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Hey guys, sorry I never ever updated this ff, I lost the confidence I once possessed, or thought I possessed and have only just work up the courage to write (or maybe it has derived from my immense boredom)! Thank you to everyone who reviewed with characters I will try to add all of them in but sorry if I don't please don't take it personally.
It is summer hols so if this works out you'll be hearing (or reading) more from me in the near future well I hope anyway! Anyway enough of this, READ............you know you want to!!
P.S suggestion, comments, criticisms, anything is welcomed just please R/R tell me what you think! Ok on with the show.....or story
Lily and James
"Ahhh"
Lily had ever intention of killing James Potter at the moment. She had just discovered at that moment a putrid smell erupting from under her bed.
She thought it was probably wrong to accuse Potter without all the facts. But after considering it for about 1/4 of a second she realized what she was thinking.
Hello!! This was Potter! Prankster extraordinaire! Infamous Marauder! And Lily Evens worst nightmare.
Well not really, Snape was pretty high on her list of enemies and she could no doubt find any number of people who annoyed her more than James Potter, but right now he was pretty close to the top.
It was common knowledge that Lily and James were mortal enemies, but many just put it down to a poor lack of character judgment on both sides and that they were totally smitten with on another, even if they had a funny way of showing it at times.
Lily was the red head beauty, the girl that every girl would kill to be, the girl that every guy would kill to be with. With the exception of James Potter.
James Potter. He was Lilys greatest rival. Not only for grades, which both toped, but popularity, Quidditch, Pranks, and anything else that they tried at.
It was either one or the other that toped their class which of course would create rivalry.
They competed on the Quidditch field. Both chasers for the Gryffindor Quidditch team. Both amazing team mates. Together they could pull of the most amazing plays ever known to mankind.
Impossible to intercept.
They were the star players. When they got onto the field they put all their petty differences aside to pull of another amazing game.
One would wonder if the 3rd chaser was really necessary when it came to these two.
Both could have easily made it to any professional Quidditch team after Hogwarts, but only James had that desire, which in the end got him the title of Quidditch Captain.
But both equally earned the position of Gryffindor Prefect. If you put aside the detentions and trouble making pranks, and the trouble they got themselves into when they would fight in class, they were responsible (when it counted) and smart which above everything got them their title.
"Lily" Dani yelled from the bathroom. Dani Wells. Lily's best friend since first year. She was in Lily's opinion beautiful. And in the opinion of the rest of Hogwarts stunning. Just like Lily, which maybe why they got along do well.
"What" Returned Lily.
"What happened I heard you yell" she asked walking through the door into their dorm. "Ew, what the hell is that??" She said while holding her nose.
"My guess would be Potter and his gang"
"Damn them" Dani cursed.
Lily spoke a charm, which they had both become very accustom to after 6 years with the Marauders. Immediately the smell disappeared and Lily and Dani walked out of the dorm in search of 3 fellow 6th year Gryffindor students.
They reached the common room and saw Mary. Mary Isabella Anderson the third addition to their exclusive group. Mary would be the shortest by far out of the three and had the perfect body but her ability to stand up for her self and her loud mouth more then made up for her lack of height.
When they reached her they noticed her talking quietly to Remus.
"Mar" Lily yelled from halfway across the Common room
Mary jumped almost a foot in the air.
"What are you doing fraternizing with the enemy?" Dani added
"Since when has Remus been considered the enemy? You two only have problems with James and Sirius" Mary replied
"Since they planted dung bombs in our dorm" Lily replied
"Sorry Remus talk to you later" She quietly told Remus
"Yeah, ok I had better go and save James and Sirius from another detention anyway." and with that he walked off to find James and Sirius.
"You cant prove it was them" Mary reasoned
Both Lily and Dani gave the you-honestly-belive-anyone-else-would-do-it look.
They both shrugged.
"Lets go get lunch. I'm starving" which was followed by two eager nods.
They got to the great hall without to many dramas. A few charms hurled at Snape curtsy of Lily. Other than, no problems.
The Hall was pretty much full when the arrived the only seats available at the Gryffindor table were a few either side of the Marauders. (Most people were to afraid to sit near them).
Lily groaned out loud
Dani swore
Mary lead them calmly over to the vacant seats
Dani and Mary slid into their seats and Lily was forced to sit next to James. Dani and Mary grinned smugly while Lily gave them death glares from across the table.
