A/N im sorry I made *SO* many mistakes in the first chapter. Firstly, I
meant to say story not book in the authors note. Secondly, I never ment to
make Alyssa slow wen she was riding her bike (but I swear she said she
wasn't so fast!) lets just say she just was with megan to be nice (cuz
megan is really a slow rider)
~reviews~ boyar-raja, Nihtfyr, Daisy Brambleburr- yes, I know the first chapter doesn't have anything to do with lord of the rings. That's because I haven't really gotten into the story yet! I hope this chapter satisfies you.
Those goes to all of you, plz don't be mean, it's my first fanfic, im sure u ppl didn't enjoy mean reviews, but wat u can do, is point out some mistakes that I did, so I can do it better next time, not just saying it sux. Thx to StarMage and NuttyGummy for actually being interested in my story! Also thx frodos girl (Alyssa) for stickin up 4 me!!! Ya.so here's the second chapter.ENJOY!
~*The Story Begins*~
I landed between 1 and 2 meters away from my bike. Probably 1.5. I must have been knocked out.
When I finally woke, I slightly opened my eyes.
God, I hope I never broke anything!
I was relieved to know that I haven't broken anything. What I also noticed is that Megan and Alyssa were gone.
"Goddamn it!" I said wondering where they had gone.
If they're trying to find me, they're doing one hell of a job!
I stood up and brushed all the grass and crap off of me. I started walking to my bike. *THUMP!* I walk right into a tree.
"Where did this come from!?" I stepped back, rubbing my nose and looking up along the tree. I notices how tall and wide the tree was.
Uhh.this tree is kinda big to be growing in Calgary. Where the hell am I!?
I looked around. There was a huge forest, so green, so lush; it couldn't have been possible to be earth. There was a cute little stream tickling its way to who knows where. It was all so beautiful I thought I have died! My bike also wasn't there anymore.
Ok, either I'm dreaming, or I'm in heaven, maybe even limbo. What am I gonna do!? Ok, I should look for help. Where the hell is help!?
I started to really panic. I just sat down and thought. Thought of what to do and where to go. I have never really been lost before, except that time when my dad forgot me in a very large campground. But that's a whole different story.
I started to walk in a direction which I thought was the best way and just walked. I walked and walked and walked. It wasn't all that fun. But I wanted to know where the hell I was. Yes, I was still walking, but know my legs were hurting *SO* much. I decided I MUST have a break. I turned my diskman down and laid down.
Whoever knew looking at the sky makes you.so.so.sleepy...
I had dozed off (obviously). But when I woke, something happened I did not intend. When I opened my eyes, the first thing I saw was a beautiful woodwork ceiling.
"Wow" I said out loud, "awesome wood work!" "O, thank you!" I quickly sat up, not expecting someone to say something back. When I looked around though, there was no one there.
"Uhh, who said that?" I asked, starting to look at my surroundings.
"The dwarves built it with their bare hands when I was just a wee hobbit."
"Hobbit?" I questioned. Then I remembered what the word hobbit had ment (being walking all day yesterday, nonstop, it was hard to remember things) "O my god, don't tell me, it can't be." I started to stutter in astonishment.
"Are you an invisible hobbit!?" I asked, still looking around.
"Nonsense, no one here is invisible; it takes great magic to be invisible.
"Then where are you? Who are you.do you have something to eat?" I was starving so much, not eating since before I left my house.
"My name is Fram Jumpswell and yes, of course I have something to eat! Why, a hobbit wouldn't be a hobbit without something to eat!" said a cute little hobbit, walking from another room, holding a tray with all kinds of crackers and such. I immediately started to gobble all the food up, right in the bed.
When I finished, I got out of the bed (which by the way was SO comfy), Fram just stared on my clothes.
"Excuse me, but what kind of clothes are those. I believe I have never seen those kind before." questioned Fram, still staring.
"O, you mean my jeans and hoodie?" I said looking down at my clothes.
"Yes, would you like to borrow some of mine? O, wait, I don't think I have any female clothes. We could go to my friend's house and see if she has anything you might like."
"Sure. Where exactly are we now?" I asked as we walked to a huge, red, round door.
"we're just out of Hobbiton, near Brandywine bridge. We are going to Peregrin Took's to get you some clothes." So we got out the door and there was more of that forest I saw earlier, but from here, I could see some crops and such. The path is winding until it got to the dirt or gravel road. There was many huge, bushy trees.
We were walking down a windy brick path leasing it's way to the sirt raod. You could tell that Fram was richer than all the other hobbits, his house was under a hill. It looked so queer compared to earth. It kinda reminded me of the teletubbies' house.
"Where did you find me?" I started to wonder. "well, I was out picking wild berries and mushrooms for my delicioiuse stew and I see a peron just lying there." Explained Fram. Then I thought, how the hell did such a little person, carry me, a 110lb girl, all the way to his house! It is quite impossible though because I don't remember seeing a house where I was walking. Then again, I don't remember a lot of things very well!
"Just a question, but did you ever carry me to your house!? I think I wouls have crushed you if you carried me on your back!"
"Well, I had some people help me. A lot of people. It took quite a while too. You should be thankful that we did carry you though. There are many things lurking in the forest. Lately there has been a rumour that these ghost-ish things on dead horses have been in the forest, looking for something. Something very evil.
