Well I finally passed my writers block! Yay! Thanks for the reviews, the
helped me pass my writers block, hip, hip hooray! Okay here's part three in
my first story, Murder in Japan! Bwahahahahahahahahaha.(breath)
hahahahahahhahahahaha! ( By: Battousai the legendary story slayer of the revolution! (
Murder in Japan Part 3
Kenshin's mind raced, he couldn't believe how stupid he and the officers had been. They let their guard down, and so had he. The more Kenshin thought the madder he got at himself and the man that kidnapped Karou. What kind of person would pretend to be dying, just to get back at him? Kenshin thought, now running down the road as fast as he could. His eyes scanned the area; he didn't miss a thing, for he was lost to Rurouni. If Sano or Yahiko called his name, he didn't notice. He had a purpose: he would stop this man.
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"Yahiko, Kenshin's gone! So is Karou, I think they're in trouble so let's go!"
Yahiko didn't wake up.
"Yahiko!" Sano yelled.
"Aaaaaaaa! Yahiko jumped up and hit his head on the dresser.
"Come on, Kenshin's in trouble, I'll explain on the way!"
*******
Coo coo, coo coo! The clock had reached 8 A.M. Reeko had grown tired of waiting for the visitor. "Ritosite, your sure he'll find us here?"
Ritosite smirked, "Don't worry, I'll have fun killing the girl even if he doesn't."
Reeko leaned back in his chair and lit a cigar. He put his feet on the table and began to wait again.
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Kenshin wasn't getting anywhere fast. He had to find Karou; he had to save her. He knew it was getting later by the second and he was getting hungry and tired. He saw Sano and Yahiko in the crowd; they were obviously looking for him. He had no time to explain. He began to walk away when he got an idea, and spun around and ran to Sano and Yahiko.
*******
Ritosite calmly sat by himself, meditating and waiting to kill. He hated the Battousai, and he had a good reason to. He began to remember that horrible day when he swore to kill Himura and his friends and family. The day in the revolution when he witnessed his parent's death and his city's destruction by the Battousai. He broke the meditation and pounded the table and then returned to calm, nonchalant ways.
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Kenshin came to a run down shanty. He knew he was in there, he felt Karou's spirit. He went to the door, opened it, slowly and his plan was underway.
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He's here! Thought Ritosite. And he got up, sword ready. He smirked and nodded to Reeko. His plan was underway.
*******
Karou watched as the man at the desk drew a colt magnum and aimed it at her head. She would have screamed but was too afraid. Her throat was dry, and she wasn't able to speak, but she was able to shake and cry. She knew what was going to happen, and Kenshin was about to get the tip of the spear.
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Kenshin sized up the situation. He saw the gun, the man that killed the officers and Karou. He kept his hand on the sword and said, "Well, I guess foolish tricks and dirty ones won't work here. My friends have gathered a mob people to take down you. I suggest giving up, and I'm sure your jail time will be much shorter.
Ritosite laughed and said, "Well, Battousai, I guess it comes down to this - I will kill you, and get vengeance for you killed my parents!" The crowd thundered in the background.
"I know I did horrible things in my past, but I'm changed. I'm passed the ruthlessness of my old ways, and the revolution's over, so forget your anger!"
Ritosite screamed back, "I'll never forgive for you've done Himura! By the way, I figured you'd do something like this, to get the people involved. So you have a choice Kenshin. You can try to stop me and Karou dies, or I blow the explosives I have put around and kill all the people outside. The choice is yours."
Kenshin didn't have to think, he knew his decision. He would never live to see Karou die. Kenshin stamped twice and yelled as loud as he could, "It's over!"
He ran right past Ritosite and taking his reverse blade sword cut the gun in half in the blink of his eye. H e hit Reeko in the neck with the reversed blade, causing him to pass out. He spun around and heard a BOOM! The bomb went off. Ritosite moved forward laughing, you save one over hundreds, you truly deserve to die!"
Kenshin laughed, and said back. "Did you not notice that there isn't anyone out there? After you decided to give away your plan I gave the signal of slamming my foot and yelling so the people could run away. I knew you'd try something like this."
Ritosite stood speechless. He had been deceived; his anger began to build. He couldn't defeat him in a fight. He watched the Battousai; he was too fast and too skilled for him to beat. Instead he ran and disappeared into the smoke. He yelled back, "I swear I will kill you Battousai, I swear it!"
Kenshin helped the weeping Karou out of her cage-like prison and went home. It was over, for now.
*******
A day passed and they were the town heroes. Kenshin thanked the brave people that helped the mock mob. Karou was still shocked by it all. People were cheering and for once in a long while, Kenshin was happy.
