I decided to update.....Ummm yeah, anyways!
Sixstars thanks for giving me the idea to use flashbacks that'll work GREAT!
And to lead to less confusing story writing/reading Im gonna do this-
Instead of writing Magnet in Squids Body Im gonna write M/S ok? So Squid in Magnets Body will be S/M.
Just keep that in mind...
EnJoY
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The other D-tent boys gave Magnet and Squid a blank stare. X-ray shook his head,
"Lets just get to bed,"He whispered as he walked and got into his cot.
"Yeah, I've had enough excitement for one day,"Zig added as he did the same. Squid and Magnet stared at eachother, then looked opposite ways, everytime they looked at eachother it scared them to know it was themselves. Magnet went to lay down, still trembling at the thought of being Squid. Squid was in disbelief, his mind raced through different reasons on how this is impossible, But he knew if he looked in the mirror he'd see Magnet.
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The morning horn blazed loudly outside, all the boys shook and got up imediatly. They were tired, more then usual. When Magnet opened his eyes he was hoping to be himself, but as soon as he looked at his hands, and felt his head he knew he wasn't. The boys dragged themselves out of the tent and grabbed thier shovels, Squid and Magnet wouldn't look at eachother, everytime they would a shiver went down thier spine.
"Are you guys feeling alright today?"A rather awake Zigzag asked them. They just glared at him saying nothing, they didn't want to hear thier own voices.
"Alrighty then, see ya out on the lake!"Zig answered as he started to walk away.
No one understood what happened to them, they were stuck in the wierdest situation and had no idea how to get out...
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The boys were digging for about an hour and a half, they we're already too tired to start and now its even worse, to hard to end.
"Its all your guys fault,"Said a angry X-ray, pointing directly at Mag and Squid.
"If you guys didn't start such a HUGE thing yesterday, we would've got more sleep."X-ray dropped his shovel and picked up his canteen.
"Shutup,"S/M answered. X-ray stared at him.
"What?!"He asked."Don't get me mad, Magnet..."He whispered.
"I ALREADY TOLD YOU IM SQUID!"He yelled but with every word he said he had a deeper hispanic accent. There was nothing he could do about that, M/S looked at X.
"Yeah, Im Magnet.."He looked back down at the shovel he was holding, then up at the Hot, cloudless sky. He was dazed and looked out into the desert...
~~~~~~~Flashback~~~~
Magnet all of a sudden found himself in a strange bedroom in a wierd house. He looked down at his hands and clothes, he was tiny, and Squid he guessed. Magnet started to walk around the room, he thought that if he was a little kid, where was all the toys? It was a really cruddy, small room. The window was nailed shut but it was freazing, the only inviting thing was the tiny, bed with a old, ratted quilt and little toy octopus. It was definetly a bed for a 6 yearold. All of a sudden he heard a thud and crash, someone was coming upstairs. The door flew open and a woman came in. She was holding a liquor bottle in one hand and a cigarette in the other.
"Alan, get your butt over here, NOW!"The woman angrily yelled as she walked towards him. Magnet backed away he was getting scared now,
"Whats wrong with you, you stupid boy!GET OVER HERE!!!"She screamed at him. Magnet just stared at her wide eyed. She walked over and swung the bottle at the 6 year olds head. He dodged but, she ended up grabbing his arm.
"WHAT?Are you too good for your own mother NOW?! Are you?!"She hissed in his face and then threw him to the ground violently. Magnet couldn't help but cry, this was horrible...was this really Squids mom? She gave the crying boy the finger, then left.
~~~~End Flashback~~~~
Magnet fealt water hit his face and was released from his daydream.
"Hey water trucks here,"He heard X-ray say as he noticed that the water that hit him was the last of the water from his canteen. He got up and walked to the water line, and noticed they were pushing S/M which they thought was Magnet.
"Get back to your spot!"They yelled as they continued to push him.
"Im trying to if you stop pushing me!"He yelled back.
"Your spots back there!"Zig yelled at "Magnet".
"NO ITS NOT! IM SQUID!!!!"
They just stared at him and shook thier heads and turned around to get water. M/S body walked up and got in 3rd place in line, just like he always wanted to. But now it didn't seem as great..as he expected it to.
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So whatta ya think?
IS IT GOOD???? COMMENTS!
I need help....
