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Firedraygon97: It's just part of the fic, I have no idea what the outcome of the fight was. I just wanted it to sound recent. I finished reading the latest chapter, that part is changed now.
Here is the next chapter, enjoy!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or any of it's characters.
Fangs of life
Chappie 2 : Capture
At the entrance gates of the Konoha village stood two tall figures, unfazed by the raging storm. One armed with a large, chakra sucking kanata* and the other, endowed with the Sharingan, a deadly bloodline.
The shorter, raven haired boy's red eyes, scanned his surroundings. "No one's outside." He muttered, "this storm must too much for the little weaklings to handle."
"I don't blame them. I would be inside, it's too cold and wet. Itachi, are you sure you know where the brat lives?" Protested his teammate, Kisame. " I don't think this kid is worth taking, nine tails or not. Let's cut him up." He licked his lips, and grinned at the thought of killing someone. How he loved chopping off limbs with his sword.
"… Don't forget our orders Kisame. I'm sure you don't want the higher ups to punish you again for killing your target." Itachi murmured. "Come, his house is this way. Remember, be quiet. If we kidnap him quickly and silently, the shinobies won't be after us until they figure out what's happened to him."
"Yeah, yeah. I know…"
With that, the two men disappeared soundlessly into the darkness of an alley.
Naruto lay sprawled out on the floor. He let out a frustrated sigh. He had finished his daily training, and now his game of staring at the ceiling and naming the animals he could see had lost it's thrill. The feeling of boredom was creeping up on him once again. Closing his eyes, he relaxed his body. Again the image of Sasuke appeared before his eyes. Naruto let out a low growl of irritation and shook his head, yet the image remained. He gave up and let the train of thought continue.
Sasuke… He had unintentionally stolen that boy's first kiss. At the time, Naruto had been so involved in their rivalry that he had not even savored that moment their lips had met. But now Naruto wondered what it would have tasted like. Sweet, like honey? Or foul, like poison? He doubted it. Perhaps during the next training session when Sasuke pounced on him, he would steal another kiss. Naruto could see it already, he was sure Sasuke would be surprised at first but then maybe he wouldn't be so frigid. Perhaps he would return the kiss or even explore Naruto's body with his hands. Being good at everything else, Sasuke was sure to have a natural talent for making out as well. Naruto shivered, he liked that thought a lot. If they got really close, they could have sleepovers, bring some whipped cream and strawberries. Then they could…
Bang! Bang! Bang!
A heavy knocking came from the door. Naruto cursed under his breath as he shot up into a sitting position. Who the hell would be stupid enough to come over to his house in this storm?! He decided not to answer it, whoever was out there could wait until this storm was over. It was what they deserved for ruining his daydreams. The incessant knocking continued for a few minutes and then ceased.
"Finally!" Naruto muttered. He pictured the person returning to their home, all wet and now dispirited. He cackled, his mood improving slightly. He got up and made his way to the kitchen
"Don't you answer your door?"
Naruto froze, that voice... he had heard it before. Before he could react, someone dealt a heavy blow to his back. It sent him crashing into his kitchen counter. Pain seared through his body. He turned around to see who the assailant was. Itachi stood in the doorway.
"You…" Naruto groaned. "what are you doing here?"
Itachi didn't answer. Naruto didn't care, he knew what they wanted. Regaining his composure, Naruto straightened up and prepared to fight Sasuke's older brother.
'This is it,' Naruto thought to himself, 'If I don't defeat him, then I'm screwed.' He began to build up his chakra as Itachi coolly watched him. He charged at Itachi, praying that he could at least hit him hard enough so that Itachi would be phased, and he could escape. However Itachi knocked the genin away with one hand, sending him crashing into the wall. He walked over to the dazed Naruto and proceeded to beat him. He broke ribs, bones and bruised flesh while completely ignoring Naruto's screams of pain. Naruto desperately tried to fight back but with every punch he threw, he was rewarded with ten times more blows. Soon, his body grew weary and weak. He faded into the darkness of unconsciousness. Itachi stopped, he decided he that he had done enough damage for now. He lifted the limp body and carried him to the living room, ignoring the blood that trickled from Naruto's mouth and nose onto Itachi's clothes.
"And my work is excessive?" Kisame said when Itachi brought Naruto outside.
"… Our assignment is done, let's go."
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*Terms used:
Katana - sword
Sorry for being so evil to Naruto!
Next chapter should be up in a few days. No previews this time Heh heh.
