This is my first story, so please review.
I own one, and only one character: Kelrai(KEL-RAY)
I'm afraid that this chapter is a little short.
Chapter 1: Arrival of the cloaked boy
"*Sigh*, what a nice day," Kaoru said, as she walked down the road. She and
the other three were shopping. "I wonder if they have lobster...," Yahiko mumbled to himself. "Hey, can we
get a lobster?" "I don't know, we're a little short on money. Of course we wouldn't be IF TWO CERTAIN MEN AROUND HERE WOULD ACUALLY WORK!" Kouru yelled at Kenshin
and Sanosuke. "Well, that's what we're out here for, right missy? We came here to get a job." The four walked on in silence. Kenshin caught a glimpse of a green cloak disappear onto another street. 'Hmm, why would someone want to get
out of sight so quickly?' "KENSHIN!!! STOP STARING INTO SPACE!!! YOU ALWAYS DO THAT!!!" Kouru yelled.
Kaoru bashed Kenshin on the head with her new purse. An instant later,
Kenshin was lying on the ground, swirly-eyed.
"If she loves him, why does she do that?"
"What makes you think I'd know, Yahiko?"
"I didn't think you'd now."
* * *
"Wow, Kaoru, this lobster's good!"
"Thanks Yahiko! Do you really like it?"
"I've got to admit Kaoru, your lobster does taste good."
"I can't believe everyone likes it!"
"Too bad Kenshin can't enjoy it."
"Yeah, ugly had to knock him out."
"GRRRRRRRRR, I HEARD THAT YAHIKO!!!!" "Hey, stop crowding me! I can't my lobster with you bashing me on the head
with your empty purse!!"
"Hmmm? Where am I?"
"Hey, Kenshin's awake."
"Kensin is awake!!"
"Miss Kaoru, Yahiko, Sanosuke?"
"Kenshin, try my lobster!!" "Well, I am hungry. Mmmm, this is good." There were some noises out in the
bushes.
"Hey, Kenshin, why don't we go check that out?" "Good idea, Sanosuke." Kenshin and Sanosuke walked outside, and around the corner towards the sound. Kenshin had his hand ready at his sword. Sanosuke
crept closer to the bush, and Kenshin stayed a few feet back. "Hey, incase you didn't know, I'm a good guy," a boy said, getting out of
the bushes.
" Who are you, and what are you doing here?" Sanosuke asked.
"And why do you carry a sword and a bow?" Kenshin asked.
" My name is Kelrai, and I've been assigned here. If you let me come inside, I'll tell you my story." The boy was a little taller than Kenshin, and under his green cloak, he wore a red shirt and dark blue jeans. He had a bow slung on his back, and a sword tied to his waist with a green sash.
His hair was short and brown, and he had soft, blue eyes. Sanosuke and
Kenshin lead Kelrai into the dojo.
I own one, and only one character: Kelrai(KEL-RAY)
I'm afraid that this chapter is a little short.
Chapter 1: Arrival of the cloaked boy
"*Sigh*, what a nice day," Kaoru said, as she walked down the road. She and
the other three were shopping. "I wonder if they have lobster...," Yahiko mumbled to himself. "Hey, can we
get a lobster?" "I don't know, we're a little short on money. Of course we wouldn't be IF TWO CERTAIN MEN AROUND HERE WOULD ACUALLY WORK!" Kouru yelled at Kenshin
and Sanosuke. "Well, that's what we're out here for, right missy? We came here to get a job." The four walked on in silence. Kenshin caught a glimpse of a green cloak disappear onto another street. 'Hmm, why would someone want to get
out of sight so quickly?' "KENSHIN!!! STOP STARING INTO SPACE!!! YOU ALWAYS DO THAT!!!" Kouru yelled.
Kaoru bashed Kenshin on the head with her new purse. An instant later,
Kenshin was lying on the ground, swirly-eyed.
"If she loves him, why does she do that?"
"What makes you think I'd know, Yahiko?"
"I didn't think you'd now."
* * *
"Wow, Kaoru, this lobster's good!"
"Thanks Yahiko! Do you really like it?"
"I've got to admit Kaoru, your lobster does taste good."
"I can't believe everyone likes it!"
"Too bad Kenshin can't enjoy it."
"Yeah, ugly had to knock him out."
"GRRRRRRRRR, I HEARD THAT YAHIKO!!!!" "Hey, stop crowding me! I can't my lobster with you bashing me on the head
with your empty purse!!"
"Hmmm? Where am I?"
"Hey, Kenshin's awake."
"Kensin is awake!!"
"Miss Kaoru, Yahiko, Sanosuke?"
"Kenshin, try my lobster!!" "Well, I am hungry. Mmmm, this is good." There were some noises out in the
bushes.
"Hey, Kenshin, why don't we go check that out?" "Good idea, Sanosuke." Kenshin and Sanosuke walked outside, and around the corner towards the sound. Kenshin had his hand ready at his sword. Sanosuke
crept closer to the bush, and Kenshin stayed a few feet back. "Hey, incase you didn't know, I'm a good guy," a boy said, getting out of
the bushes.
" Who are you, and what are you doing here?" Sanosuke asked.
"And why do you carry a sword and a bow?" Kenshin asked.
" My name is Kelrai, and I've been assigned here. If you let me come inside, I'll tell you my story." The boy was a little taller than Kenshin, and under his green cloak, he wore a red shirt and dark blue jeans. He had a bow slung on his back, and a sword tied to his waist with a green sash.
His hair was short and brown, and he had soft, blue eyes. Sanosuke and
Kenshin lead Kelrai into the dojo.
