I am suffering from a severe dose of writers block so any ideas would be
great along with constructive criticism as to how the story is going so
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is writing for me, she keeps walking over the keyboard...how cute.
I would like to take this opportunity to apologize for all my spelling
mistakes in the last two chapters; I forgot to go over them.
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Chapter III
Dani, Lily's closest friend, sure they had Mary, but it was something different, Dani and Lily were too much alike not to be this close.
In looks they were very different, the only thing they had in that compartment were tall slim figures and stunning features.
Dani's long blond/brown hair and perfect crystal blue eyes, and well-tanned complexion were enough to get any man interested from first sight. Dani is not well known for her loyalties to the male (and in her opinion) weaker sex,
Lily's sparkling greens eyes would draw peoples attention straight to her face. Her red hair provided a contrast between her eyes and hair that made her glow. They complimented one another perfectly. Her perfectly porcelain skin, flawless, no blemishes besides the small sprinkle of freckles across her nose, inevitable with such fair skin.
Mary was short, she was not like those two in looks or in nature, she had a soothing effect over anyone she spoke to, she had them entranced. She was the sensible one of the three, much like Remus' effect on James and Sirius, maybe that is why they were attracted to on another in the beginning. Maniac friends.
(A/N: that was kind of brief but you get the idea....I hope)
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"Thank god that is over!" Dani cried with relief. "That was probably the most boring class in the whole history of Hogwarts!"
"It wasn't any worse than usual." Lily commented
"Yes it was!" Dani cried
"You say that after almost every class Dani" Mary laughed
"You only enjoyed it because you stared into Remus' eyes the whole class" Dani said
"That reminds me, Lily I need to borrow your notes from that class" Mary said
"What happened to yours?" "Nothing, I just didn't take any"
"Thus proving my point!" Dani said laughing
"Here comes Remmy" Mary said affectionately
"Remmy?" Lily asked as Dani started laughing
"Remus, you cant borrow my notes, you will never learn if you always use mine" James said
"You and Sirius always use mine" Remus reasoned
"See my point we depend on you entirely to much"
"Hello Remus' girlfriend, John and Carrot top" James happily
"Hello Jimmy" Dani replied
James groaned "You are too much like Sirius"
"Hey, I resent that!" Sirius said
They walked on to their next class.
Mary and Remus were walking a little way behind the bickering foursome talking
"If only they got on, it would make life soooo much easier" Mary complained
"All that matters is that we can spend time together, if they are really our friends, they will accpt us" Remus replied
"Well they are trying, for our sake, I don't know how long it will last though"
"Be your partner for Astronomy tonigh?" Remus asked her
"Sure, I look forward to it. Will you be my partener for the rest of the day"
"I was planning on doing it anyway, if not I would take you by force" Remus laughed
"Damn shouldn't have suggested it, I could have been taken by force"
"I'll do it anyway if you like"
"Mmmmmmm I like"
And with that Remus lifted her off her feat and carried her off to an empty classroom for a serious make out session.
"Where did they go?" Dani asked
"Don't know" Sirius replied
"We are only here for Mary and she dosent even have the decency to stick around, how rude" Dani said half joking
"You love being with us darlings" James said
"Not" Lily said
"Lily flower, babe, I'm offended" James said putting an arm over Lily shoulders
"Good, and my names is Lily, and if you call me babe again there will be hell to pay" She said smiling up at him sarcastically.
"Right then" he said not removing his arm
I should probably tell James to remove his filthy little hand before it finds its way any lower Lily thought. In a minuet, maybe.
"How sweet, why isn't she biting his head off?" Sirius whispered to Dani not wanting to disturb them
"She is secretly in love with him" Dani replied
"Really?"
"No, she hates him, but then I don't have the energy to try and work out any of Lily's complicated little brain"
"POTTER! Get your hand away from their before I shove it up your ass!" She hissed, as James's hand shot up from somewhere on her chest not wanting to attract any attention Lily quickly calmed down
"Whoa, calm down flower"
"If you ever try a stunt like that again I. well.will do something ..umm.really bad" She said fuming
"Sorry, I really crossed the line, I really do apologies, I guess I was.ummm.caught in the moment or something" James said sincerely.
"How could you? I thought you hated me?" Lily asked
"I don't hate you!" James said surprised "When did I say that?"
