Wow, I didn't think I'd get 2 reviews this fast... Anyway, the vote is...I CONTINUE NOW! (Bear with me, I got into the Mountain Dew.)
But first: Review Response!
Grisabele, Lady Glamour: WELL IT'S ABOUT TIME YOU'VE BEEN ON! Anyway, who the frick is Mike? Oh, wait...OH! I get it...
Lilith: I'm really glad you like this story. You are now officially my biggest fan! *Tear drop* You're the best *hugs* Sorry, caffine and almost 11pm DO NOT MIX.
Vladmir'sAngel: Uh...you do that...
Sephiroth's Vampire Princess: NO PROFANITY! MY MOM READS THIS YOU NIMROD! Thank you though.
Raven: Thank you! *looks over to find Ky drooling over Raz* HEY NOW! NUNOTHAT!
On with the Fic...Uh-oh...I think...yup...she's ticked...
Chapter 5
When Kyria awoke, the first thing she noticed was the fact that there was no gaping hole in her ribcage.
"Wow, I'm dead. Big surprise. Considering the small detail that Maru turned me into some kind of twisted voo-doo tiger..." Ky thought. One minor problem. If she was dead, why did her head hurt like this? That was when she looked at her hand. She no longer had five fingers. She had three talons. Frantic, she tried to stand but fell, off balance, back onto the bed. Her feet didn't grip the floor properly! She looked down and realized that her feet were now cloven. She ran her tongue over her top row of teeth. She had fangs.
Kyria carefully got up and left her small residence. After a bit, she got used to moving with her new feet and headed towards the Sanctuary. She threw open the doors and saw Raziel inside, talking to Zephon about what he should not have been doing in Meridian the night before (A/N ~_^ I love my player Zephon. Sososososo COOL!). In a rage, she walked up to him, picked him up by the neck and slammed him as hard as she could (which, for a vampire, is pretty dang hard.) into a wall.
"What'd you do to me?" she snarled as she glared at him.
"I saved your life." Raziel calmly replied (well as calm as anyone being pinned to a wall by a very ticked off woman.). Kyria released him and proceeded to hit her head on the wall repeatedly in frustration (sounds an awful ot like me...).
"I see you're awake." Kain greeted. Kyria kept at it, ignoring him. "I don't see why you're so upset." he told her.
"Why am I upset!? Why?! I'm 'upset' because now I'm STUCK here! I can't go back and see my friends...or ANYTHING..." Kyria exploded. She whipped around and burst out of the Sanctuary.
She ran as fast and hard as she could (which, again, is pretty dang fast.), stopping only when the only thing in front of her was a sheer drop into the lake of the dead. She plopped down and eventually, thoughts of Naomi and Zepher crept into her head. She tried shifting to see if she had retianed her power as a vampire. The familiar sensation came as she became the wolf, but it wasn't much comfort. She threw her head back in a long, mournful howl.
Raziel crept up beside her and stared into the lake. It always gave him the feeling that the lake knew something he didn't (A/N I wonder why...).
"Are we really that bad?" Raziel asked.
"What do you mean?" Kyria asked as she changed back.
"You make it sound like this is worse than death. Is it?"
"I'm sorry...it's just...You don't remember being human do you?"
"No, Kain brought my soul back from the Spectral Realm. Therefore, I'm in a way, his son."
"So I'm your daughter?"
"No, you were still alive when I turned you."
"Oh."
"Hungry?" Raziel asked with a sly grin.
"Kinda." she replied.
"Come on. Time for your first hunt." Raziel got to his feet.
"Where are we going?" Kyria asked, standing as well.
"To look for survivors of lastnight's battle."
The pair found one rather quickly. They toyed with the warrior for a while, one blocking off an escape route while the other closed in. Finally, with the simple flick of a claw, thier game ended.
The blood was like a liquid drug. Kyria instantly felt the life force of her victim get devoured by a deeper part of her existence. After he was drained, Kyria felt more alive than she ever had before. She could actually FEEL smell and sound. The slightest noise made her twitch in anticipation. Her bloodlust, however, was not sated. She craved more.
"It's great isn't it?" Raziel asked, already knowing the answer.
"Are you kidding? It's friggin addictive!" she answered. Raziel grinned and he looked up at the sky.
"It's nearly dusk. We should head back to the Sanctuary." Raziel said.
That was chapter 5. Yes, I realize I made several errors in that chapter. Kyria skipping her fledge stage was one. For the purposes of my twisted little brain, I wanted her immune to sunlight. Next chapter! THE SHOWDOWN WITH THE SARAFAN!
