Hello everyone? How ya doin'? This is the 10th chapter of T2P. Thanks everyone for your reviews, the good and the bad ones as always.
As for the reviewer who said my grammar sucked, I'd like to see him/her write a story in a foreign language. It's hard, you know? But I have no other choice as there is not a fan fiction site in Spanish. And if my grammar makes your eyes hurt with pain, why did you keep reading? I really don't think I would have died if you hadn't reviewed.
Now my dear readers don't think I can't accept a bad commentary, but it really pisses me off when I'm doing my best on writing in a language that's not mine and someone just comes and says: "okay, your grammar sucks!" or "you should have written two instead of 2"
Another thing, thanks for making me see my mistake on the quidditch score, I'll correct it soon, k? The same goes with Deamus, I think I meant Seamus right? J
Sorry if this chapter is a little short, but it's like a bridge between what has happened and what will take place later.
Please keep reviewing guys!
Hermione Weasley
TRIP TO PARADISE
Chapter 10: Agents Longbottom, Brown and Thomas: your plan succeeded.
"Well, your plan is great Lav, but you don't expect Josh to leave and never come back, do you? And what are you telling Hermione?"- Parvati asked her.
"Oh, well, I hadn't thought about this before"- Lavender said gloomy.
"Oh, don't worry, we'll think of something. Anyway, while Harry and I were in the lift, you know, when he thought I was sick, I heard some guys saying there was going to be a bonfire on Friday night in the beach, that's today, and it sounded pretty cool, there's going to be live music, food, everything; everyone in The Wiz will be there, or so I heard. What do you think?"- Ginny asked Lavender and Parvati.
"It sounds great, really, but if everyone knows about this bonfire, don't you think Josh and company will know about it too?"- Lavender asked her.
"Well, yes but, by that time Ron must have asked Hermione, right?"-Ginny said with a half smile, not completely sure that Ron would be able to be that fast.
"Maybe, but we won't be able to stop Josh from speaking to her, and then she'll know everything we planned. And you know who will be paying for all this disaster? Ron. You know Hermione, she'll feel betrayed, hurt and worst of all, fooled. And you know little Ronnie doesn't like being nagged so, how is this going to end?"- Parvati asked them.
"Fight"- both Ginny and Lavender said at the same time.
In that moment, the five boys got into the room.
"Hey hey, what happens"- Ginny asked them and their nervous faces.
"He's here."- Harry told them.
"You know guys, let's stop this. If Hermione wants to go with that prat, let it happen, okay?"- Ron told everyone.
"Oh will you shut up Weasley? Let's go. Dean, Neville, you know what to do. See you later."- Lavender said and the stormed out of the room.
"Hey Josh"- Dean said when he saw him in the lobby.
"You are Hermione's friends, aren't you?"- Josh asked Dean and Neville.
"Yeah, we are. We wanted to ask you something, actually, it's Neville here who needs the favor."- Dean told Josh while Neville nodded.
"Sure, but, could you hurry up a little, I'm picking Hermione up in 5 minutes."- Josh said.
"The thing is Josh, I'm a- I'm a- squib. I'm leaving school and I want everyone to know it, including Hermione. I know you two have a date and I'm sorry for having to ask you this but, please, don't take Hermione away right know. This is so hard for me to say, I don't want to do it twice. You can see her tomorrow, after all, we're not leaving until Sunday."- and with this words, Neville ended his performance. Josh was looking downwards and seemed like he was thinking deeply about what Neville had just said.
"Okay, okay, but promise me you will tell her I was really sick and it was impossible for me to come, so Ben, my friend, came here and told you this. And tell her I'll see her tomorrow morning, okay?"- Josh said uneasily, disappointed after his perfect date was frustrated.
"I promise you we'll do that. And thank you Josh."- Dean said.
"Never mind"- Josh said, and some seconds later, said good-bye and left.
"Hi Lav, where are the others?"- Hermione asked Lavender after she got into the room. She was looking at herself in the mirror, straightening for the tenth time her skirt.
"Wow Mione! You look gorgeous, girl!"- Lavender said before answering her question. – "The others are in the boys' room, deciding where to go tonight. Right now they were talking about a bonfire in the beach."
"A bonfire? That sounds great! Maybe I'll ask Josh to go there so we could hang out with my and his friends at the same time. What do you think? And by the way, do I look good on this? Don't you think it's too short?"- Hermione asked, pointing at her black mini skirt.
"Mione, that skirt is great, when did you get it? I wish I would have got one, too. And it's not too short, it's a mini, they're so "in" right now and- oh, wait; someone is knocking."- she said and opened the door.