"You didn't have to, you implied it"
"Lily" James started taking up her hands "I don't hate you, ummm, can we talk about this after class"
"Yeah, sure" Lily sighed.
Lily quickly turned and grabbed Dani's hand and dragged her from Sirius
"Whoa, what was Flower, that little exchange with James and the whole arm over shoulder thingy" Dani asked curiously
"More like hand on chest" Lily muttered
"What was that?"
"Nothing, we had better get to class that is all"
"So does James and Sirius" Dani asked giving Lily a weird look
"Well if Mary is there then there is no reason for us to be around them, I thought you would have been happy" Lily asked
"I am, you just seemed so happy there with James" She laughed at the look on Lily's face
"Lets just get to class" Lily said heading off into the direction of the Transfiguration classroom.
"Ok"
They reached the classroom and took seats right at the back oh the class. Shortly followed by Sirius and James and the Ravenclaws and other Gryffindor 6th years.
Alexandra Huish and her best friend Derain McArren, girls that shared the dorm with Lily, Dani and Mary entered. They waved to Dani and Lily and took the seat in front of them.
Felicity Thompson another Gryffindor entered, waved to the girls and took a seat next to a Ravenclaw Fiona O'Bren or Storm, as everyone knew her as.
She hated her name and it was only a rumour that that was even her name; she refused to admit it to anyone. She was often alone, she liked the time by herself but she was friendly enough.
Finally, right before class was due to start Mary and Remus rushed in, Mary's face was all flushed and Remus was clinging onto her hand as they took a seat at the back of the room near Lily and Dani.
Dani and Lily were laughing at Mary silently and Mary was trying her hardest not to look back at them.
Finally she gave in and could not help but smile at Lily and Dani's encouragements. Slowly that turned into a full on grin and Lily swore that her face was going to split in two if she didn't watch out.
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"Bloody hell I'm starving!" Dani cried "I am so glad it is finally lunch"
"Me to" Lily and Mary agreed
They made there way to the great hall. Mary saved seats by them for Remus, James and Sirius.
Just then Lily's owl flew in.
"That's strange, you don't usually get mail at this time of day!" Dani said
"You do for prefect business" Lily said emotionless
*~ Miss Evens
There is to be a Prefect meeting concerning upcoming matters, which I am sure you are fully aware of. The meeting shall be held in the Transfiguration room as usual at eight o'clock. Would you please remind Mr Potter as I am sure he will forget.
Sincerely
Head Girl and Head Boy
Mihara Natsumi and Daniel Peterson ~*
"Great" Lily said sarcastically while petting her owl
"Prefect meeting?" Dani asked glancing over her shoulder
"Yeah"
"What are the upcoming matters that need to be discussed?" Dani asked
"I'm not telling" Lily said in a sing song voice
"Ow Lily-kins tell" Dani said pouting
"You'll find out soon enough"
"I want to know nowwwww"
"Fine" Lily said giving up "There is a ball and we have to organise it, it's like a prefect project"
"Oooo Cool!!" Mary said "Where is Remus when you need him"
"Don't tell anyone! Dumbledor was going to announce it tomorrow tonight if our meeting goes well"
"What are we going to do for dates?" Dani asked
"I want to go with. ooo I know, Mathew Rogers" Lily said giggling
"Ooo Ravenclaw Keeper. soo hott!! But going out with Riley Olsen from Ravenclaw
"Damn I forgot" Lily said "What about..Sirius Black, Gryffindor bad boy, Keeper for Gryffindor Quidditch team.. Oh sorry Dani, I forgot he is yours, and he is Potters best friend so that rules him out!" Lily said
"He's not mine! I hate Black!" Dani said defensively "Maybe if he didn't go out with any female that moved I would consider him but otherwise no!"
"Hey, you have had your fair share of boyfriends. You are almost as bad as him!" Lily said
"No way!!"
"Yes way!"
"No"
"Yes"
"No"
"Yes"
"So have you! How many boyfriends have you had since we started at Hogwarts and I don't see you going out of your way to keep things going with Mark" Dani pointed out
"Yeah, well.."
"Who is Mark?"
Lily looked up to see James Potter looking down at her. Remus had already taken a seat next to Mary and Sirius was taking the vacant seat on the other side of Dani leaving James to take the seat next to Lily
"Mark, ummm who is mark" She asked herself "Oh right umm Mark is my boyfriend" She told them
"I have never heard you talk of any Mark Lily" James asked
"yeah well."
