A/N: Hey everyone! Okay so you didn't like it so far cuz' u haven't
reviewed! How about this we recognize ur name in the reviews and we write
them in our authors notes! Okay this chapter will be more interesting and
not bland. Get ready for a party!
Disclaimer: Okay, can I get through the sentence this time w/ out the fleabag Sirius interrupting? So anyways. we know that we don't own the characters. But anything you don't recognize. you get the picture.
Sirius: Yo. girlies what are your real identities!!!
Firework & Waterfall: O brother, are you talking to us again. For the 20,000,000th time we're not going to tell you that yet.
Remus: Hey quit torturing my bro he means well but don't forget he got dropped on the head as a baby at least 21,000,037 times.
Firework: Are you sure that that's the exact number? It seems like 10,000,000 times more.
Waterfall: Aw poor widdle siwius! *Jumps on Sirius and attacks him with tickles. * Did you get bumped on the head?
Sirius: GET. OFF. ME. I. CANT. BREATHE. GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ATTACK! JAMES SAVE . ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
James: You know what, I don't think I will. Firework, why don't you join him.
Firework: My pleasure. *Jumps on Sirius and tickles him too. *
Sirius: NOOOO! Just. Write. The. Story!
Firework & Waterfall: Ohhhhh! We wuv you too Siwius.
Waterfall: But that doesn't mean you're off the hook!!!
Sirius: HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO NOT THE HAIR!!!!!!!
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Last chapter. When Lily got home her mother told her to get changed and come with her. So she changed into her second favorite outfit and left. When they reached the place they were headed she opened the door. "SUPRISE!!!!!" everyone in the room shouted. Lily was so surprised and happy. They did all of this for her?
Surprise!!!! :
She was so happy that she didn't know what to say. There was all of her close friends from Hogwarts, and all of her muggle friends. From Hogwarts there was Sophia, Jenna, Brittany, Daria, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter (A/N: Uch!!!!!), Josh, Becca, Amos, Patrick, Mac, Tracy, and Bethany. Her muggle friends were Carla, Bridget, Andrea, Eve, Jason, Brent, Bernie, and Troy. Her friends all ran up to her and wished her 'Happy Birthday' and they gave her gifts. She just wondered why James and Peter were here considering they weren't good friends. James looked at her, she looked different, better, but different. He couldn't put his finger on the change.
Over the next week Lily lost all the weight that she wanted to. She wondered how on earth she did it so fast. Since she did, her mom took her to Diagon Alley. First she picked out some new robes. Next she picked out 2 dress robes. One was emerald green with rhinestones around the neck, sleeves, and the bottom of it. The other was pale blue with silver sparkles all over it. She shopped for all of the new supplies she would need. Finally she went to the only muggle store in the whole alley. It was called "Muggle Clothes for the Witch and Wizard". She bought many new things, mostly in the colors of emerald green, black, white, pink, pale blue, and purple.
When she was done shopping she ran into her two best friends at Hogwarts, Jenna and Sophia. Jenna had short (A/N: below her chin), layered, straight black hair and drop-dead gorgeous hazel eyes and had clear tan skin and a gorgeous, thin figure even though she was a little bit on the short side. Sophia had curly, brown, thin hair and sparkling brown eyes. She was tall, thin, tan and a chocoholic with a body any girl would dye for. She was just as gorgeous as Jenna. They were easily the prettiest girls in school, not to mention popular because they were extremely nice and great friends with the Marauders. They were even smart and almost the top of every class except for Lily, James, Sirius, and Remus. These two were the best of friends, people would die to have such a great friendship as theirs, and they had been friends for 12 years now.
"Oh my gosh," said Jenna, "You look so different. I can't believe how much you've changed since the party."
"Of course," said Sophia in her musical voice, "she means that in the best way possible." She made a mock frown at Jenna. "We haven't seen you in forever. What have you been up to?"
"Well I think you could see the outcome of what I've been up to," said Lily. "But, what about yourselves."
"Shopping," they said together, than they all laughed.
