This is my first fic on here. I've written others, but not put them on here. If you don't like it that's your fault, but if you do review it. And I'm always open for suggestions.
Disclaimer: I don't own Zoids



The lone Gun Sniper approached a small village. "That should do," the pilot said to himself. He then hid his Zoid in a grove of trees. He didn't want to cause any trouble.

"Just one?" the hotel clerk asked writing something on a piece of paper.

"Yeah. Can I get a room away from everyone else? I'm on vacation and just want some peace."

"Sure. Here you go. Room 21. It's on the top floor at the back of the hotel," the clerk said handing him a key.

"Thanks," the man said paying.

The mysterious man walked up the stairs and found his room. Just as the clerk said, at the back of the hotel. He entered and took off his brown coat revealing the silver gun under his jacket. He then sat on the bed and took off his boots and was asleep in a few minutes.

Meanwhile five Rev-Raptors appeared over the cliff overlooking the village. "Miguel are we going to attack now or in the morning," a man said in one of the Rev-Raptor.

"Yeah. We can get in close and do more damage."

"Umm…Miguel why are we doing this again?"

"If I tell you once more Donny I promise I'll beat your ass so bad you won't be able to sit for a week. That rich guy's son is in this village. If we can get our hands on him his daddy will pay so much for his safe return."

On the other side of the village Raymond Wells (A/N: this is the rich kid) rolled over fast asleep unaware of the threat to kidnap him. His butler was in the other bed snoring too also unaware of the plan to kidnap Raymond.
So what do you think? My first chapter and don't forget to review. I also need some characters. So leave your character's name, age, Zoid(be reasonable), and something on the personality.