The Fan(n) Girls II
Disclaimer: See Chapter 1.
Author's note: Bet you didn't expect Chapter 2 so soon, huh? I'm actually very excited about continuing this story. Well, time to get things moving.
Reviewing the reviewing:
Review 1: Cinnamon w/ Daimond (user ID: 374883)
"Hey this is a great introduction...I hope you'll get some more out soon! I liked the first one and I'm sure I'll like this one just as much as the other one...I think that that's pretty interesting but, I have to go and eat dinner now...I'll boe on more later...:)"
Well, Cinnamon, you asked for more and you got more. That's what I like, support.
Review 2: sonicgirl12 (user ID: 362758)
"I KNOW this is gonna get good!"
How do you know? You're not psychic. (Just kidding, thanks.)
Chapter 2: New neighbors, new dilemmas
Sally was very excited. She and Theta and Kelly were getting new neighbors. As the moving van pulled up to the house, two men began unloading box after box from the van.
Meanwhile, three boys got out of the van and walked toward the fence that separated their property from the Fann property. They talked as they walked, and the girls couldn't help but overhear.
"So Brandon," one of the boys said, "are you excited about moving to a new house?" "Yes, Joe," another boy replied. "I bet I'll enjoy scenic Bodopolis. How about you, T.J.?"
Kelly gasped. T.J.? That was the name of the boy she had met aboard the cruise ship that one time. Immediately she used her grappling hook to get to the top of a nearby tree.
Theta started up her electronic propeller beanie and hovered to the branch Kelly was sitting on, with Sally holding Theta's leg. Together the girls looked at the boys as they sat down on a curb.
The tree was just high enough to allow Sally, Kelly and Theta to jump down to the other side of the fence, which they did. Then they walked over to the boys.
Kelly spoke first. "T.J.? Is that you? It's a surprise that you, of all people, would move next door to us. Who are your friends?" "Funny, I was about to ask you that," replied T.J.
"I'm Sally," said Sally, "and that's my sister Theta. Pleased to meet you." "Same here," replied Brandon. "I'm Brandon. This is my friend Joe. Wanna play with us awhile?"
The Fann girls agreed. Soon everyone was playing around the house while the movers continued carrying box after box into the house. Everything seemed perfect.
In the backyard, Sally had drawn two parallel lines across the back patio, and T.J. had set up ten bowling pins at the far end. Now both stood at the other end.
"Watch this," said Sally as she grabbed a basketball and rolled it at the pins. "I was president of the school bowling league." The basketball knocked all ten pins to the ground.
"Not bad," said T.J. as he reset the pins. "But let me show you this." T.J. walked back to where Sally was standing, and gave her the thumbs-up sign.
Sally was rather shocked when she saw hedgehog quills jet out of T.J.'s back. What really got her, however, was when T.J. went into a Spin-Dash and scattered the pins all over the patio. Only one pin remained.
After Sally cleared the knocked-over pins away, T.J. charged up another Spin-Dash in an effort to knock over the one remaining pin. He didn't make it.
A huge net lowered and caught T.J. The net was attached to the hovercraft of none other than Dr. Ivo Robotnik, the fiend who was Sonic's worst enemy.
T.J. tried to use a Spin-Dash to break the net open, but to no avail. The net was made of steel fibers, and T.J. just couldn't cut it. Robotnik was very crafty indeed.
Then Robotnik leaned over the side of the hovercraft and spoke to T.J. "Ah, I have finally caught you..." Robotnik paused for effect. "Sonic the Hedgehog!"
This puzzled T.J. "What are you talking about? I'm not Sonic! I-" he said. "SILENCE!" replied Robotnik. "I saw your quills stick out of your kid disguise and that trademark Spin-Dash. What other proof do I need?"
Realizing that it was no use to argue, T.J. fell silent. "Okay," said Robotnik. "I have Sonic, but where are Knuckles and Tails?" Then his eyes fell on a grappling hook attached to a drainpipe.
