Disclaimer: I do not own Phantom of the Opera, or any of the characters – they all belong to their respective owners.

                Graceful. Slender as a cat, moving along
                                those ebony hallways, silent as the night:
                     but these are clichés, and you are far from being one

               

Perhaps the word 'candlelit' would suffice:
                                your eyes glitter coolly in the dark, the flaring yellow of a candle flame:
                                                                haunted, cold and lonely – frozen, somewhat
                                                     like the silent stare of a stone gargoyle

                                                only living;

                                divine frenzy: sundered wings – I can almost feel
                                                the pain of seeping wounds (though I cannot see)
                                    and the torn feathers. I thought you were a dark angel:
                                                                a white raven – the shadowed gaze
                                                   of those candle-lit eyes a contrast against
                                                                                the overarching beauty of your music.

                                                                do not think I do not hear you whisper

nor hear the quiet heartache in your voice
      when you sing.

                                                               

                                                (if I alone can make your song take flight
                                                                allow me to help you make the music of the night)