Disclaimer: I don't own Golden Sun, but I really think I should,
considering ALL the fics I've written! Lol!
A/N: A big thank you again to all the peeps that have reviewed. (So far, this is doing as well as The Outcast! YAY!) I must say though, I reckon reading you're reviews are just as interesting as reading fics! Hehehe! And I think I may have started an indirect lovers tiff between two reviewers: Kairi and OOkami! Heeheehee! Sorry girls, couldn't resist!
I also noticed on a certain bio (mentioning no names DarkSamurai!) that this certain someone said that stupid fics about Isaac and Felix yaoi were popping up. Hmmm, I hope that wasn't aimed at me... lol! There is nothing wrong with a bit of Isaac/Felix! I think they make a pretty hot couple!
Anyway, read on, and tell me what you think (and don't worry, Orions Shadow, the pairings WILL be apparent soon!) So, please review!!!!
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He could hear the ocean. He was walking on a beach, the air smelling strongly of salt water. There was a figure ahead of him, and a figure behind. The figure behind called his name.
"Alex!"
He turned to see who it was. Mia. He felt a tug in his conscience. He had done so much to hurt this girl, but why did he care? She was looking at him, her soft eyes studying his...
"Alex!"
He turned to the other figure. The Water Adept, Piers. He remembered when they had first met. He had pretended to be hurt with Jenna for replacing him. I fact, he had often wondered about this adept, who had seemed so kind, the total opposite to himself. He was also very attractive... NO! He shouldn't think like that at all! He is NOT gay!
A third figure approached.
"Alex..."
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"ALEX!!! Will you wake UP?"
Alex opened his eyes with a start. "Finally!" Seira stood with her hands on her hips. "I thought I might have lost you there!"
Alex grumbled and sat up.
"For what it's worth, just because you like one guy, doesn't make you gay. You like Mia too, don't you?"
Alex stared at her. "What? Are you psychic or something?"
"No!" she laughed. "It's not MY fault if you talk in you're sleep!" Her grin faded. "You DO know that Piers is here, don't you? And some friends of his."
"Is one a female Water Adept?" Seira nodded. "Damn! Mia..." he replied.
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Mia poked at her breakfast absent-mindedly. Piers was pacing up and down.
"I don't understand it!" said Jenna. "Why didn't WE feel anything?"
"Well, Alex, Piers and Mia are all Mercurian. That's probably why..." Ivan frowned. "But we need to find out where he is!"
"Right!" Piers stopped. "I'm gonna ask around, see if anybody knows anything. If he's nearby, he'll be in Lemuria."
"What should we do if we find him?" murmured Mia. "Fight?"
"I don't know..." Piers sat down. "What do you think?"
"I'm not the best person to ask." Replied Mia. "My feelings for him have clouded my judgement before."
"But we should go now." Said Ivan. "Before he gats the chance to do any harm. Jenna and me will go. As we aren't Water Adepts, he's less likely to sense us."
"But WE are more likely to sense HIM!" argued Piers.
"Ok, ok, tone down the testosterone!" exclaimed Jenna. "If we all go, we'll find him quicker."
-
Piers feet ached, and he needed to sit down.
"Oh, hello Piers! How are you?"
Piers looked up to see a girl carrying a basket with some supplies. "Oh, hello Seira."
"Don't die of enthusiasm or anything!" she joked.
"Sorry. Hey, have you heard or seen anything...strange in the last few days?"
Seira hesitated. "This is about Alex, isn't it?"
"What? How did you know?"
"Well, the whole town IS talking about it! But why are you so troubled?"
"He's a dangerous man."
"There's a but isn't there?"
"Mia said he used to be good, and I admit, there IS something about him. Not just the mystery. OR the fact he's a gentleman. Just... well, I think under different circumstances, I would like to get to know him, that's all."
Seira smiled. "Well, if you DO meet him, tell him. You never know!"
Piers smiled back. "I will. You be careful, though. He might charm you off your feet!"
She waved goodbye, and Piers sighed. She knew something. Damn, that girl! She was too naïve! Piers could bet she had been helping him. She HAD been the one to help Babi, after all. She was too sheltered. He decided to follow.
"Hey!"
