The Fan(n) Girls II
Disclaimer: See Chapter 1.
Author's note: If you're wondering why you haven't heard from me in a while, it's because I was away on a vacation to Washington DC. Why hasn't TJSW submitted a review for this story so far? After all, he must know about this. Here's Chapter 3, fresh from the oven!
Reviewing the reviewing:
Review 1: Shadow's Girl12 (used to be sonicgirl12, user ID: 362758)
"You never know...
Suzy: *laughing* Eggman is such an idiot!"
Who's Suzy? I don't know any Suzy.
Review 2: The Story Girl (user ID: 358416)
"You know, if you look up 'idiot' in the dictionary, you'll find Eggman's picture. (j/k)
Anyway, this is just as good as the first one, and I hope you update soon."
That's odd, I didn't see it there. And I had to look up "idiot" in the dictionary when I was asked for a description of my best friend. (Just kidding.)
Review 3: CW Cyrix (user ID: 383052)
"I'm not even going to ask how Dr. Robotnik mistakened the Sonic Warriors for the original Sonic characters... Good story though so far."
Obviously you never read the story that introduced the Sonic Warriors. Oh, and that's "mistook."
Chapter 3: The search
As you may recall: The Sonic Warriors had just moved in next door to the Fann Girls, and their relationship was off to a rough start. Dr. Robotnik had kidnapped T.J., Joe and Brandon, assuming that they were Sonic, Knuckles and Tails, and got away. Now what?
Sally, Theta and Kelly were in T.J.'s room. "Well, Theta," said Kelly, "Dr. Robotnik has made off with our new friends, and we have no idea where he's fled to."
"That's not entirely true," replied Theta. "Remember last time something like this happened? If I remember correctly, Robotnik's base was in a jungle. And if any of Robotnik's bases was in a jungle, it was the one in..."
"THE MYSTIC RUINS!" all three gasped in unison. Theta glanced over at the Segaª Dreamcast plugged into a large screen TV. Then she looked at T.J.'s old block set, then a chair in front of a dresser, then a desk fan on top of the dresser.
Sally noticed a gleam in Theta's eyes. "17.4 seconds," said Kelly, stopping her stopwatch. "That's longer than usual. She must have a complex plan."
Without hesitation, Theta whispered in Kelly's ear, then Sally's. Kelly walked over to fetch the block set while Sally put Sonic Adventure in the Dreamcast and turned it on.
Then Kelly built a block ramp in front of the large-screen TV, which displayed Sonic jumping into the trolley car that led to the jungle in the Mystic Ruins.
When everything was ready, Sally placed her skateboard in front of the chair, and kneeled in front of it, facing the block ramp. Theta and Kelly held the ramp still.
Taking a deep breath, Sally charged up speed in her skateboard, then blasted forward as if jet-propelled. She zoomed up the block ramp and right through the TV screen, almost knocking Sonic off the cliff.
Kelly then stood on the chair while Theta turned on the desk fan. Jumping up and opening her hang glider, Kelly caught the fan's wind and was thrusted forward into the TV screen to join Sally.
Now Theta turned on her propeller beanie and flew into the TV screen to join the other two. Sally and Kelly had just finished explaining the whole thing to Sonic.
Sonic and Sally jumped down the cliff to the jungle trail. Kelly opened her hang glider and caught a breeze toward the base. Theta turned on her beanie and flew to the other side.
It was then that Sally noticed a note on the floor. She picked it up and tried to read it. "This is in some sort of foreign language or something," she said after a moment. "It's all Greek to me."
"Greek?" said Theta, taking the note. "I don't think this is Greek. This must be the ancient language of the echidna that few people know. Joe must've wrote this."
Theta handed the note to Kelly. "Wait a second," said Kelly. "This looks like plain English to me. That must be because I like Knuckles so much."
"Enough stalling," said Sonic. "What does it say?" Kelly slowly read it. "Dear Kelly, I am writing this to you because I'm sure you can decipher it."
Kelly took a deep breath and continued. "The bridge up ahead leads to Robotnik's base. He has taken us to the prison section. Be careful, T.J. heard Robotnik mention something about Sally meeting her match. Joe."
Well now, looks as if the girls are making good time. But what awaits them in the base? We'll just have to wait and see. As always, I appreciate your opinions, so show your opinions by reviewing. Thanks.
A bit of Sonic trivia: I forgot to add this section in Chapter 2, so I'll supply two bits of trivia here. Are you ready?
Perhaps everyone's favorite bonus round is the one in the original Genesis version of Sonic the Hedgehog. It featured gigantic rotating mazes which could be a little disorienting at times, but if you could hold your senses for enough time to reach the Chaos Emerald at the end, it was yours. What happened when you collected them all? I won't spoil it for those of you who haven't seen it yet.
You may never believe this, but Sonic was actually based on Mickey Mouse.
