Chapter three, uh....I am suffering from writer's block, If you have any ideas on how to help, PLEASE DO!
Title: China's angel
Author: JHS Rockerbaby
Chapter:Goodbyes
The ride to the trail was silent, Mei Lin was nervous. She had never really ridden a horse before, but riding a horse alone was safer than a rickshaw or a buggy. The Mongolians might have thought they were royality and tried to kill them. The word "trail" was an over statement really. There was no trail it was just a place where no mongolians were spotted. The so called "trail" was covered with grasses and weeds and trees. Shang led the way, while Mulan followed,holding Sai Yen, then Mei Lin.
"Are we getting closer?" Mei Lin asked, hoping they were.
"It's not much Further." Mulan replied with determination.
"Mulan, if you'd like, I'll hold Sai Yen." Shang offered. Mulan's grip on him slightly tightened
"No, it's alright I'll hold him."
Mulan rode on, holding her son as close to her as possible, he was still asleep. his breathes were steady and soothing. Mulan sighed, and hummed, a non known tune, soft and reassuring. That was something Mulan had noticed, she had, now, the traits of a mother. Was the song something parents learned? who knew, she thought only half oh her was paying attention. That tune, she had heard it once, no words were coming to mind, though. Intranced, she hummed.
"That's a beautiful tune, Mulan, what is it?" Mei lin questioned.
"I-i don't know, I just thought of it." Mulan confessed, "It sounds familure, but... no words come to mind."
Meilin just smiled. Mulan closed her eyes for a moment, she saw something, her. Walking through her Temple bias. 'what is this about?' she thought. then she saw something else. Shang. Fighting, alone. Losing, alone. dying with out her by his side. Mulan quickly shook that idea aside, but it bothered her.
"Look! there's the trail." Shang said pointing. Mulan even snapped out of her train of thought. Sure enough there was a trail, People going in small groups to the south to escape the mongolians. There were families of all types kids, elders, adults, men,women, there were about 50 people or so.
"General!" one of the men yelled, noticing Shang. "Why are they only after women and children? My wife was killed but I was spared, we were in the same room, Why?" the man mourned.
"My daughter was murdered, right in our house! But noone else go hurt" a wife cried. "She was beautiful, and just about to marry." the lady said, to noone in particular. "why, general, why was she killed?" Before Shang could say anything Mulan had stepped up.
"I can answer that." she called out.
"Captain Fa." the people there gasped, she had become a legend to everyone, being a simple farm girl, she had inspired hope to everyone. She sybolised faith, everyone liked Captain Fa.
"The huns want revenge.............." Mulan hesitated, "One the girl that destoyed their leader." Everyone there knew what "Girl" she was talking about.
"What are you going to do?" an elder asked looking at Shang.
"I'll come up with a way to end this war." Shang replied Mulan looked down at Sai Yen, he was finally awake. Mulan gave him a "it'll all be alright" smile. Sai Yen yawned, and smiled at her. Mulan felt her throat tightening. She knew she was about to cry.
"Everyone we are about to leave!" A man yelled loud enough for everyone to hear. Mulan swallowed the lump in her throat and tried to hide her tears. She knew she was making a hard descision.
"Mulan, I will see you in a month or so. You will be safer in the south." Shang mumbled softly to her. "I love you."Mulan tried to fight back the tears with no avail.
"I love you." she said as she went up with the leaving people.She road up next to Mei lin and quietly talked to her as she left. Mei lin nodded, then Mulan slowed down, so did Mei Lin. Mulan moved close to Sai Yen and kissed him on the head, handed him to Mei Lin then turned her horse, Khan, around and rode at top speed to Shang, who was standing on the ground watching her. She road up to him and jumped off of Khan and ran to him, Crying.
"Mulan? what are you doing?!" he yelled as he steadied her by her shoulders.
"I can't Shang, I'm the reason the mongolians are here! If I leave then I'm avoiding the problem! I can't do that" she cried and sobbed. "This will be over soon we will go to the south and get Popo and Sai yen back." Shang pulled her closer, he knew that showing affection was against tradition, but he cared for her and there was noone to watch them, judge them and tell them that they were wrong. he tried to soothe her, he never was good at that type of affection, words.
"Mulan, let's go home, we can figure out what to do about the mongolians there." Mulan looked at him and nodded, numbly. Shang helped her up on his horse, then got on behind her. With her tears she might not have been able to follow him. Khan followed up shang's horse.
Half way home, Shang had noticed Mulan's body fall against his. She had fallen asleep. Softly he heard her hum something a soft tune. Very loving. he held her close, wrapping his arms around her while holding on to the reigns, He sighed, 'Now what do we do about the Mongolians?' he thought sadly, it would have been nothing if he had died but now he had to worry about Mulan, and Sai Yen growing up with out a mother and a father.
Okay this is the end of the third chapter, I want Ideas and reviews. thanks
tell me Ideas at azn_otohime@hotmail.com
Thanks again!