"We also went on a cruise together," stated Jenna. "It was a lot of fun."
"Well we'll see you on the train," shouted Sophia as they started to walk away, "We got to go." As the 2 left Lily was excited because if they thought she looked great, she really did.
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Lily planned to meet up with Jenna and Sophia at 10:30 at King's Cross. Her father was pushing her trolley. As she reached the entrance she said good-bye to her mum and dad. As she walked through she immediately found Sophia and Jenna. They were the ones surrounded by all the boys. "Hey Lily, how are you?" asked Sophia.
"I'm great," said Lily noticing many boys turn their heads 2 her. "Let's get a compartment and fast." They ran inside of the nearest compartment, which was thankfully empty, and started talking to each other at 100 words per a minute. 15 minutes later the Marauders walked in. They sat down and everyone started talking. "Oh wait a minute," said Lily, "Remus, don't we have to go to the prefect's compartment."
"Oh yeah you're right," said Remus. They both waved there good-byes and left the other five. Then of all people in the world, Severus Snape walked in.
"Oh, if it isn't little Snivilus Snape with no one to hang out with," said Sirius. "Do you want to hang out with us?" The boys made disgusted faces at this remark, while the girls sighed as if saying 'Don't be so mean to him'. Snape walked out saying words that aren't repeatable. A few minutes before they reached the station the five changed into their robes. Leaving the train they met up with Lily and Remus and got into one of the horseless carriages. They made their way into the school. Walking into the great hall everyone gasped, they missed this place and they were happy to be home.
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Sirius: Thank goodness that those two had to write this chapter or else they'd never get off of me.
Firework & Waterfall: Oh Sirius *hands are behind their backs* we've got a surprise for you.
Sirius: WICKED!!!!!!! What is it?
Firework & Waterfall: This *they start to tickle Sirius again*
Firework: By the way, while you can't remember anything, my name is Sophia.
Waterfall: Oh yeah, and I'm Jenna.
Remus & James: He may not remember but we will.
Firework & Waterfall: We'll see about that!
A/N: Read and Review. The more you review the faster we'll publish the next chapter. Thanks a bunch.
Disclaimer: Okay, can I get through the sentence this time w/ out the fleabag Sirius interrupting? So anyways. we know that we don't own the characters. But anything you don't recognize. you get the picture.
Sirius: Yo. girlies what are your real identities!!!
Firework & Waterfall: O brother, are you talking to us again. For the 20,000,000th time we're not going to tell you that yet.
Remus: Hey quit torturing my bro he means well but don't forget he got dropped on the head as a baby at least 21,000,037 times.
Firework: Are you sure that that's the exact number? It seems like 10,000,000 times more.
Waterfall: Aw poor widdle siwius! *Jumps on Sirius and attacks him with tickles. * Did you get bumped on the head?
Sirius: GET. OFF. ME. I. CANT. BREATHE. GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ATTACK! JAMES SAVE . ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
James: You know what, I don't think I will. Firework, why don't you join him.
Firework: My pleasure. *Jumps on Sirius and tickles him too. *
Sirius: NOOOO! Just. Write. The. Story!
Firework & Waterfall: Ohhhhh! We wuv you too Siwius.
Waterfall: But that doesn't mean you're off the hook!!!
Sirius: HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO NOT THE HAIR!!!!!!!
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Last chapter. When Lily got home her mother told her to get changed and come with her. So she changed into her second favorite outfit and left. When they reached the place they were headed she opened the door. "SUPRISE!!!!!" everyone in the room shouted. Lily was so surprised and happy. They did all of this for her?
Surprise!!!! :
She was so happy that she didn't know what to say. There was all of her close friends from Hogwarts, and all of her muggle friends. From Hogwarts there was Sophia, Jenna, Brittany, Daria, James, Sirius, Remus, Peter (A/N: Uch!!!!!), Josh, Becca, Amos, Patrick, Mac, Tracy, and Bethany. Her muggle friends were Carla, Bridget, Andrea, Eve, Jason, Brent, Bernie, and Troy. Her friends all ran up to her and wished her 'Happy Birthday' and they gave her gifts. She just wondered why James and Peter were here considering they weren't good friends. James looked at her, she looked different, better, but different. He couldn't put his finger on the change.
