BONUS CHAPTER!!! TADA!!!
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Hi and Hello. Tis me, Ravecat, not Emi. Well, I'm here for a couple of reasons. 1) To go over some things I overlooked 2) To show you some ideas that didn't quite make it into the story.
Now, for the things I overlooked. First off was Emi's hat, she did get it back. The paramedics found it on her when they took her to the Emergency Room. She was very happy to have her hat back.
Second off, was Emi's wound from when Zukin stabbed her in the shoulder. When the nurse came to tend to Rage's new wound, she had another nurse tend to Emi's shoulder.The wound was not too severe, and it barely affected her at all. Rages wound, on the other hand, was fairly harsh. Zukin's knife actually lodged into his bone a little.
Next, I would like to point out something. I realize that Yuni had very little go wrong with her. What I would like to point is that I did not favor her (if i favored anybody it would be Emi), it just worked out, that minimal things happened to her.
Now that those are cleared up, I would like to praise your eyes with ideas that I didn't include. Deleted Scenes so to speak.
First Idea I overlooked, was at the scene, with the rainy day, and Emi's shirt getting wet. Originally I was going to have Boldo show up as a pervert and harass Emi. Then she was to run away crying, while people on the street yelled at Boldo. This was also supposed to be an extra conversation between Rage and Emi, as she told him about it.
Another Idea I left out, was having Yuni tied to a Ceiling fan at one point. My first instinct was to put her on a ceiling fan, while locked in the bathroom.. But i figured a bathroom was too small. Then I was going to put her on a ceiling fan in the kitchen. Finally I realized, that a ceiling fan, would not support a 14 year old girl.
One other idea I changed, was the fact that Zukin first met Emi in Yuni's house. Originally, the whole distraction at the hospital with Rage being rushed in, was never going to happen. Originally Emi was going to walk out of Akira's room, and Zukin would be sitting on top of a door, and that was going to be where they met.
Finally, last thing I changed was this. Zukin was originally going to be pinned against a wall by Emi, and police officers came and arrested Zukin. I changed it at the last minute for a couple of reasons. First reason was, a break in through the window made more sense, since only Yuni and Emi were allowed to see Rage and Akira, so Zukin wouldn't exactly be allowed to waltz in. As for the window, I saw it, and it sounded more dramatic then police and a wall pin. Also, for a maniac like Zukin, a mental institution makes more sense than a Prison.
NOW FOR BLOOPERS!
Blooper 1: Zukin
"Maybe Zukin lied before. Maybe Zukin didn't want to tell Emi that she has something between her teeth!"
Blooper 2: Yuni
"Emi, I heard you scream, Are you- *laughs*...I'm sorry, She just looks so serious.. Ooooh I'm the poor heroine of the story *laughs more*"
Blooper 3: Rage
"Want me to pick you up, or do you want to walk your cute ass here by yourself?..What?! I couldn't resist!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~*****************~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*************** ******~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That is that..I understand those bloopers were probably corny ^_^; anyway....Hope you enjoyed the fic!
Hi and Hello. Tis me, Ravecat, not Emi. Well, I'm here for a couple of reasons. 1) To go over some things I overlooked 2) To show you some ideas that didn't quite make it into the story.
Now, for the things I overlooked. First off was Emi's hat, she did get it back. The paramedics found it on her when they took her to the Emergency Room. She was very happy to have her hat back.
Second off, was Emi's wound from when Zukin stabbed her in the shoulder. When the nurse came to tend to Rage's new wound, she had another nurse tend to Emi's shoulder.The wound was not too severe, and it barely affected her at all. Rages wound, on the other hand, was fairly harsh. Zukin's knife actually lodged into his bone a little.
Next, I would like to point out something. I realize that Yuni had very little go wrong with her. What I would like to point is that I did not favor her (if i favored anybody it would be Emi), it just worked out, that minimal things happened to her.
Now that those are cleared up, I would like to praise your eyes with ideas that I didn't include. Deleted Scenes so to speak.
First Idea I overlooked, was at the scene, with the rainy day, and Emi's shirt getting wet. Originally I was going to have Boldo show up as a pervert and harass Emi. Then she was to run away crying, while people on the street yelled at Boldo. This was also supposed to be an extra conversation between Rage and Emi, as she told him about it.
Another Idea I left out, was having Yuni tied to a Ceiling fan at one point. My first instinct was to put her on a ceiling fan, while locked in the bathroom.. But i figured a bathroom was too small. Then I was going to put her on a ceiling fan in the kitchen. Finally I realized, that a ceiling fan, would not support a 14 year old girl.
One other idea I changed, was the fact that Zukin first met Emi in Yuni's house. Originally, the whole distraction at the hospital with Rage being rushed in, was never going to happen. Originally Emi was going to walk out of Akira's room, and Zukin would be sitting on top of a door, and that was going to be where they met.
Finally, last thing I changed was this. Zukin was originally going to be pinned against a wall by Emi, and police officers came and arrested Zukin. I changed it at the last minute for a couple of reasons. First reason was, a break in through the window made more sense, since only Yuni and Emi were allowed to see Rage and Akira, so Zukin wouldn't exactly be allowed to waltz in. As for the window, I saw it, and it sounded more dramatic then police and a wall pin. Also, for a maniac like Zukin, a mental institution makes more sense than a Prison.
NOW FOR BLOOPERS!
Blooper 1: Zukin
"Maybe Zukin lied before. Maybe Zukin didn't want to tell Emi that she has something between her teeth!"
Blooper 2: Yuni
"Emi, I heard you scream, Are you- *laughs*...I'm sorry, She just looks so serious.. Ooooh I'm the poor heroine of the story *laughs more*"
Blooper 3: Rage
"Want me to pick you up, or do you want to walk your cute ass here by yourself?..What?! I couldn't resist!"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~*****************~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*************** ******~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That is that..I understand those bloopers were probably corny ^_^; anyway....Hope you enjoyed the fic!