Firedraygon97: It's just part of the fic, I have no idea what the outcome of the fight was. I just wanted it to sound recent. I finished reading the latest chapter, that part is changed now.
Here is the next chapter, enjoy!
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or any of it's characters.
Fangs of life
Chappie 2 : Capture
At the entrance gates of the Konoha village stood two tall figures, unfazed by the raging storm. One armed with a large, chakra sucking kanata* and the other, endowed with the Sharingan, a deadly bloodline.
The shorter, raven haired boy's red eyes, scanned his surroundings. "No one's outside." He muttered, "this storm must too much for the little weaklings to handle."
"I don't blame them. I would be inside, it's too cold and wet. Itachi, are you sure you know where the brat lives?" Protested his teammate, Kisame. " I don't think this kid is worth taking, nine tails or not. Let's cut him up." He licked his lips, and grinned at the thought of killing someone. How he loved chopping off limbs with his sword.
"… Don't forget our orders Kisame. I'm sure you don't want the higher ups to punish you again for killing your target." Itachi murmured. "Come, his house is this way. Remember, be quiet. If we kidnap him quickly and silently, the shinobies won't be after us until they figure out what's happened to him."
"Yeah, yeah. I know…"
With that, the two men disappeared soundlessly into the darkness of an alley.
Naruto lay sprawled out on the floor. He let out a frustrated sigh. He had finished his daily training, and now his game of staring at the ceiling and naming the animals he could see had lost it's thrill. The feeling of boredom was creeping up on him once again. Closing his eyes, he relaxed his body. Again the image of Sasuke appeared before his eyes. Naruto let out a low growl of irritation and shook his head, yet the image remained. He gave up and let the train of thought continue.
Sasuke… He had unintentionally stolen that boy's first kiss. At the time, Naruto had been so involved in their rivalry that he had not even savored that moment their lips had met. But now Naruto wondered what it would have tasted like. Sweet, like honey? Or foul, like poison? He doubted it. Perhaps during the next training session when Sasuke pounced on him, he would steal another kiss. Naruto could see it already, he was sure Sasuke would be surprised at first but then maybe he wouldn't be so frigid. Perhaps he would return the kiss or even explore Naruto's body with his hands. Being good at everything else, Sasuke was sure to have a natural talent for making out as well. Naruto shivered, he liked that thought a lot. If they got really close, they could have sleepovers, bring some whipped cream and strawberries. Then they could…
Bang! Bang! Bang!
A heavy knocking came from the door. Naruto cursed under his breath as he shot up into a sitting position. Who the hell would be stupid enough to come over to his house in this storm?! He decided not to answer it, whoever was out there could wait until this storm was over. It was what they deserved for ruining his daydreams. The incessant knocking continued for a few minutes and then ceased.
"Finally!" Naruto muttered. He pictured the person returning to their home, all wet and now dispirited. He cackled, his mood improving slightly. He got up and made his way to the kitchen
"Don't you answer your door?"
Naruto froze, that voice... he had heard it before. Before he could react, someone dealt a heavy blow to his back. It sent him crashing into his kitchen counter. Pain seared through his body. He turned around to see who the assailant was. Itachi stood in the doorway.
"You…" Naruto groaned. "what are you doing here?"
Itachi didn't answer. Naruto didn't care, he knew what they wanted. Regaining his composure, Naruto straightened up and prepared to fight Sasuke's older brother.
'This is it,' Naruto thought to himself, 'If I don't defeat him, then I'm screwed.' He began to build up his chakra as Itachi coolly watched him. He charged at Itachi, praying that he could at least hit him hard enough so that Itachi would be phased, and he could escape. However Itachi knocked the genin away with one hand, sending him crashing into the wall. He walked over to the dazed Naruto and proceeded to beat him. He broke ribs, bones and bruised flesh while completely ignoring Naruto's screams of pain. Naruto desperately tried to fight back but with every punch he threw, he was rewarded with ten times more blows. Soon, his body grew weary and weak. He faded into the darkness of unconsciousness. Itachi stopped, he decided he that he had done enough damage for now. He lifted the limp body and carried him to the living room, ignoring the blood that trickled from Naruto's mouth and nose onto Itachi's clothes.
"And my work is excessive?" Kisame said when Itachi brought Naruto outside.
"… Our assignment is done, let's go."
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*Terms used:
Katana - sword
Sorry for being so evil to Naruto!
Next chapter should be up in a few days. No previews this time Heh heh.