Lily Evans--- Year 1 at Hogwarts
Disclaimer***** I don't own anything you recognize. The only things I own so far are Melody, Lacey, and Lisa.
Thanks to everyone that has reviewed!!!!
And now I give you... CHAPTER 3!!!
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Lily gasped in shock at her first glimpse of Hogwarts. So did Lisa, Mel, and Lacey who were sharing a boat with her.
" Wow! This is simply beautiful!" breathed Lily amazed. "No fair!" squealed Lacey in excitement. "When my brother mentioned Hogwarts, he never said that it was gonna be this big or pretty. Remind me to strangle my brother once we get to Hogwarts. The girls laughed. Lily scanned the other boats for any sign of James. She spotted him talking to Remus and Sirius. Peter was snacking on a chocolate frog listening intently to the other three boy's conversation. 'God he's sooo handsome' Lily thought staring at James. As though he noticed he was being stared at, he turned around and caught Lily's eye. Blushing, Lily turned her attention back to the conversation.
" Lily, what were you staring at?" Lisa teased gently. "Huh?" Lily asked, snapping out of her dream. "Ooooh, does Lily have a cruuushyyy? Mel teased.
"No!" Lily snapped.
" Chill out, girl, I was kidding!" laughed Mel. Lily got up and poured all the disgusting flavored Bertie Botts Every Flavored Beans down Melody's robes.
"EWWW! I GOT SPINICH AND BOOGERS AND VOMIT DOWN MY BACK!!! AHHHHH!!!" Melody's voice attracted far too much attention than needed. All the first years were staring at her, and the giant man whose name was Hagrid looked very amused. " Umm, sorry?" Melody tried meekly. "It's ok we're 'ere anyway," said Hagrid.
Hagrid led the first years up to the front door and knocked three times. A very stern looking witch answered the door. " I presume these are my first years?" she said staring down at all of them though her glasses, then spotted James and Sirius about to have what looked like a very amusing duel. The stern witch sighed. "I'll take them from here Hagrid," she said.
The stern looking witch led the first years into the castle and lined them up in front of the Great Hall.
"Hello, my name is Professor Mcgonagall and welcome to Hogwarts. In a few minutes you will pass though these doors and be sorted into your houses. The four Houses are Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, and Slytherin. Please wait here QUIETLY, meaning no DUELS as we wait! She said looking sternly at James and Sirius who both saluted with a 'Yes Ma'am!' When Professor Mcgonagall was out of sight, James and the gang trotted over to Lily and her friends. "Hi Lily!" The four of them chorused in a singsong voice.
"Hi Peter, Remus, Sirius, and James," Lily replied in the same singsong voice.
" Lily! How come I haven't been introduced to the brilliant and beautiful young ladies?" Sirius asked in a fake hurt voice.
"Yeah, yeah," Lily said rolling her eyes. " These are my friends Melody Baker, Lisa White, and Lacey O'Nell." Sirius opened his mouth to say something, but Lily clapped her hand over his mouth and continued, " Just to save you girls from Sirius's egocentric mind I will introduce the guys to you. Sirius Black, Peter Pettigrew, James Potter and Remus Lupin." After Lily Finished pointing them out she turned to Sirius. "Now Sirius, promise me that you wont be an egocentric jerk and that you'll treat us ladies well," Lily said with her hand still covering his mouth. " Pwaaamuuz," came his muffled reply. " Mmmm, what was that Sirius?" She asked sweetly." "Pwaaamuuuz!," he tried to say, still muffled. " Sirius, we still cant heeaar youu," James shouted with laughter. " Willy! Gewof me!" Sirius said trying to squirm out of her hand. Lily let go. " Ok Sirius now you can promise properly," Lily said.
" Lily Evans, I solemnly swear that I won't be an egocentric jerk and that I'll treat you ladies like Bertie Botts Every Flavored Beans," Sirius said saluting.
"The good flavors!" Lisa exclaimed.
" Yeah, yeah the good flavors," retorted Sirius half-heartedly. " That's enough!" Professor Mcgonagall exclaimed. " Come on everyone's waiting."
The door of the great Hall opened. They walked in to lines and stopped at a small table on which Mcgonagall put a very old battered up hat. ' Hmmm..maybe we have to pull a rabbit out of it.' Lily thought. "Hey Lace?" whispered Lily. "Yeah?" Lacey answered eyeing the hat suspiciously. " Do you know any spells?" lily asked anxiously. "Yea I know some simple spells, nothing to brag about really," Lacey answered shrugging. Before Lily could answer, the rip in the brim of the hat opened wide and the hat began to sing:
( A/N: I cant make up a poem for a life so I left out the song)
'That's it?' Lily thought. It was James who voiced her thoughts.
" Man, all we gotta do is try on a hat? And to think that I was preparing for something macho." James voice trailed off at the sound off Mcgonagall's voice.
" Addams, Rocky."
RAVENCLAW!!!
"Albert, Susan."
HUFFLEPUFF!!!
"Anderson, Andrew."
RAVENCLAW!!!
