Sorry for the long wait but I've had a small case of W/B. If you have any
ideas I would really appreciate them.
Chapter 2
Serenity sighed as the auctioneer finally got around to her. It was hot and all Serenity cared about at the moment was to be sold and be out of the heat. This was going to be a long auction.
"Here we have a girl fit for any task. She can clean, cook, wash cloths and much more. She is at the young age of 16 and it built fork hard labor also. We will start the biding at (A/N: remember that I don't know anything about Arabian money so I'm just gonna use "dollars". If anyone knows could u pleeze tell me so that I can change it so it fits better?) 300 dollars. Do I hear 300? 300? I have 325? Anyone for 400? 400? Ah yes, the lady in front do I hear 460?" And it went on like this for nearly an hour.
Endymion decided that he wanted this particular slave girl with the azure blue eyes. He didn't care what the cost was, he would have her. He smirked, 'these fools are just waiting their time with this one. She will be mine anyway. If I so chose I wouldn't have to pay at all. After all, I am sultan.'
The bidding was now at 2010. 'Enough fooling around' Endymion raised a strong, regal hand in the air and shouted, "4000 and that is the last bid as I am sultan and will have this slave now." All eyes turned towards the sultan and his royal adviser. They lowered their heads in respect as the two walked past up to the stage to pay the auctioneer. Endymion set a chest of money at the auctioneer's feet and proceeded to the slave's block to claim his prize. He walked right up to Serenity and looked down upon her. She kept her head down as she was feeling a too shy to look at him. "Girl," he said "look at me when I'm talking to you." He gasped as he stared into those blues up close. She really was a beauty. "What is your name, and speak up."
"My name is Serenity, your highness" She averted her eyes from his, she felt as if he were boring onto her soul. With that said he motioned her to follow him as he and Andre walked on. Serenity followed them to the stables and saw them beginning to mount their stallions. She was startled when the royal advisor pulled a royal mare up to her and told her to get on. Serenity expected them to make her walk behind them as al her previous masters had made her do.
Andre clearly sensed her thoughts and said, "My dear, it is a long way to the palace and it would be ever so inhumane to do such a thing as to make you walk. No, you shall always ride when we are to go anywhere far." Serenity smiled gratefully at him before mounting the lovely brown mare. She trotted some ten paces behind her new master and wondered, would it be forever?
Pleeze help me!!!!!!!!!!!! I need some good input.
Chapter 2
Serenity sighed as the auctioneer finally got around to her. It was hot and all Serenity cared about at the moment was to be sold and be out of the heat. This was going to be a long auction.
"Here we have a girl fit for any task. She can clean, cook, wash cloths and much more. She is at the young age of 16 and it built fork hard labor also. We will start the biding at (A/N: remember that I don't know anything about Arabian money so I'm just gonna use "dollars". If anyone knows could u pleeze tell me so that I can change it so it fits better?) 300 dollars. Do I hear 300? 300? I have 325? Anyone for 400? 400? Ah yes, the lady in front do I hear 460?" And it went on like this for nearly an hour.
Endymion decided that he wanted this particular slave girl with the azure blue eyes. He didn't care what the cost was, he would have her. He smirked, 'these fools are just waiting their time with this one. She will be mine anyway. If I so chose I wouldn't have to pay at all. After all, I am sultan.'
The bidding was now at 2010. 'Enough fooling around' Endymion raised a strong, regal hand in the air and shouted, "4000 and that is the last bid as I am sultan and will have this slave now." All eyes turned towards the sultan and his royal adviser. They lowered their heads in respect as the two walked past up to the stage to pay the auctioneer. Endymion set a chest of money at the auctioneer's feet and proceeded to the slave's block to claim his prize. He walked right up to Serenity and looked down upon her. She kept her head down as she was feeling a too shy to look at him. "Girl," he said "look at me when I'm talking to you." He gasped as he stared into those blues up close. She really was a beauty. "What is your name, and speak up."
"My name is Serenity, your highness" She averted her eyes from his, she felt as if he were boring onto her soul. With that said he motioned her to follow him as he and Andre walked on. Serenity followed them to the stables and saw them beginning to mount their stallions. She was startled when the royal advisor pulled a royal mare up to her and told her to get on. Serenity expected them to make her walk behind them as al her previous masters had made her do.
Andre clearly sensed her thoughts and said, "My dear, it is a long way to the palace and it would be ever so inhumane to do such a thing as to make you walk. No, you shall always ride when we are to go anywhere far." Serenity smiled gratefully at him before mounting the lovely brown mare. She trotted some ten paces behind her new master and wondered, would it be forever?
Pleeze help me!!!!!!!!!!!! I need some good input.
