Konnichi wa! I've finally finished chapter 11 and am really glad that you guys came back for more! It took awhile but at least it took a shorter time than ch 10.

I'd have to say that this is probably the slowest and corniest chapter of the batch which probably prooves that my writing's going dry. Hopefully I can speed up the pace during the final chapters, supposing I can get the time to actually type them now. sigh I'm going to be busy as hell this entire summer to the point that I'll have no life. Wait, I sorta have no life typing these don't I? Dang!

Oh well that's all I've got ta say, so hope you enjoy this chapter as well! (Hopefully you like the others to back up my assumption.

Disclaimer: All characters of CCS are the property of CLAMP, not mine. So please don't sue me. This is only written for entertainment purposes, not for profit. You won't get any money anyway; since I only have six American dollars at the moment, and I'm not going to get any profit whatsoever for writing this.

Anything written about Chang San-Feng in this fic is fictional and is merely used for entertainment purposes.

Claimer: Rikou, Ichiro, Kiku, and Tseng are all my characters in which I developed and cannot be used without my consent.

-Psychic720

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Ok, with all the formalities, done, let's go!

Li Syaoran's Story

Chapter 11

By psychic720

Li's face reddened. Blood surged through his veins as he leapt forward at Ichiro. "SAKURA!!!" he screamed.

"Good, I've got a score to even with you, LI SYAORAN!" Ichiro laughed as he dashed towards his opponent. "But this time you fight without your friends!"

The two swords clanged against each other. Both fighters then leapt back a few steps. Li noticed the intensity Ichiro was staring at him with.

He's testing my strength. Li thought to himself. I could psyche him out in the first few moves if I can attack as strong as possible for the first few moves.

His strength has indeed increased from the last encounter. Ichiro reflected. But still isn't increased enough to pass my test.

Ichiro grinned. He plunged his sword into the ground and immediately blasted a fist of fire towards Li. The other tried to ward the flames with the blade of his sword, successfully deflecting it to the side. Li returned the grin at Ichiro. The other stared at Li blankly. Li dropped his sword and lightly began to surge electrical voltages through his arms. Ichiro mirrored the boy, channeling his fiery energy throughout his body.

Li gave a grunt blasting his electronics rays of destruction towards Ichiro. A blast of fire intercepted the attack. The balls of energy collided against each other trying to prove superior to the other.

Whoever loses concentration first, Li thought straining himself to force more energy into his orb of lightning, will definitely lose this fight considering the amount of energy being used.

"SOMEWHERE OVER THE TWILIGHT ZONE, I'M NOT SICK!!!!!!!!" Rikou exclaimed in an out of tune voice.

Eriol really wanted to smack the American. But in the situation they were in, the incarnation of Clow Reed really couldn't blame the other. Mists of light were everywhere, quite typical of jumping through dimensions. However, no matter how developed one's magical sense was, most are not able to take the intense motion one sees.

"And apparently this Rikou isn't one of the exceptions," Eriol muttered to himself.

Eriol glanced back at Rikou who was still grimacing as the boys fell through the mists of the unknown. Shutting his eyes, Eriol tried to sense a pathway to a place that would hopefully lead the two somewhere other than doom. With Rikou hollering as if there was no tomorrow, that wasn't quite an easy task.

"Oh god, I'm feeling Dinner coming out…" Rikou said miserably.

"There!" Eriol exclaimed as he reopened his eyes. "That's out exit!"

Eriol quickly grabbed hold of Rikou's arm. But the two boys weren't the only one exiting.

"BLECH!" Rikou vomited. Immediately hot sour brownish residue spewed from the boy's mouth, half of that residue hitting his companion's face.

"I knew I should've passed dinner…" Rikou moaned

"BAKA!" Eriol smacked the boy in the head right before a blinding light enveloped them.

Sakura couldn't see a thing. It was one thing just to have a simple talk with this Tseng Kai, trying to find him blind was another. The girl peered blankly through the darkness, throwing her hands in front of her cautiously to guide her way.

"Come hither child," A voice said from within the darkness. "No need to be afraid, or at least not yet."

Sakura followed the voice; it was all she could do for that matter. Even if she wanted to retreat and return to the safety of the real world, she couldn't even find the front door! After another ten minutes of mindless wandering, Sakura was finally able to see a feint column of light, shining slightly upon a small platform. She slowly climbed up the stairs to see a densely cloaked person in the middle.

