China's angel...... finally another chapter
By Jhs Rockerbaby
Okay I have an excuse I had a good idea.... Fanfic.net...bit the dust for a while. then I forgot... Gotta nother good idea and my computer decided it wanted to visit computer heaven..or hell. whichever it went to....So I'm back with an idea and a computer.
Fan fic .....hold out a few hours..please!!!
Thanks for the reviews.
China's angel
Chapter: the plan
Mulan rode back home. This time, she was just in tears. Shang just looked straight ahead. What could he tell her? he could have read her the entire dictionary and there wouldn't be a single word in there that would fix her broken heart.
Finally they reached their house. Mulan dismounted Khan and went to the house. Shang followed her. He knew he had to talk to her.
"Mulan, this war will be over soon and we will all be back here before you know it." Mulan sniffed. Shang felt his heart break. Mulan had started to cry. Soft sobs. Shang put his arm around her and sat her down on a nearby chair. he felt her sobs in his sholders.
"Mulan, please. Don't cry. It'll be okay. Trust me." Mulan sobbed. She was shaking. It had taken her a half hour but she had finally sobbed herself down to hiccups. Mulan had never cried that much. Shang thought.
"what if we never see them agian?" She demanded. Shang looked at her eyes. She wouldn't look him in the eyes. There had to be something else. He thought.
"Mulan, there is something you are not telling me. What are you hiding?" Shang could feel the deathly silence in the room. Mulan shivered and looked sickly pale.
"Shang..... I'm............ I'm.. well.. Pregnant..again" she finally mumbled, as she looked at her feet. Shang's eyes widened.
"how far are you?"
"uh... 2 or 3 months."
"why didn't you leave with my mother."
"I didn't want you fighting alone." Mulan suddenly felt stupid.
"All three of us can't hold swords and fight. What if you get hurt?"
"I'm only 2 or three months along. uh... in a few months when It becomes apparent I will leave for the south after sai-yen and popo. But like you said the war should be over soon." Shang knew those words would eventually come back and bite him. but he didn't think it would have been with in the hour.
"I for one cannot wait til the baby's born. This child will never know of war or hatered." Mulan smiled. Shang had said something right.
The next day.
Mulan had ridden all morning with shang. Camp was within eyesight. Shang smiled at Mulan as they got closer. Mulan gave him a knowing smile. She, as always, had a plan.
"okay guys, we are going to go into camp. Slow them down. ruin their weapons. The huns are very traditional. Their weapons tent will be in the middle next to the captain or general or leader person's tent. We can get rid of the weapons and take the leader as a hostage. They will HAVE to go back."
All of the men looked at Mulan. Where does she get all this information? How did she do that?
"uh... Mulan. How are we going to get into the camp? Go by night?" Shang just hoped it didn't include him being a concubine look-a-like.
"Hm... They're expecting the girl idea.. so that's out." there was a pause and about 10 or so men sighed with releif.
"Okay. I'll turn myself in they will wait til the afternoon tomorrow to kill me. they want a big crowd to watch as their enemy dies. They will have me guarded. I will act beaten. They will have to fall asleep sooner or later. You guys come in. make a diversion, then you guys get me out and we capture the captain, Ken-shi I believe that's his name. he will be the last out of the tent. Everyone will be past him and we can capture him."
The men at the camp smiled. That's the Mulan they knew.
"No, It's too risky Mulan." Shang pleaded. Mulan stood tall.
"shang, trust me. I know what I'm doing. I know you guys will save me." Shang sighed. He knew Mulan always won the arguements.
"Just once I wish you would save me some dignity and let me at least pretend I won an arguement at least in front of the men." Mulan smiled
"Shang we knew she had you beat from the beginning." one man yelled. Mulan had thought out the whole plan. It was bound to go flawlessly. Right?
Okay end of my 4th chapter R/R please!
thank you for all the help.
By Jhs Rockerbaby
Okay I have an excuse I had a good idea.... Fanfic.net...bit the dust for a while. then I forgot... Gotta nother good idea and my computer decided it wanted to visit computer heaven..or hell. whichever it went to....So I'm back with an idea and a computer.
Fan fic .....hold out a few hours..please!!!
Thanks for the reviews.
China's angel
Chapter: the plan
Mulan rode back home. This time, she was just in tears. Shang just looked straight ahead. What could he tell her? he could have read her the entire dictionary and there wouldn't be a single word in there that would fix her broken heart.
Finally they reached their house. Mulan dismounted Khan and went to the house. Shang followed her. He knew he had to talk to her.
"Mulan, this war will be over soon and we will all be back here before you know it." Mulan sniffed. Shang felt his heart break. Mulan had started to cry. Soft sobs. Shang put his arm around her and sat her down on a nearby chair. he felt her sobs in his sholders.
"Mulan, please. Don't cry. It'll be okay. Trust me." Mulan sobbed. She was shaking. It had taken her a half hour but she had finally sobbed herself down to hiccups. Mulan had never cried that much. Shang thought.
"what if we never see them agian?" She demanded. Shang looked at her eyes. She wouldn't look him in the eyes. There had to be something else. He thought.
"Mulan, there is something you are not telling me. What are you hiding?" Shang could feel the deathly silence in the room. Mulan shivered and looked sickly pale.
"Shang..... I'm............ I'm.. well.. Pregnant..again" she finally mumbled, as she looked at her feet. Shang's eyes widened.
"how far are you?"
"uh... 2 or 3 months."
"why didn't you leave with my mother."
"I didn't want you fighting alone." Mulan suddenly felt stupid.
"All three of us can't hold swords and fight. What if you get hurt?"
"I'm only 2 or three months along. uh... in a few months when It becomes apparent I will leave for the south after sai-yen and popo. But like you said the war should be over soon." Shang knew those words would eventually come back and bite him. but he didn't think it would have been with in the hour.
"I for one cannot wait til the baby's born. This child will never know of war or hatered." Mulan smiled. Shang had said something right.
The next day.
Mulan had ridden all morning with shang. Camp was within eyesight. Shang smiled at Mulan as they got closer. Mulan gave him a knowing smile. She, as always, had a plan.
"okay guys, we are going to go into camp. Slow them down. ruin their weapons. The huns are very traditional. Their weapons tent will be in the middle next to the captain or general or leader person's tent. We can get rid of the weapons and take the leader as a hostage. They will HAVE to go back."
All of the men looked at Mulan. Where does she get all this information? How did she do that?
"uh... Mulan. How are we going to get into the camp? Go by night?" Shang just hoped it didn't include him being a concubine look-a-like.
"Hm... They're expecting the girl idea.. so that's out." there was a pause and about 10 or so men sighed with releif.
"Okay. I'll turn myself in they will wait til the afternoon tomorrow to kill me. they want a big crowd to watch as their enemy dies. They will have me guarded. I will act beaten. They will have to fall asleep sooner or later. You guys come in. make a diversion, then you guys get me out and we capture the captain, Ken-shi I believe that's his name. he will be the last out of the tent. Everyone will be past him and we can capture him."
The men at the camp smiled. That's the Mulan they knew.
"No, It's too risky Mulan." Shang pleaded. Mulan stood tall.
"shang, trust me. I know what I'm doing. I know you guys will save me." Shang sighed. He knew Mulan always won the arguements.
"Just once I wish you would save me some dignity and let me at least pretend I won an arguement at least in front of the men." Mulan smiled
"Shang we knew she had you beat from the beginning." one man yelled. Mulan had thought out the whole plan. It was bound to go flawlessly. Right?
Okay end of my 4th chapter R/R please!
thank you for all the help.
