki turned around to find a middle-aged woman standing by the entrance. She had short cropped black hair and large brown eyes.
"You're the cop right? The one we called about the persocom?" she asked eyeing him suspiciously.
"Uh. Yeah." Said Hideki, growing nervous under the woman's stare.
"I see. I'm Setsuko Tokimura. And you are?" she held out her hand to Hideki.
Taking her hand and shaking it Hideki simply said, "Officer Hideki Motosuwa at your service."
"Yes, well come this way." She said briskly.
She began to walk toward the nearby alley, and Hideki followed. The woman walked along way until they reached a pile of old newspapers. She pointed and Hideki walked around the pile only to see a young girl on the other side.
The first thing he noticed about the body was how young she looked. Only fifteen or sixteen, with extremely long ivory colored hair. She had pale skin and a peaceful smile on her face.
The second thing Hideki noticed was how undamaged her body was. He Peered around trying to see if there was anything visible wrong. Maybe she had internal injuries, but her frame looked fine.
"She fell from the roof apparently." Setsuko said quietly.
"The roof!?" Hideki shouted, shocked.
He quickly looked back at the body lying on the ground, and then peered up at the top of the building. That fall would rip apart anyone, persocom or no. But this girl looked as though she was just sleeping. But if Setsuko was right then this girl had fallen over 1,600 feet.
"How do you know she fell from the roof?" Hideki asked.
"Look at her body suit. See the rip in her sleeve? That piece that was ripped off was on the roof, stuck on a loose nail." Setsuko said.
Hideki's mouth opened in surprise.
"Well aren't you going to take her or something?" Setsuko asked glancing around.
"What?" Hideki asked, confused.
"Take her. You know, to head quarters or something." Setsuko said impatiently, looking around.
Hideki raised his eyebrows. He had expected that he would be asked to look around, find some clues, dust for fingerprints or something. But this woman was almost asking him to leave, and take the girl with him.
Hideki saw no other option.
He bent down and carefully tried to life the girl, before falling down. He groaned as he tried to lift up the persocom again. She was extremely heavy. He grunted as he finally lifted her up, his knees buckling under him. He swallowed and slowly made his way to his police car. He finally dropped the girl in the back seat, before leaning on the car and sighing heavily.
"Ok thank you for your help." Setsuko said quickly before running inside.
Hideki stared at her retreating form for a minute before shrugging and getting into his police car and driving back to head quarters.
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"Did you do it?" a quiet voice asked.
"Yes." Setsuko whispered.
"And the body?"
"Gone." Setsuko said breathlessly.
"Good." The voice said, before shooting Setsuko in the temple. The owner of the voice smirked; he always got the job done.
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The more and more Hideki thought about, the less and less he liked. He shouldn't have disturbed the crime scene, and he shouldn't have taken this girl. But what could he do now? He couldn't just put her back. But he couldn't go to head quarters because he could get suspended, or fired.
"Oh what am I going to do!" Hideki burst out, savagely banging his steering wheel with his fists.
Hideki sighed. There was only one thing he could do. Lie.
He would just have to pretend that it hadn't happened. That he hadn't found a body, and that this girl hadn't been there. But then what? Would he just keep this girl?
It was all to frustrating.
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Hideki sighed and pulled up to his apartment complex. Preparing himself for another grueling exercise Hideki picked up the persocom. He groaned under her weight but steadily trudged up the stairs to his apartment.
He set her down on the floor, and then collapsed onto his couch. He breathed heavily for a minute before looking down at the persocom lying on his floor.
He blushed as he looked at her thin white body suit.
'ack! I'm not a pervert!' Hideki thought, then looking around his apartment which had porn magazines littered through out it added as an after thought, 'well. Maybe a little.'
He dropped to his knees to examine the girl closer. She had soft pale features, and her long ivory hair shone brightly in the sunlight. She was sure pretty.
Hideki suddenly felt overwhelming guilt. He felt that by not telling anyone about this girl he was betraying her somehow. He pushed his guilt aside and began to try to figure out how to turn her on.
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"Elda! Elda!"
Elda turned and tried to find the voice calling her name, but could see no one in the hazy mist. It was like a dream world. all around Elda was a blue mist that was impossible to see through. She was wearing her Favorite pale blue dress.