"Ano, Tseng-san desu ka? (Um, are you Tseng)" Sakura asked nervously

The cloaked person looked up back at the girl. He gave a brief nod. Sakura was shocked. The face that peered back at her was no ordinary person. His withered crinkly pale skin looked as if it hadn't seen sunlight for centuries. The swollen eyes didn't even seem to function.

"So you're Clow's successor," Tseng said eyeing Sakura from the top of her head to the bottom of her foot. He soon chuckled. "Well I already knew Clow had a thing for pretty girls, but I'd never expect that his successor would be such a cute one too!"

"Arigato," Sakura replied nervously, still eyeing Tseng's frail body with shock.

Tseng noticed the stare. "What's wrong, my body not satisfactory with your fresh eyes?"

"Ah gomen!" Sakura said immediately averting her gaze. After a long period of time the girl nervously decided to speak up again. "I was wondering if," Sakura started trying not to notice the blank swollen staring eyes. It's impolite for too much eye contact (Japanese culture); "maybe you could tell me a reason for all the events that have happened."

Tseng glanced upwards at the girl. "What makes you think that I'm not doing everything for just a mere lust for power and greed?"

Sakura shrugged. "I guess you'd probably killed me by now if that was it."

Tseng laughed, "My poor, naïve girl!" Tseng had to pause every now and then to get his breath back. "Not everything is what it seems at first glance. However, what you believe is true, there is a reason behind all my wretched plotting. But…" Tseng glanced back at the girl. "Whether you believe me or not is your own choice."

"So you'll tell me?" Sakura asked excitedly.

Tseng tightened his mouth. "I might, did Kiku give you any chocolate?"

Sakura was taken aback. "What? I don't think she did."

Tseng sighed. "And I thought I was losing my memory, that girl."

Sakura saw the old man's swollen eyes look back at her with a weak smile. "Gomen ne? I thought my granddaughter would let her old man taste the sweetness of chocolate."

"Oh!" Sakura said aloud. The girl began rummaging through her pocket. "Douzo (here) I was going to give this to Kero-chan but you can have it." Sakura offered Tseng a small mound of fudge she had saved from meeting Eriol.

Again Tseng stared at the girl, grinning. The grin slowly exploded into a hysterical laugh. "Clow, Clow, Clow what have you been thinking?" Tseng stared back at Sakura. "My girl, you have a problem with trusting people so easily! Aren't you horrified at my outer appearance, at least?"

Sakura smiled nervously. "Despite what you look like, you seem like a very nice old man."

"Nice old man!?!" Tseng was laughing hysterical now, his mouth not able to shut. "The person whom you think is out to kill you has suddenly become a 'nice old man'!" Tseng continued to laugh humorously. However the laughter stopped as the old man gasped for air, breaking into a huge coughing fit. Sakura, not sure on what she should do, went to the old man's back and softly rubbed it. Clean air came into Tseng's lungs soon afterward.

"Arigato…" The man wheezed.

"Don't mention it! But…" Sakura stopped fingering the small package in her hand quizzically. "Is this really good for you—"

Before Sakura could do anything, a bony hand swept away the chocolate fudge just like the hand of a little kid snaring a small treat. The old man ripped open the wrapper and consumed the sweet fudge instantly. "Cholesterol is bad for the body, and people still eat it in large quantities, what harm can a little sugar do?"

"Hai…" Sakura replied nervously, a huge sweat-drop forming on the back of her head. Sougoi! He ate the entire thing in two seconds! This includes the time for him to take the wrapper off!

"Ano…" Sakura looked back at the old man looking fairly content with sugar in his belly. "Could you please tell me why things are happening like this?"

Tseng smiled. "I like your attitude, Kinomoto-san, so why not?"

"Who are you, and what are you doing here?" The man demanded apprehensively.

Tomoyo, Touya and Meiling stared back at the man. The stare continued for about thirty seconds.

Tomoyo quickly did a quick formal bow. "Sumimasen, I know it's sort of late at the moment, but we were wondering if Rikou-kun is at home."