"Oh, it's you, Neville; are we going to the bonfire or the pub or what?"- Lavender asked as naturally as she could.
"I don't know, I was going to buy some butterbeers from the bar in the lobby when Ben, remember Ben, Josh's friend?, well he recognized me as Hermione's friend and told me Josh wouldn't be able to come because he was sick, then asked me to tell you that, Hermione. He also said he would be here in the morning to apologize personally." – Neville told the two girls.
"He's sick? Well, I guess I'll see him in the morning, but I won't lie to you, I was really looking forward to going to the dolphin pond he was talking about."- Hermione said a little disappointed. –"Anyway, let's go upstairs and see what we're doing tonight, shall we?
"Where's Dean?"- Lavender asked Neville really silently when Hermione started looking for something in her purse.
Neville raised a finger gesturing he was upstairs with everybody and Lavender raised her thumb, grinning.
"That must be Neville with the other girls."- Dean said, after someone knocked the door.
"Hey guys"- Hermione said not realizing some pairs of eyes were staring at her stunned.
"Ron, you're drooling all over your shirt"- Ginny told jokingly, in a voice so low only Harry and Ron could hear it. Harry started snickering.
"Oh shut up you two"- Ron said blushing a little.
"So, ready to party or what?"- Hermione asked them, before seating in the bed between Ron and Ginny, apparently in a very good mood once again; and so she told everyone what had happened with Josh, not aware that everyone in the room knew the story better then she did.
Ron was shifting uncomfortably in the bed while Hermione told them about something Ron wasn't paying much attention too; her legs were not a bad sight and the fact that she was wearing a very little skirt didn't help much either. "I'm taking a shower. I won't take long, okay?"- and so Ron went to get his bag and took it into the bathroom, happy to have found an excuse to run away from than pair of legs before something nasty happened.
When Hermione finished telling them what had happened, and when they finally decided what to do it was almost nine o'clock.
"Gosh, is that the time? I need to take a shower!" Lavender said a little alarmed; she loved having time to take a good relaxing bath, then change her clothes over ten times until she could find something nice, then put on some make-up, basically, it took a while until she was ready to go out.
"Oh no Lav, I'll go first"- Parvati said – "I want to be ready before twelve, and with you that's not possible."
"Sorry girls, but the younger ones go first"- Ginny said, and with that she stepped out of the bed and ran towards her room.
"In the name of water-saving and time-saving I think Patil and I should make an effort and shower together, what do you think?" – Seamus said jokingly.
"You wish, baby"- Parvati said as everyone laughed hysterically. After that, she gave Seamus a soft kiss and left to her room.
In that moment Ron got out of the bathroom wearing only a pair of shorts he had just bought in Hogsmeade.
"Has anyone seen my blue shirt?"- he asked everyone.
Hermione tried hard not to see him, but failed. She couldn't help but notice his abs were a little tanned and maybe Josh's body was better, but she couldn't complain at all. She was thankful, though, that any of the girls were there anymore. Any of them, specially Ginny, would have read her thoughts instantly.
"I think Ginny was wearing your shirt when she left to her room."- Harry said and headed towards the bathroom. - "My turn"
"Are you sure she took it?"- Ron yelled to Harry who was already in the bathroom.
"Yeah"- Harry answered, his voice muffled by the sound of the running water.
"Hermione, how do you get to your room?"- Ron asked.
"See, you have to take the staircase on your left, then there's a lift on you right side who will take you to the 5th floor, then you take the first aisle to the left and then you look for room 234, got it?"- Hermione asked, but after watching Ron's very puzzled face, she said: "Or I could go with you if you want, after all, I need to change this shoes, they're killing me."
"Sounds much better"- Ron said, and both of them left the room.
"Let's see if little Ron puts himself together this time. The chances he has had. The courage? We'll see that."- Dean said while Neville and Seamus nodded in agreement.
"So Mione, are you sad because you're not going with Josh tonight?"- Ron asked when they were waiting for the lift
"Well, sad is not the word, but I won't deny it would have been fun. Why do you ask?"- Hermione told him.
"Just to know if you know, if you'd rather be with him than with me, I mean, with all of us." – Ron said insecurely.
"Come on Ron, you and Harry are my best friends, I'd rather be with you than with anyone else and you know that."- In that moment the lift opened and they got in.
"Hermione?"- Ron asked nervous putting his hands on her shoulders, looking directly to her eyes.
"Would you go with me to the Blue Bay tomorrow night?"
------Well, not exactly a cliffhanger, right? C'mon, you know what she's going to say, don't you? Please review and tell me what you think, k? I don't know when the next chapter will be up, but I promise it's gonna be a good one. I'll hurry up anyway. Please review guys!!