"Elda!" the voice called again, though this time much closer.
Elda turned to see a figure in the mist, but couldn't discern the features. But when the voice spoke it was comforting and warm.
"Oh Elda. I'm so sorry. I should never have done it. I'm so sorry about Freya to. I had no right. Please Elda, live a happy life and forget about everything."
"Everything?" Elda repeated slowly, confused.
"Yes." The figure said. Then it began to move closer and Elda could see it was a woman, with long black hair.
Soon the woman was right in front of Elda and even though she was so close to the woman, her facial features were hard to discern through the mist. Finally she recognized her.
"Chi-!" Elda cried, but was cut off by the woman.
"Please never say my name again. Forget everything, and live a happy life." The woman said.
"But I don't want to forget! Forget Freya? Forget you? I couldn't do it!" Elda cried out.
"Oh my poor Elda. Good bye." The woman said sadly. And with surprising speed the woman reached between Elda's legs and quickly pressed the reset button, before Elda could react.
Elda felt dizzy and hazy, like someone was pulling part of her away. But before she lost total consciousness she reached out toward the crying woman with long hair and called out.
"Chi-!"
But before she could finish, Elda became unconscious in the dream world, but woke up in the real world, staring into a pair of big brown eyes.
End of chapter one! Mandy~Chan
Chapter one
"Motosuwa! Get your ass in here!!" a voice rang from inside the office.
Hideki Motosuwa, a rookie cop who had recently joined the precinct, yawned and slowly got up. He walked over to where his best friend Shimbo stood. Shimbo, like Hideki, was a rookie cop. But unlike Hideki he actually got a few good assignments. All Hideki had gotten was giving out a parking ticket or two. Shimbo's black hair pointed out messily in different directions giving him an easygoing look. Hideki's dark brown hair was straight and tame. They both had the same dark brown eyes.
"Ha. The Captain wants you. Probably wants you to find a lost little kitty." Shimbo laughed, absolutely loving the fact that Hideki hadn't done anything interesting in a long time.
Hideki frowned and knocked on the Captain's door before entering.
Captain Nekoi was an easygoing cop who always had a toothpick or a cigarette clamped in his mouth.
"Well son. I've got an assignment for you. You need to go check out 457 West Drive. Got a call in saying that there was a persocom body found there recently. Let's see if we can bring her back here and salvage her." Captain Nekoi said through the toothpick.
Hideki sighed and nodded. Although when the occasionally persocom body showed up it was a matter of investigation, but it was nowhere near as important as finding a human body. Investigating a persocom's 'murder' was better than parking tickets, but not by much.
But Hideki didn't mind.
*************************
"455...456...457. Here we are." Hideki said as he pulled up to the building.
Hideki couldn't help the whoa that escaped his mouth. He was standing in front of Advanced Persocoms Inc. or A. P. I. for short. It was an extremely huge building, over one hundred and twenty stories tall. Hideki leaned his head far back to look all the way to the top.
"Hello!!" a female voice called.
Hideki turned around to find a middle-aged woman standing by the entrance. She had short cropped black hair and large brown eyes.
"You're the cop right? The one we called about the persocom?" she asked eyeing him suspiciously.
"Uh. Yeah." Said Hideki, growing nervous under the woman's stare.
"I see. I'm Setsuko Tokimura. And you are?" she held out her hand to Hideki.
Taking her hand and shaking it Hideki simply said, "Officer Hideki Motosuwa at your service."
"Yes, well come this way." She said briskly.
She began to walk toward the nearby alley, and Hideki followed. The woman walked along way until they reached a pile of old newspapers. She pointed and Hideki walked around the pile only to see a young girl on the other side.
The first thing he noticed about the body was how young she looked. Only fifteen or sixteen, with extremely long ivory colored hair. She had pale skin and a peaceful smile on her face.
The second thing Hideki noticed was how undamaged her body was. He Peered around trying to see if there was anything visible wrong. Maybe she had internal injuries, but her frame looked fine.
"She fell from the roof apparently." Setsuko said quietly.
"The roof!?" Hideki shouted, shocked.
He quickly looked back at the body lying on the ground, and then peered up at the top of the building. That fall would rip apart anyone, persocom or no. But this girl looked as though she was just sleeping. But if Setsuko was right then this girl had fallen over 1,600 feet.