"Rikou?" The man thought curiously. "Well that boy isn't in right now. Humph, give a little freedom and he goes running off randomly. Anyway," The man smiled, "which one of you is his sweetheart?"

Tomoyo and Meiling began sweating storms of sweat drops on the back of their heads while Touya, desperate to know where his little sister was, almost punched the man in the face.

"Excuse me," Touya said with the calmest voice he could muster, "I'm very sorry to have disturbed you tonight but I really wish to know the whereabouts of my little sister."

"So she's his sweetheart!" the man laughed hysterically. He looked back at Tomoyo and Meiling. "Gomen ne?"

Meiling couldn't hold her shock in any longer. "Who are you, and what are you doing at Rikou-kun's home? You're definitely not Hannah! Living with him for awhile I should know that no one else lived in this house but them!"

"Whaaat!?!" The man exclaimed. "You've lived with him already! I thought I told Hannah to look after him!?! God! What did you do to my son to make him shack up with you!?!?!"

SON!?! Tomoyo shuttered intensely with shock. She stared at the man carefully. His attitude is almost exactly like Oni-san. The man caught Tomoyo's gaze. "O…Oto-san?" the girl gasped.

Streams of fire and lightning continued to clash against each other, neither giving way to the other.

"Baka…" Ichiro muttered under his breath. "A match of magic attacks isn't like a match of throwing fists at each other, one false distraction and your entire attack collapse allowing the other to blast through."

Li didn't say anything, the fact was that he couldn't, he was too preoccupied with keeping his volts of lightning up and not get killed. Ichiro laughed at the face the boy made however.

"Poor, Poor, Kinomoto-san…" Ichiro mocked. "Putting her heart into the hands of a boy so stupid." Ichiro noticed Li's scowl following his remark through the fires and lightning. "Hurry up and fall already, I wouldn't want to miss seeing that delicate girl get slaughtered." Ichiro was laughing hysterically now.

He's right! Li's mind flashed. He's right! Sakura's waiting!

Li's blood pressure was rising as more energy began to channel throughout his veins. The boy smashed his foot into the ground to keep better balance.

His chi level is rising! Ichiro thought to himself. But can it rise fast enough.

Li gave a painful grunt thrusting forward all of his energy that his body could muster. A loud thunder-crash could be heard as Li yelled at the top of his lungs blasting forth a huge mass of electricity towards his opponent. In a mere second the flames were diffused and the voltages careened against its target. Ichiro was launched back several steps. Both boys glared at each other quietly, both standing on their two feet. Ichiro unstably collapsed to his knees, then smashed forward on his stomach.

"Though you may have defeated me, you're still no match for Kiku…" Ichiro gasped.

Li ignored the remarked and stepped above Ichiro's body towards the main gate. Opening the gate, Li went in. The boy continued forward slowly, the strain in his shoulder throbbing.

I must've pulled a muscle when I blasted all that energy. Li thought. Gripping his shoulder, the boy continued to walk through the grass closer to the shrine. It wasn't long for Li to suddenly hear his next opponent. He barely made out a slight haunting sound from a Koto, a Japanese stringed instrument. After a couple more minutes of walking Li arrive at the main entrance of the shrine. An attractive red haired girl calmly strumming her stringed instrument with her deft fingers blocked the door.

"Da-re… (who)?"Li stared dazed for a brief few seconds. With a slight blush, Li instantly shook the thought away.

The girl giggled lightly. This Li Syaoran's cute! No wonder Sakura-san loves him so much! "I'm Kiku Yamamoto, Tseng's granddaughter. And you," Kiku started, still calmly plucking the strings to her instrument, "you're Li Syaoran-san desu ne?"

"Hai…" Li said nervously, slightly tightening his grip on his sword. "I'd like to pass."

The girl smiled. "No can do! Ojii-san (grandfather), whom you know as Tseng, said he did not want anyone to come him to bother him while speaking with the object of your desire."

Li blushed and retreated two steps. "Nanda—(what)?"

Kiku laughed even more. "The way you act, one would thing that you'd never went for her in your life!" Li was backing up a few more steps. "Hmm, if you keep on retreating I could probably make you go out to the gate house without standing up from my Koto."

"I'd like to pass," Li stuttered. "Although you're a girl, I won't hesitate in killing you if I can get to Sakura."

