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Thanks for people that reviewed. Here r the answers:
ice princess:
it was very good so far
thanks a lot for support. By the way, you're my first reviewer .: CONGRATULATIONS :.
bottle*of*sunshine
Hello, I think this needs some work. It needs to be MUCH longer and the structure should be... more explanatory. This all seems too quick. BUT, I like your pairings and I think this is a good idea.
~Josie
Thanks, Josie. I changed a lot the previous chapters amd I made them much longer.
DragonsFly
This is a good start, but there are some puntuation mistakes that you might want to fix. Also, it might take awhile to get ten reviews,my fics dont get that many reviews until I've written, like, four chapters, so you might want to update sooner.
Could you please point the mistakes out, cos I'm really bad at grammar. And i'm also very dumb.
Serpent du feu
Very interesting! Please write longer chapters next time.
Kindly follow the simple instructions below so you ll get MORE reviews and also so I don t have to sign-in next time cuz I m really lazy! *LOL*
1-Log in from the home page
2-Click on SETTINGS (1st option on the left)
3-Uncheck the box next to Do Not Accept Unsigned Reviews
4-Click the Save Settings button at the bottom of the page to enter changes
Merci beaucoup, cher serpent du feu. I DID write longer chapters and I also added some paragraphs to the previous chapters. And I DID follow ure instructions. Now you can send anonimous reviews. I am very lazy as well so t'was a big sacrifice for me. But I still DID IT!!
SilverBunnie
o... GOOD! I like the plot.. but I'm wondering what will happen to the guys. hehe this will turn out to be a good story!
Want a secret: the guys will be dead!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA He he ...he .....he. Kidding. The truth is that I'm NOT TELLING YOU. I know, I'm evil. But I like it!!!
Thanks for people that reviewed. Here r the answers:
ice princess:
it was very good so far
thanks a lot for support. By the way, you're my first reviewer .: CONGRATULATIONS :.
bottle*of*sunshine
Hello, I think this needs some work. It needs to be MUCH longer and the structure should be... more explanatory. This all seems too quick. BUT, I like your pairings and I think this is a good idea.
~Josie
Thanks, Josie. I changed a lot the previous chapters amd I made them much longer.
DragonsFly
This is a good start, but there are some puntuation mistakes that you might want to fix. Also, it might take awhile to get ten reviews,my fics dont get that many reviews until I've written, like, four chapters, so you might want to update sooner.
Could you please point the mistakes out, cos I'm really bad at grammar. And i'm also very dumb.
Serpent du feu
Very interesting! Please write longer chapters next time.
Kindly follow the simple instructions below so you ll get MORE reviews and also so I don t have to sign-in next time cuz I m really lazy! *LOL*
1-Log in from the home page
2-Click on SETTINGS (1st option on the left)
3-Uncheck the box next to Do Not Accept Unsigned Reviews
4-Click the Save Settings button at the bottom of the page to enter changes
Merci beaucoup, cher serpent du feu. I DID write longer chapters and I also added some paragraphs to the previous chapters. And I DID follow ure instructions. Now you can send anonimous reviews. I am very lazy as well so t'was a big sacrifice for me. But I still DID IT!!
SilverBunnie
o... GOOD! I like the plot.. but I'm wondering what will happen to the guys. hehe this will turn out to be a good story!
Want a secret: the guys will be dead!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA He he ...he .....he. Kidding. The truth is that I'm NOT TELLING YOU. I know, I'm evil. But I like it!!!
