Yeah the next chapter joy for all!! (note: its taking me awhile to realize I was spelling Koenma's name wrong…… whhhaaahhhh)

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"what?! Who is this?!!" Suchi yelled in the phone.

"oh come on its Koenma"

"Koenma? Oh, I thought you were some evil demon or something. What is it you want?" Suchi asked calming down.

"is Suiren still there?"

"huh? Suiren? No she left some time ago why?"

"her life is in grave danger, you most find her at once and take her to Yusuke!"

"what?! Why is she in danger what's going on?!!!" Suchi started yelling again losing the calmness.

"why yes I should tell you that shouldn't I? Well you see we got news that some demon thieves were after her to use her powers"

"her powers? She really doesn't have any useable powers does she?"

"her only power she knows how to use is the opening of portals between the human, demon, and spirit worlds, and she can trap a person's soul in a stone, and as you can see that is a problem." Koenma said in a I know all tone.

"so she's a Gate Keeper like Itsuki. That explains how she can disappear, but why would anyone want to use her?" Suchi said sitting down waiting for Koenma answer.

"its not that she can open the portals, that fact she can take souls makes her very, how should I put it, it makes her very strong you could say, and she's only a half demon. Plus she's becoming a spirit detective."

"but if she's only a half demon why would they want her alive?"

"its-"

"hello? Koenma? Hello???!! Shit not good I have to find Suiren before its to late" Suchi got up ran down stairs and ran out the door.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~going to Hiei now~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"where are you going?" Yusuke asked as he watch Hiei getting ready.

"im going to the makai for a bit" Hiei answered heading for the door.

"um ok have fun I guess" Yusuke watched as Hiei walked out the door "wonder what he's up to"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~time to go to Suiren~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"okasan???!!!! Oniisan???!!!! Hello???????!!!!!!!!!!! Where is this?" Suiren made her way thru a dark forest "Oniisan where are you????"

"hey kid where did you come from? You shouldn't be here you know" Hiei said walking up behind Suiren.

"huh? Who are you and where are we?" Suiren asked turning around to see who was talking to her.

"first off tell me how a ningen go to the makai and is still alive?" Hiei said stepping closer to the girl "why aren't you dead yet"

"nani? Who the hell are you? Tell me!!!" Suiren yelled at Hiei stepping back.

"hn, stupid ningen. If you most know my name is Hiei. Now tell me how you got here"

"Hiei? Your Hiei?!" Suiren said stepping closer.

"hn? You know who I am?"

"well no, but my oniisan does!" Suiren yelled grabbing his hand.

"hn, your oniisan? And who is this oniisan?" Hiei asked taking his hand back from Suiren.

"oh, lets see his name is Suchi, but he use to be a guy name Kurama, ep! don't think I should have told you that" Suiren said turning around to run away from Hiei.

"Ku, did you say Kurama?" Hiei said grabbing her before she could go to far "tell me is that what you said!"

"I, cant say! Akeru Mon!!!" yelled disappearing leaving Hiei behind.

"wha?! How did she do that?"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~back to Suiren~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"great that was a smart move now im more lost then I was to begin with" Suiren said looking around to make sure she had made it back to the human world "at least im home"

Crush "huh? Great company" she jumped up in a tree getting out of the way of a sword "damn it"

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~joy song fic timey~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

'Dead I am the one, Exterminating son'

"come on out show your self ass hole!!!!" Suiren yelled into the woods pulling out a small knife.

"kukukuku, stupid girl now die!!!!!" a huge demon came out of the woods heading straight at her.


'Slipping through the trees, strangling the breeze'

"Great" Suiren jumped from the tree making a run for it.


'Dead I am the sky, watching angels cry'

"kukukuku take this!" the demon thru scrolls at Suiren.


'As they slowly turn, conquering the worm'

"eh? Shit!!!!!! Akeru Mon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"no use your power wont work now, you see the scrolls seal your power. Now time to die!" the demon pulled out a sword and thru it at Suiren.


'Dig through the ditches,
Burn through the witches'

"not good not good" Suiren jumped got of the way.


'I slam in the back of my
Dragula'

But before she could make a run for it the demon hit her in the back sending her into a tree.


'Dig through the ditches,
Burn through the witches'

"Now you cant run from me any more"


'I slam in the back of my
Dragula'

Suiren's eyes opened suddenly "what! Your awake!"

"Jaou Ensatsu Koku Ryu Ha!!!"

"what the AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!"


'Dead I am the pool, spreading from the fool
Weak and want you need, nowhere as you bleed'

"what was that?" Suiren asked getting up

"good your alive"


'Dead I am the rat, feast upon the cat
Tender is the fur, dying as you purr'

"huh? Ehhh? Hiei what are you doing here???"

" I followed you" Hiei said picking her up and making a run for it.


'Dig through the ditches,
Burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my
Dragula'

"Nani???????? Hey I know how to walk!" Suiren yelled as she was carried off.


'Dig through the ditches,
Burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my
Dragula'

"hn, your to slow and there's more coming"


'Do it baby, Do it baby'

"great. Um Hiei LOOK OUT!!" but it was to late. They were hit by a huge blast which sent Hiei into a tree and Suiren into the ground.


'Do it baby, Do it baby'

"owwwww, that really smarts" Suiren tried to get up but couldn't.

'Burn like an animal'

"die little girl!!!!" said a shadow and a huge blast came out if no where heading towards Suiren.

"Kekkai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"


'Dead I am the life, dig into the skin
Knuckle crack the bone, 21 to win'

"hn, good work but you can get up now"


'Dead I am the dog, hound of hell you cry
Devil on your back, I can never die'

"huh" she looked around all the demons that where after them where dead "oh, um did I do that?"


'Dig through the ditches,
Burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my
Dragula'

"hn, no! all you did was put up a barrier. I did the rest"


'Dig through the ditches,
Burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my
Dragula'

"oh, thanks" she stood up "um, I think im gonna go now" Suiren started to walk off.


'Do it baby, Do it baby'

"I don't think so" Hiei grabbed her hand.

"nani?"

'Do it baby, Do it baby'

"im going to teach you how to really fight"


'Burn like an animal'

"NANI????"


'Dig through the ditches,
Burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my
Dragula'

"as you can see your very popular and you need to learn to protect yourself" Hiei let go of her and began walking away.


'Dig through the ditches,
Burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my
Dragula'

"huh? But? OI!!!"


'Dig through the ditches,
Burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my
Dragula'

"great, he's gone" Suiren started for home not knowing if Hiei was serious about teaching her how to fight or not.

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The ending sux yeah, oh well to bad.