"Oh really?" Kiku smiled warmly. She slowly got up from her instrument walking towards the boy casually. She pushed out her throat towards the boy. "Here I am, kill me."

"What-?" Li blurted in shock. She's insane!

"What's wrong?" Kiku said stroking the boy's reddening and damp face tenderly with her hand. "Can't do it?"

"D... don't make me hurt you!" Li exclaimed.

Kiku purposely turned around, exposing her back towards the boy. She calmly walked back to her Koto. "You men are all alike, you always think with your hormones!" She laughed.

Li was sweating now. He wasn't accustomed to striking at a girl. His mind wanted to explode and his face was building pressure just like a volcano would before the fatal eruption. He glanced back at the girl who giggled at him teasingly. She's not scared at all! Li thought, his grip tightening around his sword. Even though she's a girl, she's still stopping you from getting to Sakura! Li rose his blade and began a mad dash at the girl.

Kiku grabbed the bottom of her Koto and swung into the air to deflect the hungry blade aiming for her. As Li backed away instantly from the counter Kiku immediately grabbed a Katana hanged beneath the ceiling above her. Streams of fire lashed forward at Li who tried to deflect it with a lightning-blazing blade. The two backed away. However Li dashed forward again. The two swords locked. After only a brief second of staring, Kiku immediately kicked the boy hard into the shin.

"Souu!" Li cried as he limped back a few steps, grabbing his injured leg. Immediately the boy faced another strike from the hilt of Kiku's sword. Li sprawled backwards. His entire body ached. It was as if the girls strike had paralyzed his entire body.

"Had enough yet?" Kiku asked cheerfully.

"STOP TEASING ME!" Li growled as he lunged forward at the girl. Kiku made a swift sword motion to Li's neck. The boy immediately rose his blade to deflect the attack. But it never came, the girl withdrew the attack and kicked him firmly in the groin.

"ITAIIIII!" Li collapsed downward. Grabbing his abdomen he flinched trying to ease the pain. "You tricked me out!"

Kiku smiled cheerfully. "Gomen ne? But I'm not Ichiro. I choose not to follow those traditional martial arts ways. The stillness rhythmic attack just doesn't seem fitting in a tense situation. I prefer broken rhythm, feinting, and offensive-defense! It's more suitable for these types of brawls. Just like Bruce Lee! His idea of Jeet Kune Do is incredible!"

Li scowled to Kiku's delight. The scowl became slight fear when he noticed that he had just dropped his sword.

"I won't kill if you'd just quietly leave," Kiku said politely. "I don't like shedding blood, especially if it's in my estate."

The boy slowly got up as the pain eased. He charged at Kiku with whatever he had left. The girl replied by swiftly bringing her sword down towards Li's neck, apparently just trying to scratch it teasingly. Li immediately tried to take advantage of the girl's immediate hesitation. Grabbing her forearms with his hands, the boy made a mad face plunge towards the Kiku. The two fell backward.

Li's world went black.

"So where'd Kiku leave you off anyway?" Tseng asked casually. The old man snapped his fingers, a small tatami mat appeared in front of him. "Here, sit."

"Eto…" Sakura wondered, trying to brace the last sentence Kiku told her, "I remember her leaving off at the moment where Clow-san had just beat Madoushi."

Tseng chuckled. "Those were happy times, perhaps the most happiest times of my life."

"Nani?" Sakura asked. "What happened then?"

"Madoushi was—" Tseng started. "Well, maybe you should see for yourself."

"Hoe?" Sakura didn't really understand what Tseng was implying. "What do you mean?"

"Clow made the return card didn't he?" Tseng asked.

"Hai," Sakura started. "Demo—"

"That's your answer!" Tseng interrupted.

"But using that card takes a lot of magic." Sakura stated. "I've never really used it without borrowing magic from another source."

Tseng nodded solemnly. "Then borrow mine."

Sakura stared up at Tseng, "But you're, you know… Syaoran-kun would kill me if he figured out. Gomen."

Tseng chuckled. "Well there's nothing wrong with that. I don't tell, you don't tell, how will this Syaoran know? Consider though, if I was supposedly going to hurt you, I would've done it already don't you see? So what do you say?"

