Black in Death
Note From Me:
Sorry it took me so darn long. This is the same idea as the last except I studied the book and figured out who was where and changed it accordingly while checking my story and changing my BAD writinq style.
I also changed Sirius's body part. It TOTALLY didn't connect that he fell completely behind the curtain and disappeared; I thought he had fallen halfway through or something, sorry about that. I also changed the story to accommodate that.
I wrote it when I didn't have OotP with me and so some was REALLY off, SORRY!
Thanks for reviewing!
To Reviewers:
Biblehermione- again, Thanks! Wow, I didn't think I could write so
well that someone would cry (even though it is probably based more on
JKR writings than mine!) Thank you so much, I get so few reviews,
these mean a lot to me!
Katherine- I was wondering how she had taken it too. The rest
(mostly) are IDIOTS since they don't realize what they have lost!
Since we lost Sirius starts crying againsad sigh. Tonks is soooo cool. I agree, I can't get
enough of padfoot either. Thanks and your welcome!
Marauders forever- When I read the part about Ron having the brain and
nearly suffocating, plus the blood coming out of his mouth I thought
for a second that Ron was going to die, and then I thought, NO he
can't! JKR said none of the major three were going to die! I had
absolutely no idea who was going to die, I thought Sirius would have
survived so Harry could live with him finally after he got out of
Hogwarts, guess not. Agreed, it never said that he was dead too. I
went over it again and again. It said he was afraid and shocked and
feel through and disappeared. It never stated that he was dead, the
others said he was but no one actually knows! Probably me just
wishing against the inevitable. Thanks though!
Caitlin- Again, thanks, I went back, reread and changed the story to
accommodate. Thanks for reading and telling me!
moony, padfoot and prongs- yup it did go through and didn't come out
the other side. Thanks, I like this one the best out of what I have
written (hell, I've spent enough time on it!) thanks!
Squgee- If you are referring to this story, I don't know how I could
update it. If you are referring to the Unknown Savior I have the 1st
chapter done and the 2nd almost done. As soon as I proofread the 1st
chap (in a few days to a week) I will put it up. Thanks for reading!
Thanks again, bye! And we will NEVER forget Padfoot!
Oh! By the way, I am coming out with a new story that is loosely tied to the end of this one, it picks up that night and Tonks is still sad. Here is the summary for that one:
OotP spoiler. "She must remain unknown to Harry. She saved his life and she will be his Unknown Savior. My, the Blacks do tend to be closely related with Harry"
I REALLY hope this turns out ok, I know that children of Sirius stories REALLY have been overworked, but I hope it will be ok. It's called Unknown Savior; read it asap, PLEASE! Here's the link: Link to: Unknown Savior If you want I can mail you or put up a new chap on this saying it's out so it will register in your review history as updated and you can see I have it out. Up to you, thanks!
~Kit ;)
Note From Me:
Sorry it took me so darn long. This is the same idea as the last except I studied the book and figured out who was where and changed it accordingly while checking my story and changing my BAD writinq style.
I also changed Sirius's body part. It TOTALLY didn't connect that he fell completely behind the curtain and disappeared; I thought he had fallen halfway through or something, sorry about that. I also changed the story to accommodate that.
I wrote it when I didn't have OotP with me and so some was REALLY off, SORRY!
Thanks for reviewing!
To Reviewers:
Biblehermione- again, Thanks! Wow, I didn't think I could write so
well that someone would cry (even though it is probably based more on
JKR writings than mine!) Thank you so much, I get so few reviews,
these mean a lot to me!
Katherine- I was wondering how she had taken it too. The rest
(mostly) are IDIOTS since they don't realize what they have lost!
Since we lost Sirius starts crying againsad sigh. Tonks is soooo cool. I agree, I can't get
enough of padfoot either. Thanks and your welcome!
Marauders forever- When I read the part about Ron having the brain and
nearly suffocating, plus the blood coming out of his mouth I thought
for a second that Ron was going to die, and then I thought, NO he
can't! JKR said none of the major three were going to die! I had
absolutely no idea who was going to die, I thought Sirius would have
survived so Harry could live with him finally after he got out of
Hogwarts, guess not. Agreed, it never said that he was dead too. I
went over it again and again. It said he was afraid and shocked and
feel through and disappeared. It never stated that he was dead, the
others said he was but no one actually knows! Probably me just
wishing against the inevitable. Thanks though!
Caitlin- Again, thanks, I went back, reread and changed the story to
accommodate. Thanks for reading and telling me!
moony, padfoot and prongs- yup it did go through and didn't come out
the other side. Thanks, I like this one the best out of what I have
written (hell, I've spent enough time on it!) thanks!
Squgee- If you are referring to this story, I don't know how I could
update it. If you are referring to the Unknown Savior I have the 1st
chapter done and the 2nd almost done. As soon as I proofread the 1st
chap (in a few days to a week) I will put it up. Thanks for reading!
Thanks again, bye! And we will NEVER forget Padfoot!
Oh! By the way, I am coming out with a new story that is loosely tied to the end of this one, it picks up that night and Tonks is still sad. Here is the summary for that one:
OotP spoiler. "She must remain unknown to Harry. She saved his life and she will be his Unknown Savior. My, the Blacks do tend to be closely related with Harry"
I REALLY hope this turns out ok, I know that children of Sirius stories REALLY have been overworked, but I hope it will be ok. It's called Unknown Savior; read it asap, PLEASE! Here's the link: Link to: Unknown Savior If you want I can mail you or put up a new chap on this saying it's out so it will register in your review history as updated and you can see I have it out. Up to you, thanks!
~Kit ;)
