The little note down below will be in every part. So don't complain about
it please!
This is not a PG-13 story.it does have sex in it. A lot of you have all ready read it. I've changed the point of view to 3rd person if you haven't noticed, I wasn't happy with the 1st person point of view. I'll leave it as PG-13 until I get to the sex parts. So you might want to start checking the 'R's.
Second note: LANGUAGE is going to be showing itself a lot more, --err I think anyhow. I'm not exactly sure when the rating will be changed, but all the readers will get a head up! Enjoy!
Part Four:
"Wow, this place looks kind of freaky," Kia said as she really looked at the place for the first time.
There was a huge black iris on the sign with a vine of thorns running around it. It looked like a haunted mansion.
*It could collapse any moment. *
It looked really unsteady.
"Isn't this supposed to be the club of the century? Like the best one around the world?" Gia asked looking at in horror.
"Yeah," said Lilac with a funny look on her face.
"What's wrong? And why is it so quite?" Kia asked
"Nothing I just wondered how you two knew that. You'll see that it isn't so quiet inside," Lilac informed.
They opened the huge door.
It was metal! A dark, not black, but close enough, like a metallic color. It wasn't shiny, but a little tarnished. Kia guessed that was the word for it. She expected to go right into the dance floor, or through security, but that wasn't the case at all. There was a steep staircase that spiraled down. It was like eight flights of stairs put together, long ways to go. On the way down, there were a whole lot of, what looked like, pictures from a long while ago. There was a man in them and a girl. Father and daughter, I'm guessing. They were so beautiful. Beautiful wasn't even the word. Kia didn't think there was a word for what these people look likes, the owners most likely.
"I didn't realize that it was possible for humans to look like that!" Kia said out loud.
"Maybe not for humans," Lilac murmured.
"What was that Lil?" asked Gia.
"Oh, nothing," she smirked.
"How much longer, anyway?" Gia asked impatiently.
Right when she said that they ran into yet another metal door that looked exactly the same as the one that they had entered in. Except for one thing, there was like an ancient writing or something on the door. It was formed into a picture what looked like a cat fang or something and the last of the words were below the fang. They formed what looked like a drop of blood or a teardrop. From the picture Kia made the assumption that it was a drop of blood.
She walked up to the door and reached for the doorknob, but soon found out there wasn't any.
"How are we supposed to get in?" Kia asked, "There's no door handle."
"Knock three times," Lilac told her.
"Okay," Kia shrugged.
She knocked three times and yanked her hand back, for the force of her knock and her hand encountering the door had stung. A little slot at eye view flew open. Scaring Kia and Gia so that they jumped back with their hands over their chests.
"Password?" said this funny looking fellow with beady black eyes.
"Password?!" Kia said confused.
"Trinity," said Lilac.
"Hey Lilac, didn't see you there. Who've you got with you," said the beady- eyed guy with interest as he opened the gigantic door.
"Not for you Ulf," Lilac said disgustedly.
"I was just asking their names," he said in a squeaky, scared voice.
"I'm Kia," she stuck out a hand to shake his.
"Ulf," the guy smiled in a way that made Kia extremely uncomfortable.
She yanked her hand out of his and walked to catch up with Gia and Lilac.
Whoa, that guys voice was annoying. As Kia caught up with Gia and Lilac, she suddenly remembered what she was wearing and wrapped her arms, self- consciously, around her stomach.
*I need to find Nick. * She thought to herself and then became confused at it.
They walked through the door and bright, bright lights, and the sound of blaring music met them. Whoa, they were so bright; the music was loud as well. Pounding. It was raw, hard music, the kind you can just go wild with. Kia had a feeling she'd go deaf for a couple of days after this.
People were all over the place. There wasn't a spot that you could go with out being crowded. As they walked in further the lights were brighter and more colorful. Smoke was everywhere, like a haze of it over their heads. She could practically see it rising.
Another thing Kia realized, was that these people were unearthly beautiful, and so young. Kia looked at Lilac and realized that she was just like her brother and Nick, just like the rest of the people in the club. Lilac had shiny black hair, with eyes that were like a yellow blue. Her body was perfect. Nice and curvy. Her lips were a blood red and her skin was extremely pale.