Sakura gulped a growing amount of saliva in her throat. She looked hesitantly in the old man's eyes. Li had always warned her about trusting others too easily, but the old man's eyes just kept luring her to say the lethal words. "Ok, I'll do it."

By the time the boy woke up, the first thing he noticed was that someone was vigorously beating his head. The boy blinked several times. His vision was blank. The only thing he could see was a dark whitish blur. A soft, sweet scent of remedial herbs filled his nostrils. Other than the beating on his head, the other thing that caught his attention was an unusually soft feeling pressed against his face. Li raised his face trying to see who was beating his head. The dark whitish blur was actually cotton from a priestess' upper white blouse. The person beating his head was Kiku herself. And the soft feeling, was…

"DAMN IT!!!" Li jolted to his feet immediately. Kiku vigorously scooted away on her back. Tears were forming in her eyes. Li flinched looking at the girl's eyes.

Kiku shot up as Li retreated backwards.

Well at least she's unarmed now. Li thought noting the katana wedged in a nearby tree. Li slowly picked up his sword and cautiously stepped lightly forward towards the girl.

Kiku immediately wiped her tears away. After she vigorously brushed off her chest, the girl immediately revealed a pair of nunchaku appeared in her hands.

Li stared confused. Most magicians never use nunchaku as a weapon ever!

"Just because it's unorthodox, you needn't underestimate this 'primitive' rice beater," Kiku murmured. "I could blow you away with my magic, but I'm going to let you die REAL SLOW!!!"

Li didn't have to be told to know that the girl was extremely mad. The boy tried to assume a "ready-stance" but Kiku already lunged to the left striking the boy fiercely everywhere on his body with her two rod weapon. Li fell backwards, the world spinning. Kiku proceeded to step heavily on the boy's chest.

"Your fault is to have a stylized technique, making it simple to read your moves," Kiku screeched as she adjusted her nunchaku. "Next time, understand the root of all fighting is merely a single strike or two, not a fancy method or style."

Li grunted weakly as the agonizing foot pushed further. A slight crack could be heard in Li's chest.

Suddenly, a light burst forward, blasting the girl's foot back.

"Well, Li-kun," Eriol's voice remarked forth. "We came as a team, and you abandon us. Not very honorable is it?"

"What do we have here?" Rikou laughed. "(Jap) You're quite popular among the ladies now aren't ya! First the high school girls, and now you're flirting with this miko priestess chick, eh?"

"O-ne gai (Please)," Li muttered, "now's really not the time for jokes."

Eriol and Rikou hoisted the battered boy up, staring at Kiku cautiously. At least Eriol was, Rikou on the other hand, was transfixed at the girl's cleavage.

"I'm sorry man!" Rikou laughed, giving Li a good nudge. "I didn't know you were getting it on with this chick! If I had known I would've stalled a bit!"

"What!?!" Kiku shrieked. She wrapped her Nunchaku up and made a lunge at Rikou. The boy simply teleported away avoiding the attack. However, it really didn't help him much.

Eriol and Li pounded Rikou in the head. "Now that really was overdoing it…Completely ungentlemanly like, and just obscene." Eriol said dryly.

"Now's not the time to get perverted desires, BAKA!" Li exclaimed.

"Ok, ok," Rikou mumbled.

Li glanced back at Kiku. The girl had pulled out a second set of nunchakus, twirling them vigorously in neat circles all around her body before the wait at rest clenched in the girl's arm. Li noticed the smooth and efficient flowing she did, as well as the sparks of flames that were enveloping her entire body.

Hirigisawa-kun was definitely right about adding fuel to the fire… Li thought. The boy gave the girl a slight glance at the girl's fury filled face.

"This girl has extraordinary power," Eriol muttered. "All three of us can't get into the shrine at the same time. A strong sixth-sense barrier guards the shrine so there's no knowing what may be on the other side. It'll be dangerous if we risk going in alone." Eriol looked back at the American with distaste "Apparently, Rikou-kun just added more fuel to the fire…"

"Then what do you suggest we do?" Li demanded. "Sakura's in there with that Tseng!" Li almost dashed towards the door, only to be blocked by an outstretched arm.

"We can just charge straight forward," Eriol said.