Over the next week Lily lost all the weight that she wanted to. She wondered how on earth she did it so fast. Since she did, her mom took her to Diagon Alley. First she picked out some new robes. Next she picked out 2 dress robes. One was emerald green with rhinestones around the neck, sleeves, and the bottom of it. The other was pale blue with silver sparkles all over it. She shopped for all of the new supplies she would need. Finally she went to the only muggle store in the whole alley. It was called "Muggle Clothes for the Witch and Wizard". She bought many new things, mostly in the colors of emerald green, black, white, pink, pale blue, and purple.
When she was done shopping she ran into her two best friends at Hogwarts, Jenna and Sophia. Jenna had short (A/N: below her chin), layered, straight black hair and drop-dead gorgeous hazel eyes and had clear tan skin and a gorgeous, thin figure even though she was a little bit on the short side. Sophia had curly, brown, thin hair and sparkling brown eyes. She was tall, thin, tan and a chocoholic with a body any girl would dye for. She was just as gorgeous as Jenna. They were easily the prettiest girls in school, not to mention popular because they were extremely nice and great friends with the Marauders. They were even smart and almost the top of every class except for Lily, James, Sirius, and Remus. These two were the best of friends, people would die to have such a great friendship as theirs, and they had been friends for 12 years now.
"Oh my gosh," said Jenna, "You look so different. I can't believe how much you've changed since the party."
"Of course," said Sophia in her musical voice, "she means that in the best way possible." She made a mock frown at Jenna. "We haven't seen you in forever. What have you been up to?"
"Well I think you could see the outcome of what I've been up to," said Lily. "But, what about yourselves."
"Shopping," they said together, than they all laughed.
"We also went on a cruise together," stated Jenna. "It was a lot of fun."
"Well we'll see you on the train," shouted Sophia as they started to walk away, "We got to go." As the 2 left Lily was excited because if they thought she looked great, she really did.
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Lily planned to meet up with Jenna and Sophia at 10:30 at King's Cross. Her father was pushing her trolley. As she reached the entrance she said good-bye to her mum and dad. As she walked through she immediately found Sophia and Jenna. They were the ones surrounded by all the boys. "Hey Lily, how are you?" asked Sophia.
"I'm great," said Lily noticing many boys turn their heads 2 her. "Let's get a compartment and fast." They ran inside of the nearest compartment, which was thankfully empty, and started talking to each other at 100 words per a minute. 15 minutes later the Marauders walked in. They sat down and everyone started talking. "Oh wait a minute," said Lily, "Remus, don't we have to go to the prefect's compartment."
"Oh yeah you're right," said Remus. They both waved there good-byes and left the other five. Then of all people in the world, Severus Snape walked in.
"Oh, if it isn't little Snivilus Snape with no one to hang out with," said Sirius. "Do you want to hang out with us?" The boys made disgusted faces at this remark, while the girls sighed as if saying 'Don't be so mean to him'. Snape walked out saying words that aren't repeatable. A few minutes before they reached the station the five changed into their robes. Leaving the train they met up with Lily and Remus and got into one of the horseless carriages. They made their way into the school. Walking into the great hall everyone gasped, they missed this place and they were happy to be home.
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Sirius: Thank goodness that those two had to write this chapter or else they'd never get off of me.
Firework & Waterfall: Oh Sirius *hands are behind their backs* we've got a surprise for you.
Sirius: WICKED!!!!!!! What is it?
Firework & Waterfall: This *they start to tickle Sirius again*
Firework: By the way, while you can't remember anything, my name is Sophia.
Waterfall: Oh yeah, and I'm Jenna.
Remus & James: He may not remember but we will.
Firework & Waterfall: We'll see about that!
A/N: Read and Review. The more you review the faster we'll publish the next chapter. Thanks a bunch.