Fabian didn't look much different except that he was a male. He had the hair and the eyes. Nice face too, but pale. Nick was the opposite of Fabian and Lilac, but still he held the unearthly beauty. He had hair that was all sorts of colors, gold, blonde, brown, and red. His eyes were amazing. They were a metallic green with little gray specks dotted in them. Nice sculpted body.
Just as Kia was finishing her thinking, which seems impossible in this place, someone wrapped there very, very, very strong arms around my waist and whispered in my ear.
"Wanna dance angel?" flowed a slow seductive voice.
Thank God it was Nick.
"Depends," Kia smiled and laid the back of her head on his shoulder.
"On what?" He tightened his arms around her waist.
"On you letting me get into your jacket so I don't feel so naked," Kia said with desperation.
"What?" he asked in confusion.
"I feel really uncomfortable. Can I borrow you and your coat?" Kia emphasized her meaning.
"How exactly shall we do that?" he said in an awkward voice, not sure of what she wanted.
"Like this..." Kia started to show him what she meant.
She turned towards him, opened his coat, turned back around, slipped her arms inside the sleeves, with his arms still in it, placed her backside against his front side, when she did this she could have sworn she heard Nick grunt in pleasure, men, (shakes head disapprovingly), and zipped it up over both of them.
Gia was looking at her friend in amusement.
"You are completely nuts!" she laughed could over the crowd.
"What? I can't hear you," Kia hollered back.
"She said, 'You are completely nuts.'" said Nick in my ear.
"Not really, I just don't like the feeling of being naked in a big crowd," Kia screamed back at her.
To Nick, Kia asked, " Are you okay with this?"
"I'm very okay with this," he said in a husky voice.
"Please tell me that's a flash light?" Kia groaned.
"Not a chance," he spoke with full-blown humor in his voice.
"Well, you're going to have to deal with it until I'm comfortable. Just don't rub against me," Kia said smiling.
"What the hell are you guys doing?" said Fabian as he walked over to them.
"Don't ask," said Gia coming up behind him.
Kia unzipped the jacket and flashed Fabian with what she was wearing.
Fabian choked. "Damn!"
He tried to get another look, but Kia had zipped it back up.
"I'm envious!" he spoke to Nick who smiled wildly, "Hey Gia, want to get in my coat?"
To Be Continued.
This story is extremely cheesy, so when you review don't be too harsh 'kay?!
This is not a PG-13 story.it does have sex in it. A lot of you have all ready read it. I've changed the point of view to 3rd person if you haven't noticed, I wasn't happy with the 1st person point of view. I'll leave it as PG-13 until I get to the sex parts. So you might want to start checking the 'R's.
Second note: LANGUAGE is going to be showing itself a lot more, --err I think anyhow. I'm not exactly sure when the rating will be changed, but all the readers will get a head up! Enjoy!
Part Four:
"Wow, this place looks kind of freaky," Kia said as she really looked at the place for the first time.
There was a huge black iris on the sign with a vine of thorns running around it. It looked like a haunted mansion.
*It could collapse any moment. *
It looked really unsteady.
"Isn't this supposed to be the club of the century? Like the best one around the world?" Gia asked looking at in horror.
"Yeah," said Lilac with a funny look on her face.
"What's wrong? And why is it so quite?" Kia asked
"Nothing I just wondered how you two knew that. You'll see that it isn't so quiet inside," Lilac informed.
They opened the huge door.
It was metal! A dark, not black, but close enough, like a metallic color. It wasn't shiny, but a little tarnished. Kia guessed that was the word for it. She expected to go right into the dance floor, or through security, but that wasn't the case at all. There was a steep staircase that spiraled down. It was like eight flights of stairs put together, long ways to go. On the way down, there were a whole lot of, what looked like, pictures from a long while ago. There was a man in them and a girl. Father and daughter, I'm guessing. They were so beautiful. Beautiful wasn't even the word. Kia didn't think there was a word for what these people look likes, the owners most likely.
"I didn't realize that it was possible for humans to look like that!" Kia said out loud.
"Maybe not for humans," Lilac murmured.
"What was that Lil?" asked Gia.
"Oh, nothing," she smirked.
"How much longer, anyway?" Gia asked impatiently.
Right when she said that they ran into yet another metal door that looked exactly the same as the one that they had entered in. Except for one thing, there was like an ancient writing or something on the door. It was formed into a picture what looked like a cat fang or something and the last of the words were below the fang. They formed what looked like a drop of blood or a teardrop. From the picture Kia made the assumption that it was a drop of blood.