But first: Review Response!
Grisabele, Lady Glamour: WELL IT'S ABOUT TIME YOU'VE BEEN ON! Anyway, who the frick is Mike? Oh, wait...OH! I get it...
Lilith: I'm really glad you like this story. You are now officially my biggest fan! *Tear drop* You're the best *hugs* Sorry, caffine and almost 11pm DO NOT MIX.
Vladmir'sAngel: Uh...you do that...
Sephiroth's Vampire Princess: NO PROFANITY! MY MOM READS THIS YOU NIMROD! Thank you though.
Raven: Thank you! *looks over to find Ky drooling over Raz* HEY NOW! NUNOTHAT!
On with the Fic...Uh-oh...I think...yup...she's ticked...
Chapter 5
When Kyria awoke, the first thing she noticed was the fact that there was no gaping hole in her ribcage.
"Wow, I'm dead. Big surprise. Considering the small detail that Maru turned me into some kind of twisted voo-doo tiger..." Ky thought. One minor problem. If she was dead, why did her head hurt like this? That was when she looked at her hand. She no longer had five fingers. She had three talons. Frantic, she tried to stand but fell, off balance, back onto the bed. Her feet didn't grip the floor properly! She looked down and realized that her feet were now cloven. She ran her tongue over her top row of teeth. She had fangs.
Kyria carefully got up and left her small residence. After a bit, she got used to moving with her new feet and headed towards the Sanctuary. She threw open the doors and saw Raziel inside, talking to Zephon about what he should not have been doing in Meridian the night before (A/N ~_^ I love my player Zephon. Sososososo COOL!). In a rage, she walked up to him, picked him up by the neck and slammed him as hard as she could (which, for a vampire, is pretty dang hard.) into a wall.
"What'd you do to me?" she snarled as she glared at him.
"I saved your life." Raziel calmly replied (well as calm as anyone being pinned to a wall by a very ticked off woman.). Kyria released him and proceeded to hit her head on the wall repeatedly in frustration (sounds an awful ot like me...).
"I see you're awake." Kain greeted. Kyria kept at it, ignoring him. "I don't see why you're so upset." he told her.
"Why am I upset!? Why?! I'm 'upset' because now I'm STUCK here! I can't go back and see my friends...or ANYTHING..." Kyria exploded. She whipped around and burst out of the Sanctuary.
She ran as fast and hard as she could (which, again, is pretty dang fast.), stopping only when the only thing in front of her was a sheer drop into the lake of the dead. She plopped down and eventually, thoughts of Naomi and Zepher crept into her head. She tried shifting to see if she had retianed her power as a vampire. The familiar sensation came as she became the wolf, but it wasn't much comfort. She threw her head back in a long, mournful howl.
Raziel crept up beside her and stared into the lake. It always gave him the feeling that the lake knew something he didn't (A/N I wonder why...).
"Are we really that bad?" Raziel asked.
"What do you mean?" Kyria asked as she changed back.
"You make it sound like this is worse than death. Is it?"
"I'm sorry...it's just...You don't remember being human do you?"
"No, Kain brought my soul back from the Spectral Realm. Therefore, I'm in a way, his son."
"So I'm your daughter?"
"No, you were still alive when I turned you."
"Oh."
"Hungry?" Raziel asked with a sly grin.
"Kinda." she replied.
"Come on. Time for your first hunt." Raziel got to his feet.
"Where are we going?" Kyria asked, standing as well.
"To look for survivors of lastnight's battle."
The pair found one rather quickly. They toyed with the warrior for a while, one blocking off an escape route while the other closed in. Finally, with the simple flick of a claw, thier game ended.
The blood was like a liquid drug. Kyria instantly felt the life force of her victim get devoured by a deeper part of her existence. After he was drained, Kyria felt more alive than she ever had before. She could actually FEEL smell and sound. The slightest noise made her twitch in anticipation. Her bloodlust, however, was not sated. She craved more.
"It's great isn't it?" Raziel asked, already knowing the answer.
"Are you kidding? It's friggin addictive!" she answered. Raziel grinned and he looked up at the sky.
"It's nearly dusk. We should head back to the Sanctuary." Raziel said.
That was chapter 5. Yes, I realize I made several errors in that chapter. Kyria skipping her fledge stage was one. For the purposes of my twisted little brain, I wanted her immune to sunlight. Next chapter! THE SHOWDOWN WITH THE SARAFAN!
