Disclaimer: I-do-not-own-Spirited-Away.
Author's Note: well considering the comments I have been getting from some of my stories (AKA. He loves meNOT! or Sugar is Sweet but Blood Tastes Better) it seems that very few have commented about how they hate what I'm doing. I thank the others for supporting me but now I think that I should write a more "nicer" thing.
However, you should note that, I SUCK AT WRITING ROMANCE STORIES, so that's many why I write the opposite to it. So yeah. Plz Rate and Review.
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Breath for the First Time
Chapter one: Spiritual Ending
As I tried to turn around, to see my love for one last time, I remember his last words to me.
"Don't look back."
Curious I was since I wanted to see him. Those emerald eyes and hushed words always comforted me when in despair. I loved him, but I knew I must depart. My time here had ended and I could no longer see my friends. I paused in my footsteps breathing the air one last time before running into the shadows where my parents awaited me.
"Come on Chihiro."
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The dark tunnel traveled on and on forever until the dawning of the light emerged from the horizon before us. My parents looked confident at leaving while I still had a yearning to stay. Though, they didn't remember, oh no, they couldn't. They were pigs and I saved them. Yet, I felt happy that they didn't know for all this could leave permanent damage to their minds.
"Chihiro stop clinging like that," spoke my mother, "your gong to make me trip."
Finally escaping the cylinder confinement, light broke out around us. Daylight sizzled along my skin as I squinted to see the surrounding forest area. Before us all though was the car. However not the same way it was when we had left it. Leaves scattered along the windshield while the staining of water on the glass drew hazy.
"Is this someone's idea of a joke?"
This was all I could catch from my father's speech before turning around and gazing back at the tunnel. Haku..Haku..why do I have to leave you? I stared back hoping that something might happen. Like in one of those happily ever after movies where true love runs back to the other, embracing in a tight hug while cherry blossom petals fly past the two. But no, not here, I waited with some sign of hope but nothing came.
"Come on Chihiro! We're going to be late."
"Coming."
As I scrambled into the car my mother asked me something.
"A new school, a new home, are you sure you can handle it?"
"I'm sure," I spoke back with a delighted voice.
It was true. I found it so easy to make friends here so why would it be so hard in my world? A slight jolt zapped through my heart as I remember what Haku told me.
*** "Will I ever see you again?" I asked. ***
*** "I'm sure of it." ***
But when? Why couldn't I stay in your world Haku? I have friends there even a job, so why? As I pondered over these questions, my father backed his car away from the forest drifting slowly from where my heart had laid itself.
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Author's Note: I hope some people are happy now. See? I'm not all against the no chihiro and haku thing, I just find it a bit difficult to understand why there are so many romance stories. Oh well. I'm hopeless. Yes I know I'm hopeless. Well R&R.
Author's Note: well considering the comments I have been getting from some of my stories (AKA. He loves meNOT! or Sugar is Sweet but Blood Tastes Better) it seems that very few have commented about how they hate what I'm doing. I thank the others for supporting me but now I think that I should write a more "nicer" thing.
However, you should note that, I SUCK AT WRITING ROMANCE STORIES, so that's many why I write the opposite to it. So yeah. Plz Rate and Review.
*************
Breath for the First Time
Chapter one: Spiritual Ending
As I tried to turn around, to see my love for one last time, I remember his last words to me.
"Don't look back."
Curious I was since I wanted to see him. Those emerald eyes and hushed words always comforted me when in despair. I loved him, but I knew I must depart. My time here had ended and I could no longer see my friends. I paused in my footsteps breathing the air one last time before running into the shadows where my parents awaited me.
"Come on Chihiro."
*************
The dark tunnel traveled on and on forever until the dawning of the light emerged from the horizon before us. My parents looked confident at leaving while I still had a yearning to stay. Though, they didn't remember, oh no, they couldn't. They were pigs and I saved them. Yet, I felt happy that they didn't know for all this could leave permanent damage to their minds.
"Chihiro stop clinging like that," spoke my mother, "your gong to make me trip."
Finally escaping the cylinder confinement, light broke out around us. Daylight sizzled along my skin as I squinted to see the surrounding forest area. Before us all though was the car. However not the same way it was when we had left it. Leaves scattered along the windshield while the staining of water on the glass drew hazy.
"Is this someone's idea of a joke?"
This was all I could catch from my father's speech before turning around and gazing back at the tunnel. Haku..Haku..why do I have to leave you? I stared back hoping that something might happen. Like in one of those happily ever after movies where true love runs back to the other, embracing in a tight hug while cherry blossom petals fly past the two. But no, not here, I waited with some sign of hope but nothing came.
"Come on Chihiro! We're going to be late."
"Coming."
As I scrambled into the car my mother asked me something.
"A new school, a new home, are you sure you can handle it?"
"I'm sure," I spoke back with a delighted voice.
It was true. I found it so easy to make friends here so why would it be so hard in my world? A slight jolt zapped through my heart as I remember what Haku told me.
*** "Will I ever see you again?" I asked. ***
*** "I'm sure of it." ***
But when? Why couldn't I stay in your world Haku? I have friends there even a job, so why? As I pondered over these questions, my father backed his car away from the forest drifting slowly from where my heart had laid itself.
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Author's Note: I hope some people are happy now. See? I'm not all against the no chihiro and haku thing, I just find it a bit difficult to understand why there are so many romance stories. Oh well. I'm hopeless. Yes I know I'm hopeless. Well R&R.