"What she is trying to say is, she is just using him" Dani informed them
"I don't see you looking for any commitments with Stephen! You two just disappear and we never hear you speak of him again" Lily said
"Yeah well." Dani said shyly
"Ok, who cares? James, do you know we have a prefect meeting tonight? About the ball"
"Yes and no one is supposed to know about the ball"
"well your friends don't seem too shocked by it, I'm guessing you told them?"
"Yeah, ok point made" James said admitting defeat
"Great" Lily said sarcastically
"Oh come in Flower, don't be like that" James said while lifting her chin so he could face her
"Go away Potter!" Lily spat in his face
"Fine Carrot"
And they both went back to eating not making eye contact
"Sirius" Dani yelped
"Sorry Dan" Sirius said
"Like hell you are, change me back NOW!! She screamed
"No" Sirius said simply
Dani growled at him while fingering her now blue frizzy hair
"Say please"
"Sirius just bloody change it BACK!!!
"Who is the sexyest guy on the face of the earth?"
"Snape is compared to you!"
"Ouch that hurt, I guess you will just have yo go around with blue hair all day, imagine what Stephen will say when he sees you tsk tsk"
"I was only joking! Please Sirius" Dani said
"hmmm I think about it through Potions"
"But that is with the Hufflepuff, Stephen is a Hufflepuff"
"Ha, well you should have thought of that before you said Snape was sexier than me!"
"I cant think of one person that you are sexier than!"
"Oh come one, you went saying that last year in the Astronomy tower!"
Dani's whole face went bright red and gave up and went to looking at her food.
"Dani, the counter curse is blencious" Lily said
"How do you know??" Dani asked
"I have been force to learn it since it is one of Potters favorite ways to annoy me"
"Ahh, blencious" Suddenly Dani's hair turned a violent shade of pink "Agh! It was rigged!"
Sirius cracked up laughing. "We improved the charm slightly"
"I am going to kill you" Dani growled
"Ahh" And with that Sirius ran from the Hall closely followed by Dani.
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Here is yet another boring chapter. I need Ideas or else it will turn out to be another fluffy fanfic! R/R
Thanx Sally xoxoxoxoxo
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Chapter III
Dani, Lily's closest friend, sure they had Mary, but it was something different, Dani and Lily were too much alike not to be this close.
In looks they were very different, the only thing they had in that compartment were tall slim figures and stunning features.
Dani's long blond/brown hair and perfect crystal blue eyes, and well-tanned complexion were enough to get any man interested from first sight. Dani is not well known for her loyalties to the male (and in her opinion) weaker sex,
Lily's sparkling greens eyes would draw peoples attention straight to her face. Her red hair provided a contrast between her eyes and hair that made her glow. They complimented one another perfectly. Her perfectly porcelain skin, flawless, no blemishes besides the small sprinkle of freckles across her nose, inevitable with such fair skin.
Mary was short, she was not like those two in looks or in nature, she had a soothing effect over anyone she spoke to, she had them entranced. She was the sensible one of the three, much like Remus' effect on James and Sirius, maybe that is why they were attracted to on another in the beginning. Maniac friends.
(A/N: that was kind of brief but you get the idea....I hope)
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"Thank god that is over!" Dani cried with relief. "That was probably the most boring class in the whole history of Hogwarts!"
"It wasn't any worse than usual." Lily commented
"Yes it was!" Dani cried
"You say that after almost every class Dani" Mary laughed
"You only enjoyed it because you stared into Remus' eyes the whole class" Dani said
"That reminds me, Lily I need to borrow your notes from that class" Mary said
"What happened to yours?" "Nothing, I just didn't take any"
"Thus proving my point!" Dani said laughing
"Here comes Remmy" Mary said affectionately
"Remmy?" Lily asked as Dani started laughing
"Remus, you cant borrow my notes, you will never learn if you always use mine" James said
"You and Sirius always use mine" Remus reasoned
"See my point we depend on you entirely to much"
"Hello Remus' girlfriend, John and Carrot top" James happily
"Hello Jimmy" Dani replied
James groaned "You are too much like Sirius"
"Hey, I resent that!" Sirius said
They walked on to their next class.
