Hello everyone !

Lia E. Fairy Tail here !

Not with a story, but it´s still very important for me... and you guys.

What I am doing here is not a competition for who is the better writer ! HereIcome is a lot better than I am ! His story is nearly 200 chapters while I still don´t know what my story should really be.

NO !

I am doing this to learn !

For 3 years I am now writing stories ( well, more trying actually ), and while I did puplished a few, I deleted them again because no one , or not many, seemed to be interested. Most of the little amount of Reviews I got where always from the same three persons. So I started to wonder... what am I doing wrong ?

I love nothing more than writing stories, and it hurts me that not many are at least giving it a try... so I wanna... no ! I need to find out what I am lacking.

Do I copy someone else´s story too much ?

Are the relationships of the charakters emotional enough ?

Am I creative enough ?

Are the battles filled with enough tension ?

Dear readers, I need your feedback ! PLEASE !

I wanna improve my writing because I wanna keep going with writing stories.

The following chapter holds a glimpse of how I write.

Please read it and give me feedback !

Everything is welcomed.

Is what I am doing good ?

What shall I improve ?

What do I need to imrpove ?

Just please don´t be insulting !

Now then... let´s get started.

This little one-shot is an idea I had for a while now. It´s based on the Angels and Dragons of HereIcome´s Yugioh Arc-V Story.

I fell in love with that angels and dragons the second I first read about them.

I may can´t influence the ending of HereIcome´s story ( even though I was trying a lot... ), but... I can do side-stories, aka one-shots with them.

Please read it and give me feedback !

Via Reviews or Private Messaging ( PM )

As already mentioned, everything is welcomed as long as it´s not insulting !

Thank you, my dear readers. I hope for a lot of feedback.

I appriciate every Review or PM that will come !