Dani was situated next Sirius much to her displeasure and Mary was on her otherside.
"Hey Honey" Sirius whispered into Dani's ear.
"Go away Sirius" Dani whispered back.
"Darling, I like totally know you want me! Just like totally admit it already" Sirius said to her in a loud fake American accent.
Every one around them were used to this behavior but laughed anyway.
Dani rolled her eyes in response and served herself. As she did this she was aware that Sirius was softly blowing in her ear.
"I am trying to eat already! Leave me alone I hate you!" Dani shot back at him.
This conversation was almost always passed when these two were together and despite the harsh words it was never blown up they would generally forget about it. But Lily and James were another matter. Their fights would blow up to enormous proportions which would generally end up in an all out war.
So far they had managed to not talk to on another but it was only a matter of time.
They were talking about the up coming match with Hufflepuff.
"We are sure to win! We definitely have the best team, thanks to me of course!" James said
"Get over yourself Potter! It is my increasable Quidditch ability that saves our team from ruin! Especially since you became Captain"
" Are you implying my methods of coaching are not up to your standards Carrot brain"
"That is exactly what I was implying. I am sure anyone could have picked that up with the subtlety of rampaging Hipogriffs! Four eyes"
"The only thing your "abilities" do is bring us down lily flower"
"Then, O Might Quidditch Captain, why am I still on the team? And don't call me Lily Flower!!"
"Pity my fair lady! I am showing Hogwarts what a charitable person I am, taking care of the more unfortunate students" James replied smugly.
Lily snorted with laughter "I can match you in anything Potter and you know it!"
The others looked on with amusement. Waiting for it to blow up and involve the who school.
"2 galleons he blows up, hexes her and walks out" Sirius whispered in Dani's ear.
"2 galleons she pours juice all over him and storms out" Dani replied
" you're on!"
And they went back to watch how this fight like many others would unfold.
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Reply!!! Please!
I am going to bed and I will post more as soon as I get constructive criticism! That is if you want more!
Please just rely any small, large, good, bad comment will be greatly appreciated!!
Love Sal
Hey guys, sorry I never ever updated this ff, I lost the confidence I once possessed, or thought I possessed and have only just work up the courage to write (or maybe it has derived from my immense boredom)! Thank you to everyone who reviewed with characters I will try to add all of them in but sorry if I don't please don't take it personally.
It is summer hols so if this works out you'll be hearing (or reading) more from me in the near future well I hope anyway! Anyway enough of this, READ............you know you want to!!
P.S suggestion, comments, criticisms, anything is welcomed just please R/R tell me what you think! Ok on with the show.....or story
Lily and James
"Ahhh"
Lily had ever intention of killing James Potter at the moment. She had just discovered at that moment a putrid smell erupting from under her bed.
She thought it was probably wrong to accuse Potter without all the facts. But after considering it for about 1/4 of a second she realized what she was thinking.
Hello!! This was Potter! Prankster extraordinaire! Infamous Marauder! And Lily Evens worst nightmare.
Well not really, Snape was pretty high on her list of enemies and she could no doubt find any number of people who annoyed her more than James Potter, but right now he was pretty close to the top.
It was common knowledge that Lily and James were mortal enemies, but many just put it down to a poor lack of character judgment on both sides and that they were totally smitten with on another, even if they had a funny way of showing it at times.
Lily was the red head beauty, the girl that every girl would kill to be, the girl that every guy would kill to be with. With the exception of James Potter.
James Potter. He was Lilys greatest rival. Not only for grades, which both toped, but popularity, Quidditch, Pranks, and anything else that they tried at.
It was either one or the other that toped their class which of course would create rivalry.
They competed on the Quidditch field. Both chasers for the Gryffindor Quidditch team. Both amazing team mates. Together they could pull of the most amazing plays ever known to mankind.
Impossible to intercept.
They were the star players. When they got onto the field they put all their petty differences aside to pull of another amazing game.
One would wonder if the 3rd chaser was really necessary when it came to these two.
Both could have easily made it to any professional Quidditch team after Hogwarts, but only James had that desire, which in the end got him the title of Quidditch Captain.