Mary and Remus were walking a little way behind the bickering foursome talking
"If only they got on, it would make life soooo much easier" Mary complained
"All that matters is that we can spend time together, if they are really our friends, they will accpt us" Remus replied
"Well they are trying, for our sake, I don't know how long it will last though"
"Be your partner for Astronomy tonigh?" Remus asked her
"Sure, I look forward to it. Will you be my partener for the rest of the day"
"I was planning on doing it anyway, if not I would take you by force" Remus laughed
"Damn shouldn't have suggested it, I could have been taken by force"
"I'll do it anyway if you like"
"Mmmmmmm I like"
And with that Remus lifted her off her feat and carried her off to an empty classroom for a serious make out session.
"Where did they go?" Dani asked
"Don't know" Sirius replied
"We are only here for Mary and she dosent even have the decency to stick around, how rude" Dani said half joking
"You love being with us darlings" James said
"Not" Lily said
"Lily flower, babe, I'm offended" James said putting an arm over Lily shoulders
"Good, and my names is Lily, and if you call me babe again there will be hell to pay" She said smiling up at him sarcastically.
"Right then" he said not removing his arm
I should probably tell James to remove his filthy little hand before it finds its way any lower Lily thought. In a minuet, maybe.
"How sweet, why isn't she biting his head off?" Sirius whispered to Dani not wanting to disturb them
"She is secretly in love with him" Dani replied
"Really?"
"No, she hates him, but then I don't have the energy to try and work out any of Lily's complicated little brain"
"POTTER! Get your hand away from their before I shove it up your ass!" She hissed, as James's hand shot up from somewhere on her chest not wanting to attract any attention Lily quickly calmed down
"Whoa, calm down flower"
"If you ever try a stunt like that again I. well.will do something ..umm.really bad" She said fuming
"Sorry, I really crossed the line, I really do apologies, I guess I was.ummm.caught in the moment or something" James said sincerely.
"How could you? I thought you hated me?" Lily asked
"I don't hate you!" James said surprised "When did I say that?"
"You didn't have to, you implied it"
"Lily" James started taking up her hands "I don't hate you, ummm, can we talk about this after class"
"Yeah, sure" Lily sighed.
Lily quickly turned and grabbed Dani's hand and dragged her from Sirius
"Whoa, what was Flower, that little exchange with James and the whole arm over shoulder thingy" Dani asked curiously
"More like hand on chest" Lily muttered
"What was that?"
"Nothing, we had better get to class that is all"
"So does James and Sirius" Dani asked giving Lily a weird look
"Well if Mary is there then there is no reason for us to be around them, I thought you would have been happy" Lily asked
"I am, you just seemed so happy there with James" She laughed at the look on Lily's face
"Lets just get to class" Lily said heading off into the direction of the Transfiguration classroom.
"Ok"
They reached the classroom and took seats right at the back oh the class. Shortly followed by Sirius and James and the Ravenclaws and other Gryffindor 6th years.
Alexandra Huish and her best friend Derain McArren, girls that shared the dorm with Lily, Dani and Mary entered. They waved to Dani and Lily and took the seat in front of them.
Felicity Thompson another Gryffindor entered, waved to the girls and took a seat next to a Ravenclaw Fiona O'Bren or Storm, as everyone knew her as.
She hated her name and it was only a rumour that that was even her name; she refused to admit it to anyone. She was often alone, she liked the time by herself but she was friendly enough.
Finally, right before class was due to start Mary and Remus rushed in, Mary's face was all flushed and Remus was clinging onto her hand as they took a seat at the back of the room near Lily and Dani.
Dani and Lily were laughing at Mary silently and Mary was trying her hardest not to look back at them.
Finally she gave in and could not help but smile at Lily and Dani's encouragements. Slowly that turned into a full on grin and Lily swore that her face was going to split in two if she didn't watch out.
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"Bloody hell I'm starving!" Dani cried "I am so glad it is finally lunch"
"Me to" Lily and Mary agreed
They made there way to the great hall. Mary saved seats by them for Remus, James and Sirius.
Just then Lily's owl flew in.
"That's strange, you don't usually get mail at this time of day!" Dani said
"You do for prefect business" Lily said emotionless
*~ Miss Evens
There is to be a Prefect meeting concerning upcoming matters, which I am sure you are fully aware of. The meeting shall be held in the Transfiguration room as usual at eight o'clock. Would you please remind Mr Potter as I am sure he will forget.