Together, Kelly and Joe scaled the side of the house. "Wow, Joe," said Kelly, "I never expected to meet anyone as big fans of Sonic as my sisters and me."
"Same here," said Joe. Then they both turned their attention to climbing up a few feet more. While Kelly was doing this, she heard Joe yell. She stopped climbing and looked. He was gone!
Joe had joined T.J. in Robotnik's net. "But I tell you," Joe yelled, "I'm not..." T.J. cut him off. "It's no use, Joe. He wouldn't believe I wasn't Sonic either."
Now that he had "Knuckles," Robotnik looked at the air above the driveway, where Brandon and Theta were hovering side by side. "So a yellow light came out of nowhere and struck you?" Theta asked.
"Yea," replied Brandon. "Only it was more of an orange color. But you get the ide- AHHHHH!" This reply puzzled Theta, who at first didn't notice that Brandon had been kidnapped. You can imagine her surprise when she found out that she was talking to empty air!
The girls regrouped and looked up at Robotnik, now that the boys had been captured. Kelly tossed her grappling hook at Robotnik, but he wouldn't fall for the same trick twice. He shifted the hovercraft's position, and the hook fell and hit Sally on the head.
"Darn!" said Kelly as Sally rubbed her head. "That egghead is getting smarter! Not only did he use a steel net, but he also avoided my grappling hook!"
"I HEARD THAT!" yelled Robotnik, annoyed by this insult. "That's it. I'm leaving! Oh, and sorry for the headache, Sally." Robotnik fled before the girls got a chance to find out where he was going.
"This is a bad start to a friendship," said Theta. "Now we have no idea where the egghead is off to! What do we do now?" The girls enjoyed calling Robotnik "egghead."
I hate to end this chapter at such a cliffhanger, but I had to end it somewhere. As always, I appreciate your opinions, so show that you appreciate (or don't appreciate) my story by reviewing it. Thanks.
Disclaimer: See Chapter 1.
Author's note: Bet you didn't expect Chapter 2 so soon, huh? I'm actually very excited about continuing this story. Well, time to get things moving.
Reviewing the reviewing:
Review 1: Cinnamon w/ Daimond (user ID: 374883)
"Hey this is a great introduction...I hope you'll get some more out soon! I liked the first one and I'm sure I'll like this one just as much as the other one...I think that that's pretty interesting but, I have to go and eat dinner now...I'll boe on more later...:)"
Well, Cinnamon, you asked for more and you got more. That's what I like, support.
Review 2: sonicgirl12 (user ID: 362758)
"I KNOW this is gonna get good!"
How do you know? You're not psychic. (Just kidding, thanks.)
Chapter 2: New neighbors, new dilemmas
Sally was very excited. She and Theta and Kelly were getting new neighbors. As the moving van pulled up to the house, two men began unloading box after box from the van.
Meanwhile, three boys got out of the van and walked toward the fence that separated their property from the Fann property. They talked as they walked, and the girls couldn't help but overhear.
"So Brandon," one of the boys said, "are you excited about moving to a new house?" "Yes, Joe," another boy replied. "I bet I'll enjoy scenic Bodopolis. How about you, T.J.?"
Kelly gasped. T.J.? That was the name of the boy she had met aboard the cruise ship that one time. Immediately she used her grappling hook to get to the top of a nearby tree.
Theta started up her electronic propeller beanie and hovered to the branch Kelly was sitting on, with Sally holding Theta's leg. Together the girls looked at the boys as they sat down on a curb.
The tree was just high enough to allow Sally, Kelly and Theta to jump down to the other side of the fence, which they did. Then they walked over to the boys.
Kelly spoke first. "T.J.? Is that you? It's a surprise that you, of all people, would move next door to us. Who are your friends?" "Funny, I was about to ask you that," replied T.J.