"Anyway," Rikou added, trying to get another peak towards Kiku's cleavage, only to receive another rock thrown at him by the enraged girl. "It's pretty obvious that you're not good enough for her, Li-kun…"

Eriol slapped Rikou's shoulder. "And that's where you come in."

"What?" Rikou asked skeptically.

"You're going to distract her as we charge into the shrine."

"I ain't gonna play no decoy!"

"It's for the good of the entire group." Eriol sighed with emphasis. "Your sacrifice will be greatly remembered by all of us…"

"Oh now I'm a human sacrifice, BS!" Rikou protested. "(Eng) She's like a female Bruce Lee, Just WORSE! You saw the ass romping she did to Li-kun!"

"What was that!?!" Li demanded angrily.

"Only the one who's mastered Chang's psychic barriers could withstand those brilliant attacks," Eriol murmured dramatically.

"Hey I like you stucking up to me but I ain't buying it!" Rikou exclaimed.

"Are you going to fight, or are you just loitering?" Kiku demanded angrily. "I'm a very busy girl and I have to pick more herbs for Ojii-san!"

Li wasn't sure what to do. He wanted to get to Sakura as soon as he could. Eriol's idea of using Rikou as a decoy didn't sound too bad. However, the decoy just didn't really want to play along. Li had to act fast.

"Gomen, Rikou-kun…" Li said solemnly grabbing Rikou's shoulder.

"What the--?" Rikou didn't have time to react. Li shoved him right towards the girl.

"WATAAAA!" Kiku screamed as Rikou flew towards her and the tornado like spinning nunchaku.

"DAMN YOU!!!" Rikou managed to yell before he was forced to face the onslaught.

Eriol nodded in agreement with a hint of amusement in his face. "Good thinking Li-kun. Didn't really like him anyway."

Li couldn't help but grin himself. Rikou was frantically evading the many hard obstacles going towards him, deflecting some feebly trying to neutralize Kiku's force.

"Ikimasho (let's go!)" Li yelled as he and Eriol plunged for the door.

Sakura prepared herself. She wasn't quite sure whether she could really trust what seemed like a humble, kind, but mysterious man.

"Are you ready?" Tseng asked hobbling into a cross-legged position.

Sakura nodded hesitantly. "Hai."

"Here sit, and when you finish the incantation, don't forget to slap my palms!" Tseng reminded.

"Ok, Wakarimasu (I understand)." Sakura replied.

"ONE MORE THING!" Tseng exclaimed. "No matter what you see, don't ever try to change what's in the past!"

"What would happen if I accidentally do?" Sakura asked curiously.

Tseng grinned. "Girl, the present is based entirely on the accumulation of events from the past. You could call it like its foundation. If you take out the foundation to a building, what happens?"

"Hoeee!" Sakura gasped, a slight sweat drop forming in her head. Something definitely already told her that. "That would mean everything in the present would collapse and disappear!"

"Exactly, now we won't have a problem if that doesn't happen, ne?" Tseng finished. "However since you really didn't exist back then Most people won't actually see you anyway, you're just a bunch of floating matter in a way, so nothing serious would really happen unless you really mess up."

"Arigato," Sakura said with a slight bow.

"Now you sure you want to do this?" Tseng asked finally. "This could be all a trap which will make you stuck in between the spaces of time forever."

"If this situation only was about me, maybe not," Sakura replied defiantly, "However a lot of my friends have been affected by these past events and I won't just sit still and see them get hurt."

Tseng smiled. "Sakura-dono, your morals were way better than Clow's. Makes me almost surprised why Clow chose you in the first place."

The girl blushed at the compliment. "I'm not that great, really!" She said shyly as she steadily sat cross-legged across from Tseng. Raising her star wand she slowly began her incantation.

"Return!" Sakura exclaimed. A bright golden glow engulfed the two. Sakura quickly smacked her palms onto Tseng raised hands. Immediately, Sakura's world faded.

"Sa…ku…ra…!" was the last thing the girl could here before she departed the present time.

(End of chapter 11)

Gyahh! So boring!!! Well that sums up this chapter and hopefully the lame tension that I was trying to build hasn't made you bored yet. Well hopefully I can really delve into the plot that I've had in mind to keep your attention. With due time maybe I can complete this entire fic! Ooh god everyone's getting gout of character, what could be worse??? Oh well, please review!!! Need to know what ya think!