Disclaimer: This is my first story so feel free to give me criticism. No I do not own DBZ but I would like to. Please do not mind spelling errors because I can't spell if my life depended on it. Now on with the story.
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Things to know:
"…"=talking
(a/n)=a note from the author(me)
'…'=thinking
*…*=talking through a bond
/…/=action
[…]=time change
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Field Trip to CC
It all started one morning. Gohan was sleeping peacefully until one hyper active chibi came into his room.
/Goten jumps on Gohan's stomach while yelling/ "Big brother, big brother it's time to get up. Mommy said to get up or you won't get breakfast and you'll be late for school." Goten yelled. Yup it was a normal day in the Son household.
[After Breakfast]
"Bye Mom, bye Goten" yelled Gohan. /transforms into Sayaman and spots Videl/ 'Oh great why me why today. Man now I'm really going to be late for school. Why me, why today?! No she spotted me. I have a feeling that today is going to be a really bad day.'
'Today is the day that I'll unmask Sayadork. It's so annoying how he always acts like I can't do anything on my own. Well I did just fine before he came along. Today I'll also figure out what Son, Gohan is hiding.' Videl
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END Chapter 1
Please review. Tell me how the story is so far.
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Things to know:
"…"=talking
(a/n)=a note from the author(me)
'…'=thinking
*…*=talking through a bond
/…/=action
[…]=time change
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Field Trip to CC
It all started one morning. Gohan was sleeping peacefully until one hyper active chibi came into his room.
/Goten jumps on Gohan's stomach while yelling/ "Big brother, big brother it's time to get up. Mommy said to get up or you won't get breakfast and you'll be late for school." Goten yelled. Yup it was a normal day in the Son household.
[After Breakfast]
"Bye Mom, bye Goten" yelled Gohan. /transforms into Sayaman and spots Videl/ 'Oh great why me why today. Man now I'm really going to be late for school. Why me, why today?! No she spotted me. I have a feeling that today is going to be a really bad day.'
'Today is the day that I'll unmask Sayadork. It's so annoying how he always acts like I can't do anything on my own. Well I did just fine before he came along. Today I'll also figure out what Son, Gohan is hiding.' Videl
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END Chapter 1
Please review. Tell me how the story is so far.