~* Oooh, whee. I don't have writer's block! And today was the last day of
school for me! YAY! Anyway, please R&R. I want to know that someone's
actually reading this. I swear to god that if you don't R&R, this story is
not going to continue. So please, I'm even asking nicely [that's a first]
to R&R! THANKS THEE! *~ ~*Astraychild*~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 3: The dark mysterious figure and the fall of someone~~~~~~~~~~~
The young boy rushes toward his house, trying desperately to reach his home before anyone else does. His blond hair tied up in pony tail swings back and forth from his neck to the back of his head. He holds on tightly onto his bag of items, hoping for the best. He wanted to do something, but all he could do is run as fast as he possibly can and hope for the best.
In his sight he spots his house and rushes but suddenly comes to a stop. He looks around curiously trying to find something or someone. He breathes heavily, trying to catch his breath from running so fast. He thinks to himself A/N "Self.what am I doing here?"* "What is going on here? Where are those Goblins? They were heading here just a little while ago. Hmm.I wonder if Alma is safe. I hope she is.she's the only family member I have left in this world.Ugh, stop thinking so negatively and start looking for her you dumbass!"
He walks around looking for his sister. He sets his bag of items on the ground where he last stood. His violet shirt reflects the sunlight shinning its way into the courtyard. He spots something in the distance. But it was dark and faint; he couldn't make it out. He whispers to himself, "What.or who is that? Could it be Alma? No.it sure doesn't look like her at all.I guess I have to find out for myself then."
He stops walking all of a sudden and looks beyond the distance. He sees someone there with some kind of weapon. But it was too dark for him to make out what kind of weapon it was. All he could see was a long, dark shadow of some weapon. He hears a scream in the distance. He looks around anxiously trying to find his sister. He could make out a faint cry saying, "HELP! Please, somebody help me! Brother! Anyone! Please help me! Ahhh!"
The boy heard the cry and runs as fast as he could, possibly faster than he did before toward the dark, mysterious figure. He unsheathes his sword and holds it in one hand. He calls out to the distance not caring if any kind of monster can hear him or not. "ALMA! Hold on! Be strong! I'm coming! Please hold on a little longer! ALMA!" The scream suddenly stopped and the dark figure fell to the ground. All he could hear at that moment was his heart beat racing against time, his tears dripping and the loud *THUD* noise of the figure. Still, he charged on forward to try to see what has happened.
~*A/N that was an interesting chapter, no? R&R! This is umm.like the third time I mentioned it.so make me happy REVIEW, I don't care, I'll take flames, gimme anything you want! I'm desperate; I'll take anything you give! I will not continue this story until you; the reader sends at least 1 review. THANKS THEE!~* ~*Astraychild*~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 3: The dark mysterious figure and the fall of someone~~~~~~~~~~~
The young boy rushes toward his house, trying desperately to reach his home before anyone else does. His blond hair tied up in pony tail swings back and forth from his neck to the back of his head. He holds on tightly onto his bag of items, hoping for the best. He wanted to do something, but all he could do is run as fast as he possibly can and hope for the best.
In his sight he spots his house and rushes but suddenly comes to a stop. He looks around curiously trying to find something or someone. He breathes heavily, trying to catch his breath from running so fast. He thinks to himself A/N "Self.what am I doing here?"* "What is going on here? Where are those Goblins? They were heading here just a little while ago. Hmm.I wonder if Alma is safe. I hope she is.she's the only family member I have left in this world.Ugh, stop thinking so negatively and start looking for her you dumbass!"
He walks around looking for his sister. He sets his bag of items on the ground where he last stood. His violet shirt reflects the sunlight shinning its way into the courtyard. He spots something in the distance. But it was dark and faint; he couldn't make it out. He whispers to himself, "What.or who is that? Could it be Alma? No.it sure doesn't look like her at all.I guess I have to find out for myself then."
He stops walking all of a sudden and looks beyond the distance. He sees someone there with some kind of weapon. But it was too dark for him to make out what kind of weapon it was. All he could see was a long, dark shadow of some weapon. He hears a scream in the distance. He looks around anxiously trying to find his sister. He could make out a faint cry saying, "HELP! Please, somebody help me! Brother! Anyone! Please help me! Ahhh!"
The boy heard the cry and runs as fast as he could, possibly faster than he did before toward the dark, mysterious figure. He unsheathes his sword and holds it in one hand. He calls out to the distance not caring if any kind of monster can hear him or not. "ALMA! Hold on! Be strong! I'm coming! Please hold on a little longer! ALMA!" The scream suddenly stopped and the dark figure fell to the ground. All he could hear at that moment was his heart beat racing against time, his tears dripping and the loud *THUD* noise of the figure. Still, he charged on forward to try to see what has happened.
~*A/N that was an interesting chapter, no? R&R! This is umm.like the third time I mentioned it.so make me happy REVIEW, I don't care, I'll take flames, gimme anything you want! I'm desperate; I'll take anything you give! I will not continue this story until you; the reader sends at least 1 review. THANKS THEE!~* ~*Astraychild*~