"I'm Sally," said Sally, "and that's my sister Theta. Pleased to meet you." "Same here," replied Brandon. "I'm Brandon. This is my friend Joe. Wanna play with us awhile?"
The Fann girls agreed. Soon everyone was playing around the house while the movers continued carrying box after box into the house. Everything seemed perfect.
In the backyard, Sally had drawn two parallel lines across the back patio, and T.J. had set up ten bowling pins at the far end. Now both stood at the other end.
"Watch this," said Sally as she grabbed a basketball and rolled it at the pins. "I was president of the school bowling league." The basketball knocked all ten pins to the ground.
"Not bad," said T.J. as he reset the pins. "But let me show you this." T.J. walked back to where Sally was standing, and gave her the thumbs-up sign.
Sally was rather shocked when she saw hedgehog quills jet out of T.J.'s back. What really got her, however, was when T.J. went into a Spin-Dash and scattered the pins all over the patio. Only one pin remained.
After Sally cleared the knocked-over pins away, T.J. charged up another Spin-Dash in an effort to knock over the one remaining pin. He didn't make it.
A huge net lowered and caught T.J. The net was attached to the hovercraft of none other than Dr. Ivo Robotnik, the fiend who was Sonic's worst enemy.
T.J. tried to use a Spin-Dash to break the net open, but to no avail. The net was made of steel fibers, and T.J. just couldn't cut it. Robotnik was very crafty indeed.
Then Robotnik leaned over the side of the hovercraft and spoke to T.J. "Ah, I have finally caught you..." Robotnik paused for effect. "Sonic the Hedgehog!"
This puzzled T.J. "What are you talking about? I'm not Sonic! I-" he said. "SILENCE!" replied Robotnik. "I saw your quills stick out of your kid disguise and that trademark Spin-Dash. What other proof do I need?"
Realizing that it was no use to argue, T.J. fell silent. "Okay," said Robotnik. "I have Sonic, but where are Knuckles and Tails?" Then his eyes fell on a grappling hook attached to a drainpipe.
Together, Kelly and Joe scaled the side of the house. "Wow, Joe," said Kelly, "I never expected to meet anyone as big fans of Sonic as my sisters and me."
"Same here," said Joe. Then they both turned their attention to climbing up a few feet more. While Kelly was doing this, she heard Joe yell. She stopped climbing and looked. He was gone!
Joe had joined T.J. in Robotnik's net. "But I tell you," Joe yelled, "I'm not..." T.J. cut him off. "It's no use, Joe. He wouldn't believe I wasn't Sonic either."
Now that he had "Knuckles," Robotnik looked at the air above the driveway, where Brandon and Theta were hovering side by side. "So a yellow light came out of nowhere and struck you?" Theta asked.
"Yea," replied Brandon. "Only it was more of an orange color. But you get the ide- AHHHHH!" This reply puzzled Theta, who at first didn't notice that Brandon had been kidnapped. You can imagine her surprise when she found out that she was talking to empty air!
The girls regrouped and looked up at Robotnik, now that the boys had been captured. Kelly tossed her grappling hook at Robotnik, but he wouldn't fall for the same trick twice. He shifted the hovercraft's position, and the hook fell and hit Sally on the head.
"Darn!" said Kelly as Sally rubbed her head. "That egghead is getting smarter! Not only did he use a steel net, but he also avoided my grappling hook!"
"I HEARD THAT!" yelled Robotnik, annoyed by this insult. "That's it. I'm leaving! Oh, and sorry for the headache, Sally." Robotnik fled before the girls got a chance to find out where he was going.
"This is a bad start to a friendship," said Theta. "Now we have no idea where the egghead is off to! What do we do now?" The girls enjoyed calling Robotnik "egghead."
I hate to end this chapter at such a cliffhanger, but I had to end it somewhere. As always, I appreciate your opinions, so show that you appreciate (or don't appreciate) my story by reviewing it. Thanks.