But both equally earned the position of Gryffindor Prefect. If you put aside the detentions and trouble making pranks, and the trouble they got themselves into when they would fight in class, they were responsible (when it counted) and smart which above everything got them their title.
"Lily" Dani yelled from the bathroom. Dani Wells. Lily's best friend since first year. She was in Lily's opinion beautiful. And in the opinion of the rest of Hogwarts stunning. Just like Lily, which maybe why they got along do well.
"What" Returned Lily.
"What happened I heard you yell" she asked walking through the door into their dorm. "Ew, what the hell is that??" She said while holding her nose.
"My guess would be Potter and his gang"
"Damn them" Dani cursed.
Lily spoke a charm, which they had both become very accustom to after 6 years with the Marauders. Immediately the smell disappeared and Lily and Dani walked out of the dorm in search of 3 fellow 6th year Gryffindor students.
They reached the common room and saw Mary. Mary Isabella Anderson the third addition to their exclusive group. Mary would be the shortest by far out of the three and had the perfect body but her ability to stand up for her self and her loud mouth more then made up for her lack of height.
When they reached her they noticed her talking quietly to Remus.
"Mar" Lily yelled from halfway across the Common room
Mary jumped almost a foot in the air.
"What are you doing fraternizing with the enemy?" Dani added
"Since when has Remus been considered the enemy? You two only have problems with James and Sirius" Mary replied
"Since they planted dung bombs in our dorm" Lily replied
"Sorry Remus talk to you later" She quietly told Remus
"Yeah, ok I had better go and save James and Sirius from another detention anyway." and with that he walked off to find James and Sirius.
"You cant prove it was them" Mary reasoned
Both Lily and Dani gave the you-honestly-belive-anyone-else-would-do-it look.
They both shrugged.
"Lets go get lunch. I'm starving" which was followed by two eager nods.
They got to the great hall without to many dramas. A few charms hurled at Snape curtsy of Lily. Other than, no problems.
The Hall was pretty much full when the arrived the only seats available at the Gryffindor table were a few either side of the Marauders. (Most people were to afraid to sit near them).
Lily groaned out loud
Dani swore
Mary lead them calmly over to the vacant seats
Dani and Mary slid into their seats and Lily was forced to sit next to James. Dani and Mary grinned smugly while Lily gave them death glares from across the table.
Dani was situated next Sirius much to her displeasure and Mary was on her otherside.
"Hey Honey" Sirius whispered into Dani's ear.
"Go away Sirius" Dani whispered back.
"Darling, I like totally know you want me! Just like totally admit it already" Sirius said to her in a loud fake American accent.
Every one around them were used to this behavior but laughed anyway.
Dani rolled her eyes in response and served herself. As she did this she was aware that Sirius was softly blowing in her ear.
"I am trying to eat already! Leave me alone I hate you!" Dani shot back at him.
This conversation was almost always passed when these two were together and despite the harsh words it was never blown up they would generally forget about it. But Lily and James were another matter. Their fights would blow up to enormous proportions which would generally end up in an all out war.
So far they had managed to not talk to on another but it was only a matter of time.
They were talking about the up coming match with Hufflepuff.
"We are sure to win! We definitely have the best team, thanks to me of course!" James said
"Get over yourself Potter! It is my increasable Quidditch ability that saves our team from ruin! Especially since you became Captain"
" Are you implying my methods of coaching are not up to your standards Carrot brain"
"That is exactly what I was implying. I am sure anyone could have picked that up with the subtlety of rampaging Hipogriffs! Four eyes"
"The only thing your "abilities" do is bring us down lily flower"
"Then, O Might Quidditch Captain, why am I still on the team? And don't call me Lily Flower!!"
"Pity my fair lady! I am showing Hogwarts what a charitable person I am, taking care of the more unfortunate students" James replied smugly.
Lily snorted with laughter "I can match you in anything Potter and you know it!"
The others looked on with amusement. Waiting for it to blow up and involve the who school.
"2 galleons he blows up, hexes her and walks out" Sirius whispered in Dani's ear.
"2 galleons she pours juice all over him and storms out" Dani replied
" you're on!"
And they went back to watch how this fight like many others would unfold.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
Reply!!! Please!
I am going to bed and I will post more as soon as I get constructive criticism! That is if you want more!
Please just rely any small, large, good, bad comment will be greatly appreciated!!
Love Sal