Yes, I know I used the word 'queer' in it, but don't laff. I couldn't think of any other good describing words! Lol I hope u like this chapter. I'll try to update it sooner!!! Don't 4get to review!!!
~reviews~ boyar-raja, Nihtfyr, Daisy Brambleburr- yes, I know the first chapter doesn't have anything to do with lord of the rings. That's because I haven't really gotten into the story yet! I hope this chapter satisfies you.
Those goes to all of you, plz don't be mean, it's my first fanfic, im sure u ppl didn't enjoy mean reviews, but wat u can do, is point out some mistakes that I did, so I can do it better next time, not just saying it sux. Thx to StarMage and NuttyGummy for actually being interested in my story! Also thx frodos girl (Alyssa) for stickin up 4 me!!! Ya.so here's the second chapter.ENJOY!
~*The Story Begins*~
I landed between 1 and 2 meters away from my bike. Probably 1.5. I must have been knocked out.
When I finally woke, I slightly opened my eyes.
God, I hope I never broke anything!
I was relieved to know that I haven't broken anything. What I also noticed is that Megan and Alyssa were gone.
"Goddamn it!" I said wondering where they had gone.
If they're trying to find me, they're doing one hell of a job!
I stood up and brushed all the grass and crap off of me. I started walking to my bike. *THUMP!* I walk right into a tree.
"Where did this come from!?" I stepped back, rubbing my nose and looking up along the tree. I notices how tall and wide the tree was.
Uhh.this tree is kinda big to be growing in Calgary. Where the hell am I!?
I looked around. There was a huge forest, so green, so lush; it couldn't have been possible to be earth. There was a cute little stream tickling its way to who knows where. It was all so beautiful I thought I have died! My bike also wasn't there anymore.
Ok, either I'm dreaming, or I'm in heaven, maybe even limbo. What am I gonna do!? Ok, I should look for help. Where the hell is help!?
I started to really panic. I just sat down and thought. Thought of what to do and where to go. I have never really been lost before, except that time when my dad forgot me in a very large campground. But that's a whole different story.
I started to walk in a direction which I thought was the best way and just walked. I walked and walked and walked. It wasn't all that fun. But I wanted to know where the hell I was. Yes, I was still walking, but know my legs were hurting *SO* much. I decided I MUST have a break. I turned my diskman down and laid down.
Whoever knew looking at the sky makes you.so.so.sleepy...
I had dozed off (obviously). But when I woke, something happened I did not intend. When I opened my eyes, the first thing I saw was a beautiful woodwork ceiling.
"Wow" I said out loud, "awesome wood work!" "O, thank you!" I quickly sat up, not expecting someone to say something back. When I looked around though, there was no one there.
"Uhh, who said that?" I asked, starting to look at my surroundings.
"The dwarves built it with their bare hands when I was just a wee hobbit."
"Hobbit?" I questioned. Then I remembered what the word hobbit had ment (being walking all day yesterday, nonstop, it was hard to remember things) "O my god, don't tell me, it can't be." I started to stutter in astonishment.
"Are you an invisible hobbit!?" I asked, still looking around.
"Nonsense, no one here is invisible; it takes great magic to be invisible.
"Then where are you? Who are you.do you have something to eat?" I was starving so much, not eating since before I left my house.
"My name is Fram Jumpswell and yes, of course I have something to eat! Why, a hobbit wouldn't be a hobbit without something to eat!" said a cute little hobbit, walking from another room, holding a tray with all kinds of crackers and such. I immediately started to gobble all the food up, right in the bed.
When I finished, I got out of the bed (which by the way was SO comfy), Fram just stared on my clothes.
"Excuse me, but what kind of clothes are those. I believe I have never seen those kind before." questioned Fram, still staring.
"O, you mean my jeans and hoodie?" I said looking down at my clothes.
"Yes, would you like to borrow some of mine? O, wait, I don't think I have any female clothes. We could go to my friend's house and see if she has anything you might like."
"Sure. Where exactly are we now?" I asked as we walked to a huge, red, round door.
"we're just out of Hobbiton, near Brandywine bridge. We are going to Peregrin Took's to get you some clothes." So we got out the door and there was more of that forest I saw earlier, but from here, I could see some crops and such. The path is winding until it got to the dirt or gravel road. There was many huge, bushy trees.
We were walking down a windy brick path leasing it's way to the sirt raod. You could tell that Fram was richer than all the other hobbits, his house was under a hill. It looked so queer compared to earth. It kinda reminded me of the teletubbies' house.
"Where did you find me?" I started to wonder. "well, I was out picking wild berries and mushrooms for my delicioiuse stew and I see a peron just lying there." Explained Fram. Then I thought, how the hell did such a little person, carry me, a 110lb girl, all the way to his house! It is quite impossible though because I don't remember seeing a house where I was walking. Then again, I don't remember a lot of things very well!
"Just a question, but did you ever carry me to your house!? I think I wouls have crushed you if you carried me on your back!"
"Well, I had some people help me. A lot of people. It took quite a while too. You should be thankful that we did carry you though. There are many things lurking in the forest. Lately there has been a rumour that these ghost-ish things on dead horses have been in the forest, looking for something. Something very evil.
Yes, I know I used the word 'queer' in it, but don't laff. I couldn't think of any other good describing words! Lol I hope u like this chapter. I'll try to update it sooner!!! Don't 4get to review!!!