Sincerely
Head Girl and Head Boy
Mihara Natsumi and Daniel Peterson ~*
"Great" Lily said sarcastically while petting her owl
"Prefect meeting?" Dani asked glancing over her shoulder
"Yeah"
"What are the upcoming matters that need to be discussed?" Dani asked
"I'm not telling" Lily said in a sing song voice
"Ow Lily-kins tell" Dani said pouting
"You'll find out soon enough"
"I want to know nowwwww"
"Fine" Lily said giving up "There is a ball and we have to organise it, it's like a prefect project"
"Oooo Cool!!" Mary said "Where is Remus when you need him"
"Don't tell anyone! Dumbledor was going to announce it tomorrow tonight if our meeting goes well"
"What are we going to do for dates?" Dani asked
"I want to go with. ooo I know, Mathew Rogers" Lily said giggling
"Ooo Ravenclaw Keeper. soo hott!! But going out with Riley Olsen from Ravenclaw
"Damn I forgot" Lily said "What about..Sirius Black, Gryffindor bad boy, Keeper for Gryffindor Quidditch team.. Oh sorry Dani, I forgot he is yours, and he is Potters best friend so that rules him out!" Lily said
"He's not mine! I hate Black!" Dani said defensively "Maybe if he didn't go out with any female that moved I would consider him but otherwise no!"
"Hey, you have had your fair share of boyfriends. You are almost as bad as him!" Lily said
"No way!!"
"Yes way!"
"No"
"Yes"
"No"
"Yes"
"So have you! How many boyfriends have you had since we started at Hogwarts and I don't see you going out of your way to keep things going with Mark" Dani pointed out
"Yeah, well.."
"Who is Mark?"
Lily looked up to see James Potter looking down at her. Remus had already taken a seat next to Mary and Sirius was taking the vacant seat on the other side of Dani leaving James to take the seat next to Lily
"Mark, ummm who is mark" She asked herself "Oh right umm Mark is my boyfriend" She told them
"I have never heard you talk of any Mark Lily" James asked
"yeah well."
"What she is trying to say is, she is just using him" Dani informed them
"I don't see you looking for any commitments with Stephen! You two just disappear and we never hear you speak of him again" Lily said
"Yeah well." Dani said shyly
"Ok, who cares? James, do you know we have a prefect meeting tonight? About the ball"
"Yes and no one is supposed to know about the ball"
"well your friends don't seem too shocked by it, I'm guessing you told them?"
"Yeah, ok point made" James said admitting defeat
"Great" Lily said sarcastically
"Oh come in Flower, don't be like that" James said while lifting her chin so he could face her
"Go away Potter!" Lily spat in his face
"Fine Carrot"
And they both went back to eating not making eye contact
"Sirius" Dani yelped
"Sorry Dan" Sirius said
"Like hell you are, change me back NOW!! She screamed
"No" Sirius said simply
Dani growled at him while fingering her now blue frizzy hair
"Say please"
"Sirius just bloody change it BACK!!!
"Who is the sexyest guy on the face of the earth?"
"Snape is compared to you!"
"Ouch that hurt, I guess you will just have yo go around with blue hair all day, imagine what Stephen will say when he sees you tsk tsk"
"I was only joking! Please Sirius" Dani said
"hmmm I think about it through Potions"
"But that is with the Hufflepuff, Stephen is a Hufflepuff"
"Ha, well you should have thought of that before you said Snape was sexier than me!"
"I cant think of one person that you are sexier than!"
"Oh come one, you went saying that last year in the Astronomy tower!"
Dani's whole face went bright red and gave up and went to looking at her food.
"Dani, the counter curse is blencious" Lily said
"How do you know??" Dani asked
"I have been force to learn it since it is one of Potters favorite ways to annoy me"
"Ahh, blencious" Suddenly Dani's hair turned a violent shade of pink "Agh! It was rigged!"
Sirius cracked up laughing. "We improved the charm slightly"
"I am going to kill you" Dani growled
"Ahh" And with that Sirius ran from the Hall closely followed by Dani.
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Here is yet another boring chapter. I need Ideas or else it will turn out to be another fluffy fanfic! R/R
Thanx Sally xoxoxoxoxo
