Sorry I took awhile to update. Exams all this week so yea I was kind of tired. Man I couldn't believe when I posted the first 2 chapters of this, 6 reviews right away. My other story I've got about 1 review per chapter. So ya 10 chapters 10 reviews. It kind of stinks but Oh well I don't care I just like that some people like it. Same for this one. Oh and btw when you see ( ) in the story that's probably just me making some stupid comment. Unless its after someone's name then that's either what their doing or thinking about. Oh and from this point on sorry if people don't like the idea but this is kind of going to turn into a stupid comedy/adventure. Mostly with the bad guy. I kind of made him an idiot. I'll probably still put in some fight scenes and some other stuff but some parts I hope will make some people laugh. Ok too much talking not enough writing so here you go chapter 3 of my new story.
Chapter 3 The river and a new evil
The FF9 characters walked up to the back of the waterfall. Everyone of them hesitated before jumping, (really who wouldn't) but most of them made it across safely. Zidane was first to jump, perfect landing. Surprisingly Garnet also jumped and landed on the other side with out slipping or falling with no help (who knew). Next was Eiko, she jumped and almost went over the ledge but Zidane and Garnet grabbed her arms and pulled her back. Vivi was next, he jumped, another perfect landing (go Vivi). Next was Freya, she jumped and of course being a dragon knight landed safely on the other side. Next (Oh god) was rusty….I mean Stiener. He jumped and with all that heavy armor landed down on the ground below the ledge the others were on. Garnet and Vivi went down to see if he was ok while Zidane and Eiko were still up there rolling on the ground in laughter. Freya was just standing there rolling her eyes but she did have a bit of a smirk on her face. You could just tell she wanted to laugh. When Stiener finally stood up he started walking along with the flow of the water until he got to a spot were he could climb up were the others were. Unfortunately he didn't see the ladder right behind were he had fallen. Zidane and Eiko sall it but come on like they were going to tell him.
They continued walking until they got to an opening at the end of the river. At first the thought they might be in Hyrule Field now but when they got closer they were wrong. They looked as far as they could only to see twisting parts of land surrounded by water. It was obvious they had just now entered Zora 's river.
They of course kept walking Stiener still a bit behind. He had just climbed out of the water to join them when all of a sudden there was a splash in the water and next thing he knew something had hit him and he was flying down to the ground. When the others heard the noise they looked back and sall Stiener laying on the ground and across from him in the water was some kind of purple octopus type creature (Octaroks, for anyone whos played the game). Immediately Vivi stepped up and used Thundaga on the creature zapping it. The octopus popped out of the water then slowly sank back to the bottom.
They helped Stiener up and noticed he now had a small dent in his armor. But he wasn't hurt (So close, oh well) so they turned back around to continue out of the river. However when they turned around they noticed about 5 or 6 more of those things staring right at them and also there were about 4 giant spider creatures (Tektites). They all just kind of stared back and forth for a few seconds. At the moment no one really wanted to move.
Zidane- hey vivi, this might be a good time for a thunder attack.
Vivi- oh yea, sorry.
Vivi moved forward once again. When he did all of the monsters started to come closer. Then Vivi lifted up his staff and well lets just say there was a lot of fried octopus and spider (Yuck!).
Well after all them nasty creatures were gone (I don't like spiders) they once again continued walking and after all that finally made it out of Zora's River.
When they first stepped into Hyrule Field they were all stunned by the sight in front of them. Hyrule Field was beautiful. There were endless fields of tall grass blowing in the wind. The smell of flowers the sound of birds singing. At that point even the giant volcano (Death Mountain) next to them was beautiful. They all just sat down on the grass to rest and enjoy the view before continuing to the castle.
Back on Gaia.
A young woman about 20 years old was running down the hall way inside of a huge underground lair. She was a bit short with long black hair and bright blue eyes. She was wearing a short black dress that stopped right at her knees. The only real strange thing about her was that on her back were a par of black wings (strange). She ran down the hall way and into a huge room. When she opened one of the two huge doors she slowly walked up to the center of the room and bowed down. In front of her sat a huge chair with the skull of a grand dragon mounted on the top. Sitting in the chair was a strange hooded man. He was sitting down but still looked very tall. He wore a black cloak with a huge hood barely revealing any part of his face.
He stood up and walked over to the young girl, then well he umm tripped. He was stepping on the bottom of his cloak and fell flat on his face. The young girl just looked up and rolled her eyes. Then not wanting to disgrace her master (not like he wasn't doing a good job of that himself) she decided to walk over and see if he was ok.
Girl- Are you alright my lord?
Hooded man- What? Oh yes I'm fine. I don't get hurt so easily.
Girl- (sure what ever you say.)
Hooded man- So what news have you brought me Nina.
Nina- My lord your plan has worked. The heros of Gaia were thrown right into the portal just like you planed. Even as we speak they are wondering around the world of Hyrule lost and confused with no idea what is going on.
Hooded man- Very good everything is going according to my plan.
Nina- Uh my lord if I may ask, why of all places did you send them to Hyrule?
Hooded man- Didn't you know, an evil man like myself named Ganon is now the ruler of Hyrule. Some idiot hero of time tried to stop him but he was no match. Sooner or later those fools are bound to run into Ganon and I assure you they will not live to tell about it. Hahahahahahahahahahahahahah.
Nina- Um sir I hate to tell you this but The hero of time did defeat Ganon and now Hyrule is a peaceful land.
Hooded man-………..wha. What are you talking about.
Nina- I'm sorry sir but its true.
He just stood there in silence for about 10 minutes. Nina was scared to death he might get angry and take it out on her.
Nina- um….sir.
Hooded man- Wait! Theres still nothing to worry about. I heard that that stupid princess would send the hero of time back in time if he defeated Ganon. So now hes just a stupid little kid so even if they all do meet he wont be able to help them. My plan can still work, Hahahahahahaahahaahahaahaha.
Nina- Um sir.
Hooded man- Now what!
Nina- I'm sorry but that's not exactly true.
Hooded man- Well if you know so much than what happened!
Nina- Well its true the princess was going to send him back in time but for some reason the sages said it would be best not to incase an even greater evil came.
Hooded man- Ha even the sages know of me now. Hahahahahaha.
Nina- Sir that means the hero of time is still older and very stronge. If the heros of Gaia find him he might very well help them get back to Gaia.
Hooded man- So what are you saying?
Nina- I'm saying you need a new plan. ( moron)
Hooded man- damm it……
Ya……sure…….well what do you think. Read, review, and tell me what you think.^_^