Ok well I betta go...
ByEs
Sixstars thanks for giving me the idea to use flashbacks that'll work GREAT!
And to lead to less confusing story writing/reading Im gonna do this-
Instead of writing Magnet in Squids Body Im gonna write M/S ok? So Squid in Magnets Body will be S/M.
Just keep that in mind...
EnJoY
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The other D-tent boys gave Magnet and Squid a blank stare. X-ray shook his head,
"Lets just get to bed,"He whispered as he walked and got into his cot.
"Yeah, I've had enough excitement for one day,"Zig added as he did the same. Squid and Magnet stared at eachother, then looked opposite ways, everytime they looked at eachother it scared them to know it was themselves. Magnet went to lay down, still trembling at the thought of being Squid. Squid was in disbelief, his mind raced through different reasons on how this is impossible, But he knew if he looked in the mirror he'd see Magnet.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The morning horn blazed loudly outside, all the boys shook and got up imediatly. They were tired, more then usual. When Magnet opened his eyes he was hoping to be himself, but as soon as he looked at his hands, and felt his head he knew he wasn't. The boys dragged themselves out of the tent and grabbed thier shovels, Squid and Magnet wouldn't look at eachother, everytime they would a shiver went down thier spine.
"Are you guys feeling alright today?"A rather awake Zigzag asked them. They just glared at him saying nothing, they didn't want to hear thier own voices.
"Alrighty then, see ya out on the lake!"Zig answered as he started to walk away.
No one understood what happened to them, they were stuck in the wierdest situation and had no idea how to get out...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The boys were digging for about an hour and a half, they we're already too tired to start and now its even worse, to hard to end.
"Its all your guys fault,"Said a angry X-ray, pointing directly at Mag and Squid.
"If you guys didn't start such a HUGE thing yesterday, we would've got more sleep."X-ray dropped his shovel and picked up his canteen.
"Shutup,"S/M answered. X-ray stared at him.
"What?!"He asked."Don't get me mad, Magnet..."He whispered.
"I ALREADY TOLD YOU IM SQUID!"He yelled but with every word he said he had a deeper hispanic accent. There was nothing he could do about that, M/S looked at X.
"Yeah, Im Magnet.."He looked back down at the shovel he was holding, then up at the Hot, cloudless sky. He was dazed and looked out into the desert...
~~~~~~~Flashback~~~~
Magnet all of a sudden found himself in a strange bedroom in a wierd house. He looked down at his hands and clothes, he was tiny, and Squid he guessed. Magnet started to walk around the room, he thought that if he was a little kid, where was all the toys? It was a really cruddy, small room. The window was nailed shut but it was freazing, the only inviting thing was the tiny, bed with a old, ratted quilt and little toy octopus. It was definetly a bed for a 6 yearold. All of a sudden he heard a thud and crash, someone was coming upstairs. The door flew open and a woman came in. She was holding a liquor bottle in one hand and a cigarette in the other.
"Alan, get your butt over here, NOW!"The woman angrily yelled as she walked towards him. Magnet backed away he was getting scared now,
"Whats wrong with you, you stupid boy!GET OVER HERE!!!"She screamed at him. Magnet just stared at her wide eyed. She walked over and swung the bottle at the 6 year olds head. He dodged but, she ended up grabbing his arm.
"WHAT?Are you too good for your own mother NOW?! Are you?!"She hissed in his face and then threw him to the ground violently. Magnet couldn't help but cry, this was horrible...was this really Squids mom? She gave the crying boy the finger, then left.
~~~~End Flashback~~~~
Magnet fealt water hit his face and was released from his daydream.
"Hey water trucks here,"He heard X-ray say as he noticed that the water that hit him was the last of the water from his canteen. He got up and walked to the water line, and noticed they were pushing S/M which they thought was Magnet.
"Get back to your spot!"They yelled as they continued to push him.
"Im trying to if you stop pushing me!"He yelled back.
"Your spots back there!"Zig yelled at "Magnet".
"NO ITS NOT! IM SQUID!!!!"
They just stared at him and shook thier heads and turned around to get water. M/S body walked up and got in 3rd place in line, just like he always wanted to. But now it didn't seem as great..as he expected it to.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
So whatta ya think?
IS IT GOOD???? COMMENTS!
I need help....
Ok well I betta go...
ByEs