Piers turned to see Ivan sprint up to him. He stopped upon seeing Piers' face. "What's wrong?"
"Oh, nothing," he replied distantly.
"Piers, can I ask you something? Well, I've been doing a lot of thinking, and putting together bit of conversation I've overheard you and Mia having. You're lonely, aren't you?"
Piers looked speechless, then nodded. A tear trickled down his face. "More than you know..." he whispered.
Ivan hesitated. Then, took a step forwards. Hesitated again, then looked up into the taller adept's face. He pulled Piers head down to his own, and kissed him. Piers was too shocked to respond, but then Ivan whispered in his ear:
"If you aren't mad, meet me by the eastern cliff tonight." Then he ran off.
Piers was dumbfounded. Then he shook his head. That could wait until tonight. He had to find Alex.
By the time he reached Seira's house, it was empty. On the table was a note.
I know what you feel, she told me. I don't want to hurt anyone, just to talk. Meet me at the beach, tonight.
Piers read it. Alex. He wanted to meet tonight, too!
Damn...
-
Alex was lost in thought. Should he go to the beach, or should he head over to Piers house? From here, he could see Mia, sat by herself. Had she been crying? He had to choose. Mia, or Piers.
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Ivan was shaking. Would Piers meet him? Was he mad? He didn't care about Piers age. It didn't matter. Because Ivan was...
In love.
-
Jenna was tired after a fruitful search, and looked over to Piers window. There was a figure inside. Mia. Jenna thought back to before Mia had sensed Alex. She had been about to tell Jenna something. Then, slowly, realisation dawned. Did Mia like her? Jenna's heart skipped a beat. Then she scolded herself. What if she was wrong? Should she make the first move?
Jenna stood there. What should she do?
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A/N: Make sure you read the last part carefully, coz it's complicated! Good twist eh? So, who gets off with whom? I WILL tell you, the next chapter WON'T necessarily be the last one, depending on the pairings.
As for the pairings, well, that's where all of YOU wonderful peeps come in! Again, YOU all get a say in what happens! I'll add the next chapter ONLY when enough peeps review! And, DarkSamurai, NO comments about my pairings, unless it's praise! Lol!
Please Read and Review! ^_^
A/N: A big thank you again to all the peeps that have reviewed. (So far, this is doing as well as The Outcast! YAY!) I must say though, I reckon reading you're reviews are just as interesting as reading fics! Hehehe! And I think I may have started an indirect lovers tiff between two reviewers: Kairi and OOkami! Heeheehee! Sorry girls, couldn't resist!
I also noticed on a certain bio (mentioning no names DarkSamurai!) that this certain someone said that stupid fics about Isaac and Felix yaoi were popping up. Hmmm, I hope that wasn't aimed at me... lol! There is nothing wrong with a bit of Isaac/Felix! I think they make a pretty hot couple!
Anyway, read on, and tell me what you think (and don't worry, Orions Shadow, the pairings WILL be apparent soon!) So, please review!!!!
-
He could hear the ocean. He was walking on a beach, the air smelling strongly of salt water. There was a figure ahead of him, and a figure behind. The figure behind called his name.
"Alex!"
He turned to see who it was. Mia. He felt a tug in his conscience. He had done so much to hurt this girl, but why did he care? She was looking at him, her soft eyes studying his...
"Alex!"
He turned to the other figure. The Water Adept, Piers. He remembered when they had first met. He had pretended to be hurt with Jenna for replacing him. I fact, he had often wondered about this adept, who had seemed so kind, the total opposite to himself. He was also very attractive... NO! He shouldn't think like that at all! He is NOT gay!
A third figure approached.
"Alex..."
-
"ALEX!!! Will you wake UP?"
Alex opened his eyes with a start. "Finally!" Seira stood with her hands on her hips. "I thought I might have lost you there!"
Alex grumbled and sat up.
"For what it's worth, just because you like one guy, doesn't make you gay. You like Mia too, don't you?"
Alex stared at her. "What? Are you psychic or something?"
"No!" she laughed. "It's not MY fault if you talk in you're sleep!" Her grin faded. "You DO know that Piers is here, don't you? And some friends of his."
"Is one a female Water Adept?" Seira nodded. "Damn! Mia..." he replied.
