A/N: Hi. Thank you for taking the time to look at my fan-fic. I'm new at this and I would like to know if someone could tell me what a "Flame" is. The frist chapter is the shortist one of all the chapters I've written so far. Please review. Anyway, here's the frist chapter, the Disclaimer, and the "About the cast".
Disclaimer: I don't own Zoids and proubley never will, unless the people who own it
have a nervous break down and go crazy and just hand it over to me. But I do own a few of the characters.
About the cast:
Raven: A 22-year-old boy with raven black hair who has a reputation of destroying towns and bases. He has a dark organoyd named Shadow. He has a Zoid called the Geno Breaker that is very powerful. He has an archenemy named Van Fly height.
Van Fly height: A 22-year-old boy with blackish-brownish hair who has a silver organoyd named Zeek. He has a Zoid called the Blade Liger with a strong blade attack. He is a lieutenant of the republic and a member of the guardian force and is considered a zoid hero.
Moonbay: A 27-year-old girl with brown hair who drives a gusttafe and sings weird songs. She is known to annoy people sometimes.
Fiona: A 22-year-old girl with blond hair who was found in a pod when she was 17 by Van Fly Height. She is an ancient zoiden and can tell if a zoid if powerful enough to destroy planet Z.
Ervin: A 27-year-old boy with dark brown hair who saved Van and Fiona when they were 17. He tried to steal Zeek a few times but failed. He turned good but some times he still treats Van like dirt. He had a command wolf but Raven destroyed it in an attempt to destroy the Geno Breaker. Now, thanks to Dr.De. (More on him later) he has a lighting sikes.
Colonel Shoe bolts: He is a colonel of the empire and has a little brother who is a member of the guardian force.
Tomes: A 22-year-old boy with blondish-brownish hair who has a crush on Fiona and is jealous of Van. He is a lieutenant of the empire and a member of the guardian force and has an older brother who is a colonel in the empire. He has an AI called Beek and a Debison.
Dr. De: An old scientist who some times is a real pain but can be counted on when Van and his friends need help. (Most of the time)
Hilts: A 22-year-old boy with red hair. He has a red organoyd named emben and is an enemy, like Raven, of Van. He is not one of Raven's favorite people.
Reses: A 22-year-old girl with blue hair and a blue organoyd named Spektcule. She is also known as the Blue Devil. She once tried to kill Raven. She is another enemy of Van. She is, just like Fiona, an ancient zoiden.
Jess: A 10-year-old girl with light brown hair who fights with her 9-year-old brother a lot. She like to do thing right and try's to keep her brother out of trouble.
AJ: A 9-year-old boy with brown hair who like's getting into trouble and like's bugging his older sister.
He Can't be Gone! By Yami Shiloh
CHAPTER 1: A Run From the guardian force.
"He went that way!" a voice shouted from across the river. Raven was running away from the guardian force and had had to swim across the river. "Shadow, hurry up!" Raven yelled at his organoyd, "Get a move on it! They're gaining on me!"
Shadow was trying to get Raven out of there, but every time he tried to the guardian force would shoot at him.
"Hurry Ervin! Were gaining on him!" said Van. "Yeah I know," Ervin said, "But it worries me that Shadow is trying to get him. I'll keep a eye on Shadow."
"RRRRAAAAOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!" Shadow roared as he tried again to get raven, but Ervin shot at him again. "Shadow! Come on! Get me the heck out of here!" Raven shouted up to shadow. "Rrraaaooo!!!" Shadow gave one last try and just as Ervin shot at him there was a click. "Darn! I'm out of ammo!" Shadow had picked raven up and was taking him to a cave that was nearby.
"Took you long enough." Raven said to shadow, "Were did you put the Geno Breaker?" Shadow went to the front of the cave and pointed towards the forest. "We'll set up camp here. Then we'll see if there's a city nearby."
A/N: Did you like it? I hope so. The next chapter will be up soon. Untill next time, Bye!