Disclaimer: See Chapter 1.
Author's note: If you're wondering why you haven't heard from me in a while, it's because I was away on a vacation to Washington DC. Why hasn't TJSW submitted a review for this story so far? After all, he must know about this. Here's Chapter 3, fresh from the oven!
Reviewing the reviewing:
Review 1: Shadow's Girl12 (used to be sonicgirl12, user ID: 362758)
"You never know...
Suzy: *laughing* Eggman is such an idiot!"
Who's Suzy? I don't know any Suzy.
Review 2: The Story Girl (user ID: 358416)
"You know, if you look up 'idiot' in the dictionary, you'll find Eggman's picture. (j/k)
Anyway, this is just as good as the first one, and I hope you update soon."
That's odd, I didn't see it there. And I had to look up "idiot" in the dictionary when I was asked for a description of my best friend. (Just kidding.)
Review 3: CW Cyrix (user ID: 383052)
"I'm not even going to ask how Dr. Robotnik mistakened the Sonic Warriors for the original Sonic characters... Good story though so far."
Obviously you never read the story that introduced the Sonic Warriors. Oh, and that's "mistook."
Chapter 3: The search
As you may recall: The Sonic Warriors had just moved in next door to the Fann Girls, and their relationship was off to a rough start. Dr. Robotnik had kidnapped T.J., Joe and Brandon, assuming that they were Sonic, Knuckles and Tails, and got away. Now what?
Sally, Theta and Kelly were in T.J.'s room. "Well, Theta," said Kelly, "Dr. Robotnik has made off with our new friends, and we have no idea where he's fled to."
"That's not entirely true," replied Theta. "Remember last time something like this happened? If I remember correctly, Robotnik's base was in a jungle. And if any of Robotnik's bases was in a jungle, it was the one in..."
"THE MYSTIC RUINS!" all three gasped in unison. Theta glanced over at the Segaª Dreamcast plugged into a large screen TV. Then she looked at T.J.'s old block set, then a chair in front of a dresser, then a desk fan on top of the dresser.
Sally noticed a gleam in Theta's eyes. "17.4 seconds," said Kelly, stopping her stopwatch. "That's longer than usual. She must have a complex plan."
Without hesitation, Theta whispered in Kelly's ear, then Sally's. Kelly walked over to fetch the block set while Sally put Sonic Adventure in the Dreamcast and turned it on.
Then Kelly built a block ramp in front of the large-screen TV, which displayed Sonic jumping into the trolley car that led to the jungle in the Mystic Ruins.
When everything was ready, Sally placed her skateboard in front of the chair, and kneeled in front of it, facing the block ramp. Theta and Kelly held the ramp still.
Taking a deep breath, Sally charged up speed in her skateboard, then blasted forward as if jet-propelled. She zoomed up the block ramp and right through the TV screen, almost knocking Sonic off the cliff.
Kelly then stood on the chair while Theta turned on the desk fan. Jumping up and opening her hang glider, Kelly caught the fan's wind and was thrusted forward into the TV screen to join Sally.
Now Theta turned on her propeller beanie and flew into the TV screen to join the other two. Sally and Kelly had just finished explaining the whole thing to Sonic.
Sonic and Sally jumped down the cliff to the jungle trail. Kelly opened her hang glider and caught a breeze toward the base. Theta turned on her beanie and flew to the other side.
It was then that Sally noticed a note on the floor. She picked it up and tried to read it. "This is in some sort of foreign language or something," she said after a moment. "It's all Greek to me."
"Greek?" said Theta, taking the note. "I don't think this is Greek. This must be the ancient language of the echidna that few people know. Joe must've wrote this."
Theta handed the note to Kelly. "Wait a second," said Kelly. "This looks like plain English to me. That must be because I like Knuckles so much."
"Enough stalling," said Sonic. "What does it say?" Kelly slowly read it. "Dear Kelly, I am writing this to you because I'm sure you can decipher it."
Kelly took a deep breath and continued. "The bridge up ahead leads to Robotnik's base. He has taken us to the prison section. Be careful, T.J. heard Robotnik mention something about Sally meeting her match. Joe."
Well now, looks as if the girls are making good time. But what awaits them in the base? We'll just have to wait and see. As always, I appreciate your opinions, so show your opinions by reviewing. Thanks.
A bit of Sonic trivia: I forgot to add this section in Chapter 2, so I'll supply two bits of trivia here. Are you ready?
Perhaps everyone's favorite bonus round is the one in the original Genesis version of Sonic the Hedgehog. It featured gigantic rotating mazes which could be a little disorienting at times, but if you could hold your senses for enough time to reach the Chaos Emerald at the end, it was yours. What happened when you collected them all? I won't spoil it for those of you who haven't seen it yet.
You may never believe this, but Sonic was actually based on Mickey Mouse.