-
Mia poked at her breakfast absent-mindedly. Piers was pacing up and down.
"I don't understand it!" said Jenna. "Why didn't WE feel anything?"
"Well, Alex, Piers and Mia are all Mercurian. That's probably why..." Ivan frowned. "But we need to find out where he is!"
"Right!" Piers stopped. "I'm gonna ask around, see if anybody knows anything. If he's nearby, he'll be in Lemuria."
"What should we do if we find him?" murmured Mia. "Fight?"
"I don't know..." Piers sat down. "What do you think?"
"I'm not the best person to ask." Replied Mia. "My feelings for him have clouded my judgement before."
"But we should go now." Said Ivan. "Before he gats the chance to do any harm. Jenna and me will go. As we aren't Water Adepts, he's less likely to sense us."
"But WE are more likely to sense HIM!" argued Piers.
"Ok, ok, tone down the testosterone!" exclaimed Jenna. "If we all go, we'll find him quicker."
-
Piers feet ached, and he needed to sit down.
"Oh, hello Piers! How are you?"
Piers looked up to see a girl carrying a basket with some supplies. "Oh, hello Seira."
"Don't die of enthusiasm or anything!" she joked.
"Sorry. Hey, have you heard or seen anything...strange in the last few days?"
Seira hesitated. "This is about Alex, isn't it?"
"What? How did you know?"
"Well, the whole town IS talking about it! But why are you so troubled?"
"He's a dangerous man."
"There's a but isn't there?"
"Mia said he used to be good, and I admit, there IS something about him. Not just the mystery. OR the fact he's a gentleman. Just... well, I think under different circumstances, I would like to get to know him, that's all."
Seira smiled. "Well, if you DO meet him, tell him. You never know!"
Piers smiled back. "I will. You be careful, though. He might charm you off your feet!"
She waved goodbye, and Piers sighed. She knew something. Damn, that girl! She was too naïve! Piers could bet she had been helping him. She HAD been the one to help Babi, after all. She was too sheltered. He decided to follow.
"Hey!"
Piers turned to see Ivan sprint up to him. He stopped upon seeing Piers' face. "What's wrong?"
"Oh, nothing," he replied distantly.
"Piers, can I ask you something? Well, I've been doing a lot of thinking, and putting together bit of conversation I've overheard you and Mia having. You're lonely, aren't you?"
Piers looked speechless, then nodded. A tear trickled down his face. "More than you know..." he whispered.
Ivan hesitated. Then, took a step forwards. Hesitated again, then looked up into the taller adept's face. He pulled Piers head down to his own, and kissed him. Piers was too shocked to respond, but then Ivan whispered in his ear:
"If you aren't mad, meet me by the eastern cliff tonight." Then he ran off.
Piers was dumbfounded. Then he shook his head. That could wait until tonight. He had to find Alex.
By the time he reached Seira's house, it was empty. On the table was a note.
I know what you feel, she told me. I don't want to hurt anyone, just to talk. Meet me at the beach, tonight.
Piers read it. Alex. He wanted to meet tonight, too!
Damn...
-
Alex was lost in thought. Should he go to the beach, or should he head over to Piers house? From here, he could see Mia, sat by herself. Had she been crying? He had to choose. Mia, or Piers.
-
Ivan was shaking. Would Piers meet him? Was he mad? He didn't care about Piers age. It didn't matter. Because Ivan was...
In love.
-
Jenna was tired after a fruitful search, and looked over to Piers window. There was a figure inside. Mia. Jenna thought back to before Mia had sensed Alex. She had been about to tell Jenna something. Then, slowly, realisation dawned. Did Mia like her? Jenna's heart skipped a beat. Then she scolded herself. What if she was wrong? Should she make the first move?
Jenna stood there. What should she do?
-
A/N: Make sure you read the last part carefully, coz it's complicated! Good twist eh? So, who gets off with whom? I WILL tell you, the next chapter WON'T necessarily be the last one, depending on the pairings.
As for the pairings, well, that's where all of YOU wonderful peeps come in! Again, YOU all get a say in what happens! I'll add the next chapter ONLY when enough peeps review! And, DarkSamurai, NO comments about my pairings, unless it's praise! Lol!
Please Read and Review! ^_^
