To my reviewers:
Thank you very much for your comments. I am grateful for your advice, but I do want to address a few things.
I cannot help the formatting, fanfiction.net does that itself. Some of us are not familiar with the use of htmls and are stuck double-spacing everything or the whole thing flows as one giant paragraph.
I like to capitalize all the first words. I don't care if it makes it confusing to you, it doesn't confuse me and that's how I like poetyry read. I don't like poems that don't have a lot of capitalization, they make it confusing for me at least.
Java, you are right about my rhyming skills. They need serious work. This was actually meant as a song, but even so they need work. Also, you might think of Calvary as "blood, sweat, dirt, ect," but I prefer a different view of it. Not that I'm saying it wasn't a horrible day or that all those things aren't true - they are. I was looking for a way to portray my gratefulness for what Jesus did for me.
Spelling error - Evangelist. Thanks for the correction. ^-^ Stupid computer didn't know the word.
*cough* Java, I have no idea what you're talking about when you say I used kanji. I did my summary entirely in caps because it is my first post and I didn't have anything else to say, as I thought the title was self- explanatory. I don't see why that is "an appalling lack of taste." And if it is, you could have worded yourself better. In case you hadn't know this, "appalling" is a hurtful word. Also, this bio is shared by four girls. Hana no Bishou is Japanese for "Smile of the Flowers." My friend came up with this name. I know the kanji and don't know what you expect me to do about it - kanji doesn't download on ff.net so it isn't like I can write it in Japanese characters, much as I would love to do so. I fail to see what your problem is with my name.
Thanks to everyone who reviewed! And if anyone wishes to review again and
tell me what they meant and stuff, go ahead! God bless you!
~Hikaru
Thank you very much for your comments. I am grateful for your advice, but I do want to address a few things.
I cannot help the formatting, fanfiction.net does that itself. Some of us are not familiar with the use of htmls and are stuck double-spacing everything or the whole thing flows as one giant paragraph.
I like to capitalize all the first words. I don't care if it makes it confusing to you, it doesn't confuse me and that's how I like poetyry read. I don't like poems that don't have a lot of capitalization, they make it confusing for me at least.
Java, you are right about my rhyming skills. They need serious work. This was actually meant as a song, but even so they need work. Also, you might think of Calvary as "blood, sweat, dirt, ect," but I prefer a different view of it. Not that I'm saying it wasn't a horrible day or that all those things aren't true - they are. I was looking for a way to portray my gratefulness for what Jesus did for me.
Spelling error - Evangelist. Thanks for the correction. ^-^ Stupid computer didn't know the word.
*cough* Java, I have no idea what you're talking about when you say I used kanji. I did my summary entirely in caps because it is my first post and I didn't have anything else to say, as I thought the title was self- explanatory. I don't see why that is "an appalling lack of taste." And if it is, you could have worded yourself better. In case you hadn't know this, "appalling" is a hurtful word. Also, this bio is shared by four girls. Hana no Bishou is Japanese for "Smile of the Flowers." My friend came up with this name. I know the kanji and don't know what you expect me to do about it - kanji doesn't download on ff.net so it isn't like I can write it in Japanese characters, much as I would love to do so. I fail to see what your problem is with my name.
Thanks to everyone who reviewed! And if anyone wishes to review again and
tell me what they meant and stuff, go ahead! God bless you!
~Hikaru