H Weasley
As for the reviewer who said my grammar sucked, I'd like to see him/her write a story in a foreign language. It's hard, you know? But I have no other choice as there is not a fan fiction site in Spanish. And if my grammar makes your eyes hurt with pain, why did you keep reading? I really don't think I would have died if you hadn't reviewed.
Now my dear readers don't think I can't accept a bad commentary, but it really pisses me off when I'm doing my best on writing in a language that's not mine and someone just comes and says: "okay, your grammar sucks!" or "you should have written two instead of 2"
Another thing, thanks for making me see my mistake on the quidditch score, I'll correct it soon, k? The same goes with Deamus, I think I meant Seamus right? J
Sorry if this chapter is a little short, but it's like a bridge between what has happened and what will take place later.
Please keep reviewing guys!
Hermione Weasley
TRIP TO PARADISE
Chapter 10: Agents Longbottom, Brown and Thomas: your plan succeeded.
"Well, your plan is great Lav, but you don't expect Josh to leave and never come back, do you? And what are you telling Hermione?"- Parvati asked her.
"Oh, well, I hadn't thought about this before"- Lavender said gloomy.
"Oh, don't worry, we'll think of something. Anyway, while Harry and I were in the lift, you know, when he thought I was sick, I heard some guys saying there was going to be a bonfire on Friday night in the beach, that's today, and it sounded pretty cool, there's going to be live music, food, everything; everyone in The Wiz will be there, or so I heard. What do you think?"- Ginny asked Lavender and Parvati.
"It sounds great, really, but if everyone knows about this bonfire, don't you think Josh and company will know about it too?"- Lavender asked her.
"Well, yes but, by that time Ron must have asked Hermione, right?"-Ginny said with a half smile, not completely sure that Ron would be able to be that fast.
"Maybe, but we won't be able to stop Josh from speaking to her, and then she'll know everything we planned. And you know who will be paying for all this disaster? Ron. You know Hermione, she'll feel betrayed, hurt and worst of all, fooled. And you know little Ronnie doesn't like being nagged so, how is this going to end?"- Parvati asked them.
"Fight"- both Ginny and Lavender said at the same time.
In that moment, the five boys got into the room.
"Hey hey, what happens"- Ginny asked them and their nervous faces.
"He's here."- Harry told them.
"You know guys, let's stop this. If Hermione wants to go with that prat, let it happen, okay?"- Ron told everyone.
"Oh will you shut up Weasley? Let's go. Dean, Neville, you know what to do. See you later."- Lavender said and the stormed out of the room.
"Hey Josh"- Dean said when he saw him in the lobby.
"You are Hermione's friends, aren't you?"- Josh asked Dean and Neville.
"Yeah, we are. We wanted to ask you something, actually, it's Neville here who needs the favor."- Dean told Josh while Neville nodded.
"Sure, but, could you hurry up a little, I'm picking Hermione up in 5 minutes."- Josh said.
"The thing is Josh, I'm a- I'm a- squib. I'm leaving school and I want everyone to know it, including Hermione. I know you two have a date and I'm sorry for having to ask you this but, please, don't take Hermione away right know. This is so hard for me to say, I don't want to do it twice. You can see her tomorrow, after all, we're not leaving until Sunday."- and with this words, Neville ended his performance. Josh was looking downwards and seemed like he was thinking deeply about what Neville had just said.
"Okay, okay, but promise me you will tell her I was really sick and it was impossible for me to come, so Ben, my friend, came here and told you this. And tell her I'll see her tomorrow morning, okay?"- Josh said uneasily, disappointed after his perfect date was frustrated.
"I promise you we'll do that. And thank you Josh."- Dean said.
"Never mind"- Josh said, and some seconds later, said good-bye and left.
"Hi Lav, where are the others?"- Hermione asked Lavender after she got into the room. She was looking at herself in the mirror, straightening for the tenth time her skirt.
"Wow Mione! You look gorgeous, girl!"- Lavender said before answering her question. – "The others are in the boys' room, deciding where to go tonight. Right now they were talking about a bonfire in the beach."
"A bonfire? That sounds great! Maybe I'll ask Josh to go there so we could hang out with my and his friends at the same time. What do you think? And by the way, do I look good on this? Don't you think it's too short?"- Hermione asked, pointing at her black mini skirt.
"Mione, that skirt is great, when did you get it? I wish I would have got one, too. And it's not too short, it's a mini, they're so "in" right now and- oh, wait; someone is knocking."- she said and opened the door.
"Oh, it's you, Neville; are we going to the bonfire or the pub or what?"- Lavender asked as naturally as she could.