"How do you know she fell from the roof?" Hideki asked.
"Look at her body suit. See the rip in her sleeve? That piece that was ripped off was on the roof, stuck on a loose nail." Setsuko said.
Hideki's mouth opened in surprise.
"Well aren't you going to take her or something?" Setsuko asked glancing around.
"What?" Hideki asked, confused.
"Take her. You know, to head quarters or something." Setsuko said impatiently, looking around.
Hideki raised his eyebrows. He had expected that he would be asked to look around, find some clues, dust for fingerprints or something. But this woman was almost asking him to leave, and take the girl with him.
Hideki saw no other option.
He bent down and carefully tried to life the girl, before falling down. He groaned as he tried to lift up the persocom again. She was extremely heavy. He grunted as he finally lifted her up, his knees buckling under him. He swallowed and slowly made his way to his police car. He finally dropped the girl in the back seat, before leaning on the car and sighing heavily.
"Ok thank you for your help." Setsuko said quickly before running inside.
Hideki stared at her retreating form for a minute before shrugging and getting into his police car and driving back to head quarters.
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"Did you do it?" a quiet voice asked.
"Yes." Setsuko whispered.
"And the body?"
"Gone." Setsuko said breathlessly.
"Good." The voice said, before shooting Setsuko in the temple. The owner of the voice smirked; he always got the job done.
********************
The more and more Hideki thought about, the less and less he liked. He shouldn't have disturbed the crime scene, and he shouldn't have taken this girl. But what could he do now? He couldn't just put her back. But he couldn't go to head quarters because he could get suspended, or fired.
"Oh what am I going to do!" Hideki burst out, savagely banging his steering wheel with his fists.
Hideki sighed. There was only one thing he could do. Lie.
He would just have to pretend that it hadn't happened. That he hadn't found a body, and that this girl hadn't been there. But then what? Would he just keep this girl?
It was all to frustrating.
************************
Hideki sighed and pulled up to his apartment complex. Preparing himself for another grueling exercise Hideki picked up the persocom. He groaned under her weight but steadily trudged up the stairs to his apartment.
He set her down on the floor, and then collapsed onto his couch. He breathed heavily for a minute before looking down at the persocom lying on his floor.
He blushed as he looked at her thin white body suit.
'ack! I'm not a pervert!' Hideki thought, then looking around his apartment which had porn magazines littered through out it added as an after thought, 'well. Maybe a little.'
He dropped to his knees to examine the girl closer. She had soft pale features, and her long ivory hair shone brightly in the sunlight. She was sure pretty.
Hideki suddenly felt overwhelming guilt. He felt that by not telling anyone about this girl he was betraying her somehow. He pushed his guilt aside and began to try to figure out how to turn her on.
**************************
"Elda! Elda!"
Elda turned and tried to find the voice calling her name, but could see no one in the hazy mist. It was like a dream world. all around Elda was a blue mist that was impossible to see through. She was wearing her Favorite pale blue dress.
"Elda!" the voice called again, though this time much closer.
Elda turned to see a figure in the mist, but couldn't discern the features. But when the voice spoke it was comforting and warm.
"Oh Elda. I'm so sorry. I should never have done it. I'm so sorry about Freya to. I had no right. Please Elda, live a happy life and forget about everything."
"Everything?" Elda repeated slowly, confused.
"Yes." The figure said. Then it began to move closer and Elda could see it was a woman, with long black hair.
Soon the woman was right in front of Elda and even though she was so close to the woman, her facial features were hard to discern through the mist. Finally she recognized her.
"Chi-!" Elda cried, but was cut off by the woman.
"Please never say my name again. Forget everything, and live a happy life." The woman said.
"But I don't want to forget! Forget Freya? Forget you? I couldn't do it!" Elda cried out.
"Oh my poor Elda. Good bye." The woman said sadly. And with surprising speed the woman reached between Elda's legs and quickly pressed the reset button, before Elda could react.
Elda felt dizzy and hazy, like someone was pulling part of her away. But before she lost total consciousness she reached out toward the crying woman with long hair and called out.
"Chi-!"
But before she could finish, Elda became unconscious in the dream world, but woke up in the real world, staring into a pair of big brown eyes.
End of chapter one! Mandy~Chan
