A/N *Wow, just wow! Thank you soooooooooooooooooooooo much times infinity
for the reviews. It means a lot to me that you guys to the time to say that
was good or that was short or something along those lines. I like it even
better when you say your reaction cuz then I can sit here and laugh! Haha!
You guys said that some of my chapters were really short and I must explain
myself and ask you guys what you prefer. First excuse is lack of time and
the other I had writers block. At first I thought that Hattie would be the
main character but then I realized that she wasn't nice enough to be so yea
I chose Rosie. But please tell me whether you prefer shorter chapters more
frequently or longer chapters not so often?
I must thank my number 1 reviewers, Aduial Elenath: I was online when
you were reviewing my story and I was sooo happy and excited and I was
waiting for each review and I was agreeing with what you said and it was so
nice. Bast is a city but I was thinking when I realized that it could be a
principality?? Or is that too far fetched? You tell me and if it is I will
rename it. Oh and to you others out there her story, Legends and Magic,
ROCKS!! I can only dream of being that good so that makes you reviewing my
story mean even more to me. The other reviewer is Icepixie: Thank you for
reading my story like I said the Aduial it means a great deal to me and you
are new like me and your story I can tell if going to be fantastic! Her
story is Beauty's Sleep really good! Please when you are done here by all
means go on to these stories it should keep you busy!
Ok I am done droning on & on & on and you get the point but here is
some story with my A/N! Lol!
~Rosie~
I bolted very quietly out of the room. I ran out into the street and tried to figure out where I was going. I had to remember this place but it has been so long. To think when I got that necklace I was ecstatic, I couldn't believe my eyes but I was naive then and now I am here to fix that and take back my life and what is mine. To do this I need to go to the ball and I really don't want to be recognized. I mean when I wished to be famous I really wasn't thinking serial killer but let us not dwell on unhappy times.
I knew that I must go to Hezzel and that he would give me what I needed. He is the only one in this whole world that has ever been nice to me and believes that I have not done have of the things I am accused of. I could always go to him and I knew that when I went to him all of my problems seem to either disappear or seem not as bad. He was like a miracle worker and a grandfather mixed into one. But I always feel like I will never know him completely like he is a cake with many different flavors and as soon as you find one flavor and you finish it you are full and can eat anymore so then you save later and you never finish or run of out of layers. At least he wasn't like an onion. I think Olive would agree that cake is much better.
It was not that far to Hezzel's cottage but you had to walk till the end of Tibles Street. That street is main street and very busy at first but down at Hezzel's end is very quiet and very different from the beginning.
I passed by a stores and a nice restaurant. I just glanced in the window and there was Olive! She was sitting with a man who was not appalling to the eye at all. Wow, she must know more than she lets on because I would have never guessed in the little time that I have known her. I am certain that Hattie does not know. What is this she is eating? Oh white cake, hmm I guess he gave her an offer she couldn't refuse. Haha. Well, good for you Olive. You need exposure to someone other than Hattie.
I keep getting distracted. I think he expects me to come. He just has his little ways of knowing. I finally got to the end of the street and found his house unchanged from my memory as if I had ripped it from my brain and put it in front of me.
For some reason I felt nervous. I think it was because I was feeling guilty for coming to him again but this would be the beginning of the end now that I have everything figured out. Besides by the time I leave I will feel bad that I haven't come more often.
I skipped from stone to stone but soon lost sight of them for they became covered in ivy the closer I came to the cottage. I nervously knocked on the door. I wonder if he will be able to even open it with all of this ivy! I glance around at his cottage's surroundings while I hear him bump about getting to the door.
"If you ahe selling soomething then you ahe coming to the whong place and I suggest that you leafe befohe I find you on mii door steep. Howefeh, if you ahe Hosie then come hight in."
I smiled at this and then yanked the door open maybe harder than I should have for it slammed open and made Hezzel drop the glass bottle he was holding.
"Hello, Hezzel."
"Ello, Hosemahy"
"I am sorry I made you drop that bottle."
"Itis nothing! I was going to thhow it away when you came in. Which bhings me to mii next question. Why hafe you come?"
"I have need of some supplies."
"Like what?"
"Welll.you know the balls that the Prince is holding?" Hezzel winces and nods his head at this but calmly listens.
"I really need to go but the problem is I need to get there and start getting to know people.I need to know if they will recognize me. So I was wondering if you would help me?" I tried to hide the desperation in my voice but I don't think it was working. I suddenly became very fascinated with my feet as I waited for his response.
".uhum."
Maybe he is just thinking. I will give it some more time but I wonder what "uhum" means.
"Welll, let's see you will hafe need of money and dhesses and a mask to staht. Oh and we mustin forget shoes! Yes we mustin they ahe most important."
I could have kissed him at that moment but I knew when he was thinking like this I wouldn't want to disturb him. He started rummaging through his closet and through old dusty boxes. Then he said
"AH HA! You will need this." He said very proudly. I walked over to see what it was. Then I saw.
It was the most gorgeous mask I have either seen. It had two eyes that fit my eyes perfectly and were edged with pearls and diamonds. On the borders were silky and colorful feathers of blue and green that were layered. There was a chain that held it on my face that was mother of pearl and could be securely attached as a part of my hairstyle.
"This is wonderful Hezzel! Wherever did you find this?" I asked still in awe and wondering what else does he keep in that closet?
"A fhiend gafe it to me fhom Hopehhia. She was queen at the time and she thought I would hafe a family of my own someday but instead I found you so it is youhs now. A dhess and shoes!!!"