"Baker, Melody."
Lily closed her eyes, hoping that her new friend wouldn't be in Slytherin or something like that.She crossed her fingers hoping.... waiting..
GRYFFINDOR!!!
Lily noticed that she got pretty load applause. The sorting hat sorted a couple more people until it came to...
"Black, Sirius."
Sirius strode over casually, waving at the crowd.
GRYFFINDOR!!!
Sirius walked over to the Gryffindor table grinning like a maniac. Lily made a mental note to ask him how someone stupid like him could have got into Gryffindor. Lily stongly suspected that Sirius had threatened to drown it if it didn't put him in Gryffindor.
After about 10 more minutes..
"Evans, Lillian."
Lily nervously walked up and put the hat on. At once a voice filled her ear.
'Ahhh, Evans huh?' the hat began, 'Muggle born? Lets see what we have here, plenty of courage, you'd do anything for your friends. that's a trait of a true Gryffindor. but what's this? Your power seeking and ambitious, that would make an excellent Slytherin. Now what do you think Evans?' 'If you put me in Slytherin, I'll make sure that this is your last time sorting. I'm gonna rip you from the brim even more' Lily thought glaring. ' Temper, temper.' The hat teased. ' That goes well with Slytherin too, you know. Ok, ok if you insist...'
GRYFFINDOR!!!!!
Lily ran happily to the Gryffindor table and sat next to Melody. She could understand now why Sirius may have threatened to kill the hat.
The sorting went on and luckily all Lily friends were in Gryffindor. Severus Snape and Lucious Malfoy both went to Slytherin ('No surprise there' Lily had thought') Finally Professor Mcgonagall rolled up the list of names and took away the sorting hat. Profssor Dumbledore, the headmaster stood up at taped on his goblet to get their attention.
"Now I know every one is probably starving so I won't make the usual announcements tonight. The prefects are responsible for making sure that the first years know all the rules. Let the feast began!" In front of them food began to appear on the plates. " Wow this is so cool!" squealed Mel. " I know right! Lily said, her mouth full of food. "I wonder how the classes will be." Well, I guess we'll have to wait till tomorrow to find out sighed James.
In her dormitory, Lily had unpacked her things and was sitting on her bed. All of her friends were already asleep. She decided that she'd better go to sleep also. Smiling she slid into her covers and closed her eyes. Tomorrow she'd began her first day as a young wizard.
A/N. I thought this chapter was pretty good. Yeeaay I'm getting better! Please Review!!! Thanx.
Maryam
Disclaimer***** I don't own anything you recognize. The only things I own so far are Melody, Lacey, and Lisa.
Thanks to everyone that has reviewed!!!!
And now I give you... CHAPTER 3!!!
**************************************************************************** **********************************************
Lily gasped in shock at her first glimpse of Hogwarts. So did Lisa, Mel, and Lacey who were sharing a boat with her.
" Wow! This is simply beautiful!" breathed Lily amazed. "No fair!" squealed Lacey in excitement. "When my brother mentioned Hogwarts, he never said that it was gonna be this big or pretty. Remind me to strangle my brother once we get to Hogwarts. The girls laughed. Lily scanned the other boats for any sign of James. She spotted him talking to Remus and Sirius. Peter was snacking on a chocolate frog listening intently to the other three boy's conversation. 'God he's sooo handsome' Lily thought staring at James. As though he noticed he was being stared at, he turned around and caught Lily's eye. Blushing, Lily turned her attention back to the conversation.
" Lily, what were you staring at?" Lisa teased gently. "Huh?" Lily asked, snapping out of her dream. "Ooooh, does Lily have a cruuushyyy? Mel teased.
"No!" Lily snapped.
" Chill out, girl, I was kidding!" laughed Mel. Lily got up and poured all the disgusting flavored Bertie Botts Every Flavored Beans down Melody's robes.
"EWWW! I GOT SPINICH AND BOOGERS AND VOMIT DOWN MY BACK!!! AHHHHH!!!" Melody's voice attracted far too much attention than needed. All the first years were staring at her, and the giant man whose name was Hagrid looked very amused. " Umm, sorry?" Melody tried meekly. "It's ok we're 'ere anyway," said Hagrid.
Hagrid led the first years up to the front door and knocked three times. A very stern looking witch answered the door. " I presume these are my first years?" she said staring down at all of them though her glasses, then spotted James and Sirius about to have what looked like a very amusing duel. The stern witch sighed. "I'll take them from here Hagrid," she said.
The stern looking witch led the first years into the castle and lined them up in front of the Great Hall.
"Hello, my name is Professor Mcgonagall and welcome to Hogwarts. In a few minutes you will pass though these doors and be sorted into your houses. The four Houses are Gryffindor, Ravenclaw, Hufflepuff, and Slytherin. Please wait here QUIETLY, meaning no DUELS as we wait! She said looking sternly at James and Sirius who both saluted with a 'Yes Ma'am!' When Professor Mcgonagall was out of sight, James and the gang trotted over to Lily and her friends. "Hi Lily!" The four of them chorused in a singsong voice.