She walked up to the door and reached for the doorknob, but soon found out there wasn't any.
"How are we supposed to get in?" Kia asked, "There's no door handle."
"Knock three times," Lilac told her.
"Okay," Kia shrugged.
She knocked three times and yanked her hand back, for the force of her knock and her hand encountering the door had stung. A little slot at eye view flew open. Scaring Kia and Gia so that they jumped back with their hands over their chests.
"Password?" said this funny looking fellow with beady black eyes.
"Password?!" Kia said confused.
"Trinity," said Lilac.
"Hey Lilac, didn't see you there. Who've you got with you," said the beady- eyed guy with interest as he opened the gigantic door.
"Not for you Ulf," Lilac said disgustedly.
"I was just asking their names," he said in a squeaky, scared voice.
"I'm Kia," she stuck out a hand to shake his.
"Ulf," the guy smiled in a way that made Kia extremely uncomfortable.
She yanked her hand out of his and walked to catch up with Gia and Lilac.
Whoa, that guys voice was annoying. As Kia caught up with Gia and Lilac, she suddenly remembered what she was wearing and wrapped her arms, self- consciously, around her stomach.
*I need to find Nick. * She thought to herself and then became confused at it.
They walked through the door and bright, bright lights, and the sound of blaring music met them. Whoa, they were so bright; the music was loud as well. Pounding. It was raw, hard music, the kind you can just go wild with. Kia had a feeling she'd go deaf for a couple of days after this.
People were all over the place. There wasn't a spot that you could go with out being crowded. As they walked in further the lights were brighter and more colorful. Smoke was everywhere, like a haze of it over their heads. She could practically see it rising.
Another thing Kia realized, was that these people were unearthly beautiful, and so young. Kia looked at Lilac and realized that she was just like her brother and Nick, just like the rest of the people in the club. Lilac had shiny black hair, with eyes that were like a yellow blue. Her body was perfect. Nice and curvy. Her lips were a blood red and her skin was extremely pale.
Fabian didn't look much different except that he was a male. He had the hair and the eyes. Nice face too, but pale. Nick was the opposite of Fabian and Lilac, but still he held the unearthly beauty. He had hair that was all sorts of colors, gold, blonde, brown, and red. His eyes were amazing. They were a metallic green with little gray specks dotted in them. Nice sculpted body.
Just as Kia was finishing her thinking, which seems impossible in this place, someone wrapped there very, very, very strong arms around my waist and whispered in my ear.
"Wanna dance angel?" flowed a slow seductive voice.
Thank God it was Nick.
"Depends," Kia smiled and laid the back of her head on his shoulder.
"On what?" He tightened his arms around her waist.
"On you letting me get into your jacket so I don't feel so naked," Kia said with desperation.
"What?" he asked in confusion.
"I feel really uncomfortable. Can I borrow you and your coat?" Kia emphasized her meaning.
"How exactly shall we do that?" he said in an awkward voice, not sure of what she wanted.
"Like this..." Kia started to show him what she meant.
She turned towards him, opened his coat, turned back around, slipped her arms inside the sleeves, with his arms still in it, placed her backside against his front side, when she did this she could have sworn she heard Nick grunt in pleasure, men, (shakes head disapprovingly), and zipped it up over both of them.
Gia was looking at her friend in amusement.
"You are completely nuts!" she laughed could over the crowd.
"What? I can't hear you," Kia hollered back.
"She said, 'You are completely nuts.'" said Nick in my ear.
"Not really, I just don't like the feeling of being naked in a big crowd," Kia screamed back at her.
To Nick, Kia asked, " Are you okay with this?"
"I'm very okay with this," he said in a husky voice.
"Please tell me that's a flash light?" Kia groaned.
"Not a chance," he spoke with full-blown humor in his voice.
"Well, you're going to have to deal with it until I'm comfortable. Just don't rub against me," Kia said smiling.
"What the hell are you guys doing?" said Fabian as he walked over to them.
"Don't ask," said Gia coming up behind him.
Kia unzipped the jacket and flashed Fabian with what she was wearing.
Fabian choked. "Damn!"
He tried to get another look, but Kia had zipped it back up.
"I'm envious!" he spoke to Nick who smiled wildly, "Hey Gia, want to get in my coat?"
To Be Continued.
This story is extremely cheesy, so when you review don't be too harsh 'kay?!
