Korean as One: hi reviewers! If you're not a reviewer, then get the f***
outta my site yo. Jkjk, you can stay anyways. Oh well, hope you liked the
second chapter as well as the first. I got the poll results of both reviews
and E-mails, and the winner is... (drumroll)....TOO BAD! MWAHAHAHHA! I'M
NOT GOING TO TELL YOU NOW, YOU HAVE TO WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CAPTER!!!!! I'M
SO EVIL MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
Everybody in the room with around Kao 012: (anime sweatdrop)
Kao 012: I'm just kidding, again. The results are at the bottom thingie. By the way, I don't own yugioh. Oh! I have two ideas for an ending. One is all sad and depressing (tragedy) and the other is a happy ending, where good stuff start to happen. I'm going to let the ppl vote again, once more. In a review or E-mail, write if you want a happy ending or a sad ending. This poll closes whenever I'm writing the....maybe around the tenth chapter, I think. It depends on how long I make the last chapters.
Yugi: and how long the chapters are all depend on how many reviews Kao 012 gets
Kao 012: by the way, this IS a Marik-abuses-Malik fic. The first chapter is just a flashback/dream of when Malik was a little kid (awwwwwwww~ Malik is soooo cute as a chibi)
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(Malik's POV) (well no duh that it's Malik's POV, it's HIS dream)
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....Emptiness.
There was nothing here. Nothing except for the darkness and the floor. Literally. There was nothing here except for the floor and the shadows. It was pretty dark, but still light enough so that I could still see. Wait....
I started to hear something. Coming from my right, it stopped, then a sound came from my left. Then both of them together. They sounded like footsteps. Now I heard another pair of footsteps coming from behind me. All of a sudden it just stopped. There was no more noise. I felt something on my neck. Something kind of sharp just landed in the back of my neck. As it lifted itself up, I felt something else, something liquidey running down my back. There was a lot of it too, and it wouldn't stop.
Still I felt no pain. In fact, I didn't even feel anything at all, physically at least. Emotionally was a different story. All of a sudden I felt extremely cold. My head started swirling with all my memories of abuse. I felt very depressed, but I didn't even know what I was so sad about. There was screaming coming from the back of my head, telling it to stop. I thought to myself, "Stop what?"
Then, all of a sudden, there was a sharp pain in my chest, in my heart. It burned as it froze my body. I was numb, I now had no feeling left in me. From far away, I heard my own voice, except that it was a little deeper in pitch than normal. I looked towards the source of the sound, but I saw nothing. There was no one there.
".....Malik!!!!..."
There it was again, I heard my own voice say my own name. Then I heard a laugh. Not a good laugh, an evil laugh (like mwahahahaha) It seemed to echo throughout the whole room or whatever, but how can that be? There was nothing for the sound waves to bounce off of. Like I said, there were no walls, or any objects, just the floor and darkness. But then, I heard my voice again from far away, except that this time, it was clear. I could hear the words that they were saying (or that I was saying) perfectly. It sounded like I heard it both mentally and physically. There was also something else different. This time the voice was whispering to me.
"Malik, I'm sorry....I promised, but I failed..."
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Kao 012: liked it? If u did, them why don't you leave a review? Also, sorry about the long authors notes thingie again, but for the top one I had to put the poll, and for the bottom, somebody asked a question and I have to put the results for the previous poll
Yugi: which one was the winner for the poll thingie?
Kao 021: it was.... (secondary drumroll)...
Here are the results: (nobody voted for the humor ones so they were left out)
Malik/angst: 1
Yugi/angst: 2
Bakura/angst: 3
Ryou/angst: 4 (everybody loves Ryou! Yay! Even if this one didn't win, I was going to write a Ryou angst story soon anyways)
Kao 012: ok, um, one vote was added for each angst because somebody voted for: ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST AND MORE ANGST!! CANNOT GET ENOUGH ANGST!!
Joey: Don't forget to vote for what type of ending you want for this story! And there is no such thing as No Ending unless I vote for No Ending! Byee byeee!
Yugi: wait!!!!! You forgot that somebody has a question!
Kao 012: huh?
Silverwulf: Why are they ('they' being Yugi and Ryou) in a pool? In December? I'm just a little confused. You'll probably explain next chapter
Kao 012: yeah, that's going to be explained in the next chapter, when Malik wakes up. Or regains conscience. Whatever.
Yugi: ok, and one more.
Silverwulf: Malik's father did have a use for him. He needed an heir, and since he was a little sexist, the heir needed to be male. Which meant not Isis. Erm, at least, that's what I think happened. Please correct me if I'm wrong. (Which I probably am)
Kao 012: well, I wouldn't know. I watch kids WB, and they haven't even shown the episode in which Joey battles Yami yet. YET. Besides, if you got it from the mangas, I don't have any, so I really don't know. By the way, sorry for this chapter being so short, even though I got a lot of reviews (if the votes are counted as reviews) but, the first chapter in the Ryou angst story is EXTREMELY long, and in case you don't like the Ryou story, then I'll make the chapter after the next one long. ok?