"Hi Peter, Remus, Sirius, and James," Lily replied in the same singsong voice.
" Lily! How come I haven't been introduced to the brilliant and beautiful young ladies?" Sirius asked in a fake hurt voice.
"Yeah, yeah," Lily said rolling her eyes. " These are my friends Melody Baker, Lisa White, and Lacey O'Nell." Sirius opened his mouth to say something, but Lily clapped her hand over his mouth and continued, " Just to save you girls from Sirius's egocentric mind I will introduce the guys to you. Sirius Black, Peter Pettigrew, James Potter and Remus Lupin." After Lily Finished pointing them out she turned to Sirius. "Now Sirius, promise me that you wont be an egocentric jerk and that you'll treat us ladies well," Lily said with her hand still covering his mouth. " Pwaaamuuz," came his muffled reply. " Mmmm, what was that Sirius?" She asked sweetly." "Pwaaamuuuz!," he tried to say, still muffled. " Sirius, we still cant heeaar youu," James shouted with laughter. " Willy! Gewof me!" Sirius said trying to squirm out of her hand. Lily let go. " Ok Sirius now you can promise properly," Lily said.
" Lily Evans, I solemnly swear that I won't be an egocentric jerk and that I'll treat you ladies like Bertie Botts Every Flavored Beans," Sirius said saluting.
"The good flavors!" Lisa exclaimed.
" Yeah, yeah the good flavors," retorted Sirius half-heartedly. " That's enough!" Professor Mcgonagall exclaimed. " Come on everyone's waiting."
The door of the great Hall opened. They walked in to lines and stopped at a small table on which Mcgonagall put a very old battered up hat. ' Hmmm..maybe we have to pull a rabbit out of it.' Lily thought. "Hey Lace?" whispered Lily. "Yeah?" Lacey answered eyeing the hat suspiciously. " Do you know any spells?" lily asked anxiously. "Yea I know some simple spells, nothing to brag about really," Lacey answered shrugging. Before Lily could answer, the rip in the brim of the hat opened wide and the hat began to sing:
( A/N: I cant make up a poem for a life so I left out the song)
'That's it?' Lily thought. It was James who voiced her thoughts.
" Man, all we gotta do is try on a hat? And to think that I was preparing for something macho." James voice trailed off at the sound off Mcgonagall's voice.
" Addams, Rocky."
RAVENCLAW!!!
"Albert, Susan."
HUFFLEPUFF!!!
"Anderson, Andrew."
RAVENCLAW!!!
"Baker, Melody."
Lily closed her eyes, hoping that her new friend wouldn't be in Slytherin or something like that.She crossed her fingers hoping.... waiting..
GRYFFINDOR!!!
Lily noticed that she got pretty load applause. The sorting hat sorted a couple more people until it came to...
"Black, Sirius."
Sirius strode over casually, waving at the crowd.
GRYFFINDOR!!!
Sirius walked over to the Gryffindor table grinning like a maniac. Lily made a mental note to ask him how someone stupid like him could have got into Gryffindor. Lily stongly suspected that Sirius had threatened to drown it if it didn't put him in Gryffindor.
After about 10 more minutes..
"Evans, Lillian."
Lily nervously walked up and put the hat on. At once a voice filled her ear.
'Ahhh, Evans huh?' the hat began, 'Muggle born? Lets see what we have here, plenty of courage, you'd do anything for your friends. that's a trait of a true Gryffindor. but what's this? Your power seeking and ambitious, that would make an excellent Slytherin. Now what do you think Evans?' 'If you put me in Slytherin, I'll make sure that this is your last time sorting. I'm gonna rip you from the brim even more' Lily thought glaring. ' Temper, temper.' The hat teased. ' That goes well with Slytherin too, you know. Ok, ok if you insist...'
GRYFFINDOR!!!!!
Lily ran happily to the Gryffindor table and sat next to Melody. She could understand now why Sirius may have threatened to kill the hat.
The sorting went on and luckily all Lily friends were in Gryffindor. Severus Snape and Lucious Malfoy both went to Slytherin ('No surprise there' Lily had thought') Finally Professor Mcgonagall rolled up the list of names and took away the sorting hat. Profssor Dumbledore, the headmaster stood up at taped on his goblet to get their attention.
"Now I know every one is probably starving so I won't make the usual announcements tonight. The prefects are responsible for making sure that the first years know all the rules. Let the feast began!" In front of them food began to appear on the plates. " Wow this is so cool!" squealed Mel. " I know right! Lily said, her mouth full of food. "I wonder how the classes will be." Well, I guess we'll have to wait till tomorrow to find out sighed James.
In her dormitory, Lily had unpacked her things and was sitting on her bed. All of her friends were already asleep. She decided that she'd better go to sleep also. Smiling she slid into her covers and closed her eyes. Tomorrow she'd began her first day as a young wizard.
A/N. I thought this chapter was pretty good. Yeeaay I'm getting better! Please Review!!! Thanx.
Maryam
