I'll try to type more tommorrow. I have ball practice though so I don't know.
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Chapter 6
A.J. Solo listened intently at the conversation Winter was having with
Jaina over the comm-unit. Jaina and the others had landed in Theed about two hours
ago. She had called Winter reminding her of their visit and to see if Winter had
room for them all.(Mara,Luke,Ben,Ami,Leia,Han,Jag,Jaina,Syal,Soontir,Wedge,Iella,Myri,
Syal 2,and Wyn) Winter,of course, had enough room because of the new house they lived
in. The house had been an old hotel, so there were plenty of rooms. They own a cabin
stood beside the hotel that is where they sleep.
"Winter, is everything alright with Ashley? I have this weird sense she is
excited about something. What is it?"
"Jaina, you should be ashamed of yourself? Today is her fifth birthday and I
bet you forgot."
"Shit. That's today I'll pick her something up in town. We'll see you soon. Bye."
The connection faded as did A.J.'s joy. Winter had been right her own mother had
forgotten her birthday. What else was going to go wrong today. She walked into the living room and turned on the television where she found
something else. Mr.Naberrie, a dear friend of her's was now dead. The funeral was to be held
today. Her head drooped as she cried.
Keep the reviews coming. any suggestions/questions are also welcome.
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Chapter 6
A.J. Solo listened intently at the conversation Winter was having with
Jaina over the comm-unit. Jaina and the others had landed in Theed about two hours
ago. She had called Winter reminding her of their visit and to see if Winter had
room for them all.(Mara,Luke,Ben,Ami,Leia,Han,Jag,Jaina,Syal,Soontir,Wedge,Iella,Myri,
Syal 2,and Wyn) Winter,of course, had enough room because of the new house they lived
in. The house had been an old hotel, so there were plenty of rooms. They own a cabin
stood beside the hotel that is where they sleep.
"Winter, is everything alright with Ashley? I have this weird sense she is
excited about something. What is it?"
"Jaina, you should be ashamed of yourself? Today is her fifth birthday and I
bet you forgot."
"Shit. That's today I'll pick her something up in town. We'll see you soon. Bye."
The connection faded as did A.J.'s joy. Winter had been right her own mother had
forgotten her birthday. What else was going to go wrong today. She walked into the living room and turned on the television where she found
something else. Mr.Naberrie, a dear friend of her's was now dead. The funeral was to be held
today. Her head drooped as she cried.