"I don't know, I was going to buy some butterbeers from the bar in the lobby when Ben, remember Ben, Josh's friend?, well he recognized me as Hermione's friend and told me Josh wouldn't be able to come because he was sick, then asked me to tell you that, Hermione. He also said he would be here in the morning to apologize personally." – Neville told the two girls.
"He's sick? Well, I guess I'll see him in the morning, but I won't lie to you, I was really looking forward to going to the dolphin pond he was talking about."- Hermione said a little disappointed. –"Anyway, let's go upstairs and see what we're doing tonight, shall we?
"Where's Dean?"- Lavender asked Neville really silently when Hermione started looking for something in her purse.
Neville raised a finger gesturing he was upstairs with everybody and Lavender raised her thumb, grinning.
"That must be Neville with the other girls."- Dean said, after someone knocked the door.
"Hey guys"- Hermione said not realizing some pairs of eyes were staring at her stunned.
"Ron, you're drooling all over your shirt"- Ginny told jokingly, in a voice so low only Harry and Ron could hear it. Harry started snickering.
"Oh shut up you two"- Ron said blushing a little.
"So, ready to party or what?"- Hermione asked them, before seating in the bed between Ron and Ginny, apparently in a very good mood once again; and so she told everyone what had happened with Josh, not aware that everyone in the room knew the story better then she did.
Ron was shifting uncomfortably in the bed while Hermione told them about something Ron wasn't paying much attention too; her legs were not a bad sight and the fact that she was wearing a very little skirt didn't help much either. "I'm taking a shower. I won't take long, okay?"- and so Ron went to get his bag and took it into the bathroom, happy to have found an excuse to run away from than pair of legs before something nasty happened.
When Hermione finished telling them what had happened, and when they finally decided what to do it was almost nine o'clock.
"Gosh, is that the time? I need to take a shower!" Lavender said a little alarmed; she loved having time to take a good relaxing bath, then change her clothes over ten times until she could find something nice, then put on some make-up, basically, it took a while until she was ready to go out.
"Oh no Lav, I'll go first"- Parvati said – "I want to be ready before twelve, and with you that's not possible."
"Sorry girls, but the younger ones go first"- Ginny said, and with that she stepped out of the bed and ran towards her room.
"In the name of water-saving and time-saving I think Patil and I should make an effort and shower together, what do you think?" – Seamus said jokingly.
"You wish, baby"- Parvati said as everyone laughed hysterically. After that, she gave Seamus a soft kiss and left to her room.
In that moment Ron got out of the bathroom wearing only a pair of shorts he had just bought in Hogsmeade.
"Has anyone seen my blue shirt?"- he asked everyone.
Hermione tried hard not to see him, but failed. She couldn't help but notice his abs were a little tanned and maybe Josh's body was better, but she couldn't complain at all. She was thankful, though, that any of the girls were there anymore. Any of them, specially Ginny, would have read her thoughts instantly.
"I think Ginny was wearing your shirt when she left to her room."- Harry said and headed towards the bathroom. - "My turn"
"Are you sure she took it?"- Ron yelled to Harry who was already in the bathroom.
"Yeah"- Harry answered, his voice muffled by the sound of the running water.
"Hermione, how do you get to your room?"- Ron asked.
"See, you have to take the staircase on your left, then there's a lift on you right side who will take you to the 5th floor, then you take the first aisle to the left and then you look for room 234, got it?"- Hermione asked, but after watching Ron's very puzzled face, she said: "Or I could go with you if you want, after all, I need to change this shoes, they're killing me."
"Sounds much better"- Ron said, and both of them left the room.
"Let's see if little Ron puts himself together this time. The chances he has had. The courage? We'll see that."- Dean said while Neville and Seamus nodded in agreement.
"So Mione, are you sad because you're not going with Josh tonight?"- Ron asked when they were waiting for the lift
"Well, sad is not the word, but I won't deny it would have been fun. Why do you ask?"- Hermione told him.
"Just to know if you know, if you'd rather be with him than with me, I mean, with all of us." – Ron said insecurely.
"Come on Ron, you and Harry are my best friends, I'd rather be with you than with anyone else and you know that."- In that moment the lift opened and they got in.
"Hermione?"- Ron asked nervous putting his hands on her shoulders, looking directly to her eyes.
"Would you go with me to the Blue Bay tomorrow night?"
------Well, not exactly a cliffhanger, right? C'mon, you know what she's going to say, don't you? Please review and tell me what you think, k? I don't know when the next chapter will be up, but I promise it's gonna be a good one. I'll hurry up anyway. Please review guys!!
H Weasley