He went up to his attack and rummaged through a couple of things and came down with three dresses, shoes, and a handful of jewelry. This just isn't adding up. Why would he have all of this just in his house? I really wanted to ask but I didn't. It was none of my business and besides why be noisy when someone is being nice?
"Wow Hezzel! You still never cease to amaze me. I know Hezzel when this whole mess is over I will only come because I miss you and I will never ask for anything again."
"No no. You must come often as you must and you also must huhhy and get heady. So no thanks just go and phomise me you will tell me about it lateh."
"Alright Hezzel, Good bye! And I will come as soon as I can!" I called as he shooed me out the front door. Well Hezzel looks like you have saved the day again.
I bolted very quietly out of the room. I ran out into the street and tried to figure out where I was going. I had to remember this place but it has been so long. To think when I got that necklace I was ecstatic, I couldn't believe my eyes but I was naive then and now I am here to fix that and take back my life and what is mine. To do this I need to go to the ball and I really don't want to be recognized. I mean when I wished to be famous I really wasn't thinking serial killer but let us not dwell on unhappy times.
I knew that I must go to Hezzel and that he would give me what I needed. He is the only one in this whole world that has ever been nice to me and believes that I have not done have of the things I am accused of. I could always go to him and I knew that when I went to him all of my problems seem to either disappear or seem not as bad. He was like a miracle worker and a grandfather mixed into one. But I always feel like I will never know him completely like he is a cake with many different flavors and as soon as you find one flavor and you finish it you are full and can eat anymore so then you save later and you never finish or run of out of layers. At least he wasn't like an onion. I think Olive would agree that cake is much better.
It was not that far to Hezzel's cottage but you had to walk till the end of Tibles Street. That street is main street and very busy at first but down at Hezzel's end is very quiet and very different from the beginning.
I passed by a stores and a nice restaurant. I just glanced in the window and there was Olive! She was sitting with a man who was not appalling to the eye at all. Wow, she must know more than she lets on because I would have never guessed in the little time that I have known her. I am certain that Hattie does not know. What is this she is eating? Oh white cake, hmm I guess he gave her an offer she couldn't refuse. Haha. Well, good for you Olive. You need exposure to someone other than Hattie.
I keep getting distracted. I think he expects me to come. He just has his little ways of knowing. I finally got to the end of the street and found his house unchanged from my memory as if I had ripped it from my brain and put it in front of me.
For some reason I felt nervous. I think it was because I was feeling guilty for coming to him again but this would be the beginning of the end now that I have everything figured out. Besides by the time I leave I will feel bad that I haven't come more often.
I skipped from stone to stone but soon lost sight of them for they became covered in ivy the closer I came to the cottage. I nervously knocked on the door. I wonder if he will be able to even open it with all of this ivy! I glance around at his cottage's surroundings while I hear him bump about getting to the door.
"If you ahe selling soomething then you ahe coming to the whong place and I suggest that you leafe befohe I find you on mii door steep. Howefeh, if you ahe Hosie then come hight in."
I smiled at this and then yanked the door open maybe harder than I should have for it slammed open and made Hezzel drop the glass bottle he was holding.
"Hello, Hezzel."
"Ello, Hosemahy"
"I am sorry I made you drop that bottle."
"Itis nothing! I was going to thhow it away when you came in. Which bhings me to mii next question. Why hafe you come?"
"I have need of some supplies."
"Like what?"
"Welll.you know the balls that the Prince is holding?" Hezzel winces and nods his head at this but calmly listens.
"I really need to go but the problem is I need to get there and start getting to know people.I need to know if they will recognize me. So I was wondering if you would help me?" I tried to hide the desperation in my voice but I don't think it was working. I suddenly became very fascinated with my feet as I waited for his response.
".uhum."
Maybe he is just thinking. I will give it some more time but I wonder what "uhum" means.
"Welll, let's see you will hafe need of money and dhesses and a mask to staht. Oh and we mustin forget shoes! Yes we mustin they ahe most important."
I could have kissed him at that moment but I knew when he was thinking like this I wouldn't want to disturb him. He started rummaging through his closet and through old dusty boxes. Then he said
"AH HA! You will need this." He said very proudly. I walked over to see what it was. Then I saw.
It was the most gorgeous mask I have either seen. It had two eyes that fit my eyes perfectly and were edged with pearls and diamonds. On the borders were silky and colorful feathers of blue and green that were layered. There was a chain that held it on my face that was mother of pearl and could be securely attached as a part of my hairstyle.
"This is wonderful Hezzel! Wherever did you find this?" I asked still in awe and wondering what else does he keep in that closet?
"A fhiend gafe it to me fhom Hopehhia. She was queen at the time and she thought I would hafe a family of my own someday but instead I found you so it is youhs now. A dhess and shoes!!!"
He went up to his attack and rummaged through a couple of things and came down with three dresses, shoes, and a handful of jewelry. This just isn't adding up. Why would he have all of this just in his house? I really wanted to ask but I didn't. It was none of my business and besides why be noisy when someone is being nice?
"Wow Hezzel! You still never cease to amaze me. I know Hezzel when this whole mess is over I will only come because I miss you and I will never ask for anything again."
"No no. You must come often as you must and you also must huhhy and get heady. So no thanks just go and phomise me you will tell me about it lateh."
"Alright Hezzel, Good bye! And I will come as soon as I can!" I called as he shooed me out the front door. Well Hezzel looks like you have saved the day again.