*Ok folks. I came up with a great idea for a TRIGUN-based fanfic(while I was listening to the 2nd soundtrack). But I only thought of the intro, so I'm only going to put that up. Please don't blame me if it's really crappy... Just lemme know what I can do to fix it if it IS crappy, ok? Anyways...time to begin!!* *music plays*
Blood of Innocence
By: ChibiMilly13
Introduction
A few years ago, there used to be a city by the name of Alexandi. It was a very populated town, full of people who were always happy, kind to others, and carefree. They always went on with their lives from day to day, and night to night, thinking that nothing will ever happen to them. Until...
*August 13th, 3150*
The five moons of Gunsmoke have been glowing a very dark crisom red, for many many days now. Even the people of Alexandi City noticed this. Some said that it could mean a bad omen, while others just completely ignored the whole thing, saying that it wasn't a big deal to them. Well...
*August 20th, 3150*
A week later, the moons have seemed to get redder and redder as each day passed. Still, everyone thought it was just a cycle of some sort. No one was scared, even though some people thought that they did something wrong. The strange thing was, at the same time...a little girl by the name of Miko had disappeared that very same day.
Then, at midnight, the whole sky underneath the city had gone pitch black. Not even the stars seemed to shine that night. Then, the next thing you heard was a ear-piercing scream of a woman as you heard her blood splatter all over the place. Soon, others heard this too and tried to escape, even though they were blinded to the darkness. A few hours later, the five moons were now so red, it looked like they were bleeding. Then the stars began to twinkle as the darkness has disappeared. Now...all you saw was the lifeless bodies of Alexandi City's population, as their innocent blood began to paint the ground beneath them. The whole town was in rubble, though some buildings were still standing tall and proud. Also, another thing was standing... a little girl who was now covered in the town's blood of life...
End of Introduction
*So, what did you think of the intro. Was it good? Was it bad? Was it crappy? Please review and let me know if I need to change anything. Thanks!*
~ChibiMilly13
Blood of Innocence
By: ChibiMilly13
Introduction
A few years ago, there used to be a city by the name of Alexandi. It was a very populated town, full of people who were always happy, kind to others, and carefree. They always went on with their lives from day to day, and night to night, thinking that nothing will ever happen to them. Until...
*August 13th, 3150*
The five moons of Gunsmoke have been glowing a very dark crisom red, for many many days now. Even the people of Alexandi City noticed this. Some said that it could mean a bad omen, while others just completely ignored the whole thing, saying that it wasn't a big deal to them. Well...
*August 20th, 3150*
A week later, the moons have seemed to get redder and redder as each day passed. Still, everyone thought it was just a cycle of some sort. No one was scared, even though some people thought that they did something wrong. The strange thing was, at the same time...a little girl by the name of Miko had disappeared that very same day.
Then, at midnight, the whole sky underneath the city had gone pitch black. Not even the stars seemed to shine that night. Then, the next thing you heard was a ear-piercing scream of a woman as you heard her blood splatter all over the place. Soon, others heard this too and tried to escape, even though they were blinded to the darkness. A few hours later, the five moons were now so red, it looked like they were bleeding. Then the stars began to twinkle as the darkness has disappeared. Now...all you saw was the lifeless bodies of Alexandi City's population, as their innocent blood began to paint the ground beneath them. The whole town was in rubble, though some buildings were still standing tall and proud. Also, another thing was standing... a little girl who was now covered in the town's blood of life...
End of Introduction
*So, what did you think of the intro. Was it good? Was it bad? Was it crappy? Please review and let me know if I need to change anything. Thanks!*
~ChibiMilly13