Jhs Rockerbaby
Title: China's angel
Author: JHS Rockerbaby
Chapter:Goodbyes
The ride to the trail was silent, Mei Lin was nervous. She had never really ridden a horse before, but riding a horse alone was safer than a rickshaw or a buggy. The Mongolians might have thought they were royality and tried to kill them. The word "trail" was an over statement really. There was no trail it was just a place where no mongolians were spotted. The so called "trail" was covered with grasses and weeds and trees. Shang led the way, while Mulan followed,holding Sai Yen, then Mei Lin.
"Are we getting closer?" Mei Lin asked, hoping they were.
"It's not much Further." Mulan replied with determination.
"Mulan, if you'd like, I'll hold Sai Yen." Shang offered. Mulan's grip on him slightly tightened
"No, it's alright I'll hold him."
Mulan rode on, holding her son as close to her as possible, he was still asleep. his breathes were steady and soothing. Mulan sighed, and hummed, a non known tune, soft and reassuring. That was something Mulan had noticed, she had, now, the traits of a mother. Was the song something parents learned? who knew, she thought only half oh her was paying attention. That tune, she had heard it once, no words were coming to mind, though. Intranced, she hummed.
"That's a beautiful tune, Mulan, what is it?" Mei lin questioned.
"I-i don't know, I just thought of it." Mulan confessed, "It sounds familure, but... no words come to mind."
Meilin just smiled. Mulan closed her eyes for a moment, she saw something, her. Walking through her Temple bias. 'what is this about?' she thought. then she saw something else. Shang. Fighting, alone. Losing, alone. dying with out her by his side. Mulan quickly shook that idea aside, but it bothered her.
"Look! there's the trail." Shang said pointing. Mulan even snapped out of her train of thought. Sure enough there was a trail, People going in small groups to the south to escape the mongolians. There were families of all types kids, elders, adults, men,women, there were about 50 people or so.
"General!" one of the men yelled, noticing Shang. "Why are they only after women and children? My wife was killed but I was spared, we were in the same room, Why?" the man mourned.
"My daughter was murdered, right in our house! But noone else go hurt" a wife cried. "She was beautiful, and just about to marry." the lady said, to noone in particular. "why, general, why was she killed?" Before Shang could say anything Mulan had stepped up.
"I can answer that." she called out.
"Captain Fa." the people there gasped, she had become a legend to everyone, being a simple farm girl, she had inspired hope to everyone. She sybolised faith, everyone liked Captain Fa.
"The huns want revenge.............." Mulan hesitated, "One the girl that destoyed their leader." Everyone there knew what "Girl" she was talking about.
"What are you going to do?" an elder asked looking at Shang.
"I'll come up with a way to end this war." Shang replied Mulan looked down at Sai Yen, he was finally awake. Mulan gave him a "it'll all be alright" smile. Sai Yen yawned, and smiled at her. Mulan felt her throat tightening. She knew she was about to cry.
"Everyone we are about to leave!" A man yelled loud enough for everyone to hear. Mulan swallowed the lump in her throat and tried to hide her tears. She knew she was making a hard descision.
"Mulan, I will see you in a month or so. You will be safer in the south." Shang mumbled softly to her. "I love you."Mulan tried to fight back the tears with no avail.
"I love you." she said as she went up with the leaving people.She road up next to Mei lin and quietly talked to her as she left. Mei lin nodded, then Mulan slowed down, so did Mei Lin. Mulan moved close to Sai Yen and kissed him on the head, handed him to Mei Lin then turned her horse, Khan, around and rode at top speed to Shang, who was standing on the ground watching her. She road up to him and jumped off of Khan and ran to him, Crying.
"Mulan? what are you doing?!" he yelled as he steadied her by her shoulders.
"I can't Shang, I'm the reason the mongolians are here! If I leave then I'm avoiding the problem! I can't do that" she cried and sobbed. "This will be over soon we will go to the south and get Popo and Sai yen back." Shang pulled her closer, he knew that showing affection was against tradition, but he cared for her and there was noone to watch them, judge them and tell them that they were wrong. he tried to soothe her, he never was good at that type of affection, words.
"Mulan, let's go home, we can figure out what to do about the mongolians there." Mulan looked at him and nodded, numbly. Shang helped her up on his horse, then got on behind her. With her tears she might not have been able to follow him. Khan followed up shang's horse.
Half way home, Shang had noticed Mulan's body fall against his. She had fallen asleep. Softly he heard her hum something a soft tune. Very loving. he held her close, wrapping his arms around her while holding on to the reigns, He sighed, 'Now what do we do about the Mongolians?' he thought sadly, it would have been nothing if he had died but now he had to worry about Mulan, and Sai Yen growing up with out a mother and a father.
Okay this is the end of the third chapter, I want Ideas and reviews. thanks
tell me Ideas at azn_otohime@hotmail.com
Thanks again!
Jhs Rockerbaby
