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PG - English - Romance/Humor - Publish date:
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The Beginning
This is my first fanfic, so I'm a little nervous but I have a
great story line, I hope you like it! Also all the characters are (almost) all
Mrs. Rowling's so they aren't mine!
CHAPTER ONE: (James and lily and their friends
are all 4-5 years old)
It all started when Lily Evins
moved in next door. James Potter (or Jimmy as his friends call him) was playing
outside when their car came up the driveway. He saw the family go inside the
house. He thought the girl about his age was pretty. The family was mostly brown
haired except for the smallest girl, she had flaming red hair.
Mrs. Potter came out of
Jimmy's house and dragged Jimmy with her to greet their new neighbors. They rang
the doorbell and saw a swish of a curtain as to show that some one had been
watching. The older sister (the one who had been watching) opened the door and
yelled, "Mum it's those Potter's you were talking about, the ones you said were
nosy!" 'Speak for you self' thought Mrs. Potter and then smiled as Mrs. Evins
came rushing down the stairs. She pushed her daughter out of the way and said
nervously, "Hello, sorry about m-my daughter Petunia, she gets these crazy ideas
in her head" she glared at Petunia "anyway, please come in. Sorry if it's messy,
we've just arrived." When they came in the house Petunia was already cleaning
and had made some tea for them. The smaller girl (the one with the red hair) was
sitting politely on the sofa with her hands clasped in her lap. "This is my
other daughter, Lily, she was very happy to see that we'd moved next door to
some one her age." Said Mrs. Evins. "Maybe they could have a play date some
time," suggested Mrs. Potter
"Well I'll call you………sorry,
what was your name again?" asked Mrs. Evins "Margaret Potter" replied Mrs.
Potter. "Margaret? Is that you! " Said Mrs. Evins astonished. "Yes, do I know
you from somewhere?" asked Mrs. Potter. "Yes, you do, I'm Marianne Evins,
Or Marianne McDonald as you probably know me as." Mrs. Evins smiled as Mrs.
Potter remembered. "Oh yes we were next door neighbors when my husband and I
first moved to London." "Yes, so these little ones have known each other since
birth. I did eventually decide to use my husband's last name." Laughed Mrs.
Evins.
The grown ups kept on talking for
an hour, so the small ones got acquainted (or re-acquainted) "Hello, I am
Jimmy," said Jimmy as he stuck out his hand. "Very night to meet you Gimmy, I am
Lily. My Mummy said that we had known each ober fom birt. Do you know who birt
is?" Lily asked "No." replied Jimmy sadly. "Want to go anpd play? Asked Jimmy."
Sure!" replied Lily so they held hands and skipped out to play in Lily's
back yard.
O.K this is my first chapter! I hope you like it! Please send
me reviews!!!!!!!! So I can write more~ I want to write more!~ also I promise
the story will get better! So review!!!!
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