Everybody in the room with around Kao 012: (anime sweatdrop)
Kao 012: I'm just kidding, again. The results are at the bottom thingie. By the way, I don't own yugioh. Oh! I have two ideas for an ending. One is all sad and depressing (tragedy) and the other is a happy ending, where good stuff start to happen. I'm going to let the ppl vote again, once more. In a review or E-mail, write if you want a happy ending or a sad ending. This poll closes whenever I'm writing the....maybe around the tenth chapter, I think. It depends on how long I make the last chapters.
Yugi: and how long the chapters are all depend on how many reviews Kao 012 gets
Kao 012: by the way, this IS a Marik-abuses-Malik fic. The first chapter is just a flashback/dream of when Malik was a little kid (awwwwwwww~ Malik is soooo cute as a chibi)
^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^.^. ^.^.^.^.^.^
(Malik's POV) (well no duh that it's Malik's POV, it's HIS dream)
(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)(=)
....Emptiness.
There was nothing here. Nothing except for the darkness and the floor. Literally. There was nothing here except for the floor and the shadows. It was pretty dark, but still light enough so that I could still see. Wait....
I started to hear something. Coming from my right, it stopped, then a sound came from my left. Then both of them together. They sounded like footsteps. Now I heard another pair of footsteps coming from behind me. All of a sudden it just stopped. There was no more noise. I felt something on my neck. Something kind of sharp just landed in the back of my neck. As it lifted itself up, I felt something else, something liquidey running down my back. There was a lot of it too, and it wouldn't stop.
Still I felt no pain. In fact, I didn't even feel anything at all, physically at least. Emotionally was a different story. All of a sudden I felt extremely cold. My head started swirling with all my memories of abuse. I felt very depressed, but I didn't even know what I was so sad about. There was screaming coming from the back of my head, telling it to stop. I thought to myself, "Stop what?"
Then, all of a sudden, there was a sharp pain in my chest, in my heart. It burned as it froze my body. I was numb, I now had no feeling left in me. From far away, I heard my own voice, except that it was a little deeper in pitch than normal. I looked towards the source of the sound, but I saw nothing. There was no one there.
".....Malik!!!!..."
There it was again, I heard my own voice say my own name. Then I heard a laugh. Not a good laugh, an evil laugh (like mwahahahaha) It seemed to echo throughout the whole room or whatever, but how can that be? There was nothing for the sound waves to bounce off of. Like I said, there were no walls, or any objects, just the floor and darkness. But then, I heard my voice again from far away, except that this time, it was clear. I could hear the words that they were saying (or that I was saying) perfectly. It sounded like I heard it both mentally and physically. There was also something else different. This time the voice was whispering to me.
"Malik, I'm sorry....I promised, but I failed..."
???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Kao 012: liked it? If u did, them why don't you leave a review? Also, sorry about the long authors notes thingie again, but for the top one I had to put the poll, and for the bottom, somebody asked a question and I have to put the results for the previous poll
Yugi: which one was the winner for the poll thingie?
Kao 021: it was.... (secondary drumroll)...
Here are the results: (nobody voted for the humor ones so they were left out)
Malik/angst: 1
Yugi/angst: 2
Bakura/angst: 3
Ryou/angst: 4 (everybody loves Ryou! Yay! Even if this one didn't win, I was going to write a Ryou angst story soon anyways)
Kao 012: ok, um, one vote was added for each angst because somebody voted for: ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST ANGST AND MORE ANGST!! CANNOT GET ENOUGH ANGST!!
Joey: Don't forget to vote for what type of ending you want for this story! And there is no such thing as No Ending unless I vote for No Ending! Byee byeee!
Yugi: wait!!!!! You forgot that somebody has a question!
Kao 012: huh?
Silverwulf: Why are they ('they' being Yugi and Ryou) in a pool? In December? I'm just a little confused. You'll probably explain next chapter
Kao 012: yeah, that's going to be explained in the next chapter, when Malik wakes up. Or regains conscience. Whatever.
Yugi: ok, and one more.
Silverwulf: Malik's father did have a use for him. He needed an heir, and since he was a little sexist, the heir needed to be male. Which meant not Isis. Erm, at least, that's what I think happened. Please correct me if I'm wrong. (Which I probably am)
Kao 012: well, I wouldn't know. I watch kids WB, and they haven't even shown the episode in which Joey battles Yami yet. YET. Besides, if you got it from the mangas, I don't have any, so I really don't know. By the way, sorry for this chapter being so short, even though I got a lot of reviews (if the votes are counted as reviews) but, the first chapter in the Ryou angst story is EXTREMELY long, and in case you don't like the Ryou story, then I'll make the chapter after the next one long. ok?