*******
Ritosite walked alone in the city, plotting, and planning his next plan to avenge his family. He would become a better swordsman, for he had too. He grinned and said to himself, "Until next time Himura." And then left the city.
my first story, Murder in Japan! Bwahahahahahahahahaha.(breath)
hahahahahahhahahahaha! ( By: Battousai the legendary story slayer of the revolution! (
Murder in Japan Part 3
Kenshin's mind raced, he couldn't believe how stupid he and the officers had been. They let their guard down, and so had he. The more Kenshin thought the madder he got at himself and the man that kidnapped Karou. What kind of person would pretend to be dying, just to get back at him? Kenshin thought, now running down the road as fast as he could. His eyes scanned the area; he didn't miss a thing, for he was lost to Rurouni. If Sano or Yahiko called his name, he didn't notice. He had a purpose: he would stop this man.
*******
"Yahiko, Kenshin's gone! So is Karou, I think they're in trouble so let's go!"
Yahiko didn't wake up.
"Yahiko!" Sano yelled.
"Aaaaaaaa! Yahiko jumped up and hit his head on the dresser.
"Come on, Kenshin's in trouble, I'll explain on the way!"
*******
Coo coo, coo coo! The clock had reached 8 A.M. Reeko had grown tired of waiting for the visitor. "Ritosite, your sure he'll find us here?"
Ritosite smirked, "Don't worry, I'll have fun killing the girl even if he doesn't."
Reeko leaned back in his chair and lit a cigar. He put his feet on the table and began to wait again.
*******
Kenshin wasn't getting anywhere fast. He had to find Karou; he had to save her. He knew it was getting later by the second and he was getting hungry and tired. He saw Sano and Yahiko in the crowd; they were obviously looking for him. He had no time to explain. He began to walk away when he got an idea, and spun around and ran to Sano and Yahiko.
*******
Ritosite calmly sat by himself, meditating and waiting to kill. He hated the Battousai, and he had a good reason to. He began to remember that horrible day when he swore to kill Himura and his friends and family. The day in the revolution when he witnessed his parent's death and his city's destruction by the Battousai. He broke the meditation and pounded the table and then returned to calm, nonchalant ways.
*******
Kenshin came to a run down shanty. He knew he was in there, he felt Karou's spirit. He went to the door, opened it, slowly and his plan was underway.
*******
He's here! Thought Ritosite. And he got up, sword ready. He smirked and nodded to Reeko. His plan was underway.
*******
Karou watched as the man at the desk drew a colt magnum and aimed it at her head. She would have screamed but was too afraid. Her throat was dry, and she wasn't able to speak, but she was able to shake and cry. She knew what was going to happen, and Kenshin was about to get the tip of the spear.
*******
Kenshin sized up the situation. He saw the gun, the man that killed the officers and Karou. He kept his hand on the sword and said, "Well, I guess foolish tricks and dirty ones won't work here. My friends have gathered a mob people to take down you. I suggest giving up, and I'm sure your jail time will be much shorter.
Ritosite laughed and said, "Well, Battousai, I guess it comes down to this - I will kill you, and get vengeance for you killed my parents!" The crowd thundered in the background.
"I know I did horrible things in my past, but I'm changed. I'm passed the ruthlessness of my old ways, and the revolution's over, so forget your anger!"
Ritosite screamed back, "I'll never forgive for you've done Himura! By the way, I figured you'd do something like this, to get the people involved. So you have a choice Kenshin. You can try to stop me and Karou dies, or I blow the explosives I have put around and kill all the people outside. The choice is yours."
Kenshin didn't have to think, he knew his decision. He would never live to see Karou die. Kenshin stamped twice and yelled as loud as he could, "It's over!"
He ran right past Ritosite and taking his reverse blade sword cut the gun in half in the blink of his eye. H e hit Reeko in the neck with the reversed blade, causing him to pass out. He spun around and heard a BOOM! The bomb went off. Ritosite moved forward laughing, you save one over hundreds, you truly deserve to die!"
Kenshin laughed, and said back. "Did you not notice that there isn't anyone out there? After you decided to give away your plan I gave the signal of slamming my foot and yelling so the people could run away. I knew you'd try something like this."
Ritosite stood speechless. He had been deceived; his anger began to build. He couldn't defeat him in a fight. He watched the Battousai; he was too fast and too skilled for him to beat. Instead he ran and disappeared into the smoke. He yelled back, "I swear I will kill you Battousai, I swear it!"
Kenshin helped the weeping Karou out of her cage-like prison and went home. It was over, for now.
*******
A day passed and they were the town heroes. Kenshin thanked the brave people that helped the mock mob. Karou was still shocked by it all. People were cheering and for once in a long while, Kenshin was happy.
*******
Ritosite walked alone in the city, plotting, and planning his next plan to avenge his family. He would become a better swordsman, for he had too. He grinned and said to himself, "Until next time Himura." And then left the city.