present day
Lincoln Loud
A young boy around twelve years of age. Appearance wise he has buck teeth, Green eyes, white hair and freckles. He is wearing an orange hoodie with a white polo underneath, blue jeans and red shoes with white stripes.
Zoom in on great lakes city and two blazing specks of light dash all over the place as one shoots lasers at the other. We then see an enemy aircraft flying throughout while it's chasing Lincoln loud, the only boy in the loud house, brother to ten chaotic sister, nicknamed sonic or as he calls himself, the white blur, who is running from the pursuer. We see a man, wearing a red flight suit and flight goggles, in his craft and Lincoln as he runs. The world seemingly freezes after an explosion which Lincoln barely missing it.
"So, I know what you're thinking. Why is an incredibly handsome guy like me being chased by a madman with a mustache from the Civil War?" Lincoln narrates.
The world unfreezes and Sonic continues running and dodging laser blasts from the ship.
He continues "Well, to be honest, it feels like I've been running my whole life. Is this too much? Am I going too fast? It's kind of what I do. You know what? Let's back up."
(a time reverse effect)
10 years ago
we see various shots of a younger Lincoln zipping through the terrain and land of his island. Present Lincoln then speaks "This is the island where I'm from. It had everything. Sandy beaches, cascading waterfalls, public access to loop-de-loops. And I never had to catch a school bus because I could run across the entire island in less than two seconds. Also, there was no school. I know, pretty sweet island, right?"
young Lincoln runs across a ramp and shoots up into the air and cheers "Yeah!", he then lands back on the ground and continues zipping through the island.
He starts "I was born with extraordinary powers and was told to keep them secret." He then continues "And like any kid, I did the exact opposite."
He proceeds to run up some bridges to a small house. He curls into a ball, rolls into the house, jumps up, and playfully bumps Longclaw while she is sleeping, causing her to wake up.
Longclaw
An anthropomorphic owl who looks young and has gray and brown feathers.
Lincoln proceeds to explain "That's Longclaw. She took care of me." His younger doppelganger lands on the ground, now out of ball form, and he is laughing happily. He continues "She was basically Obi-Wan Kenobi, If Obi-Wan Kenobi had a beak and ate mice."
She scolds the young sonic "Lincoln, someone could have seen you.". He cockily replies "No one saw me. I'm too fast! And, I wanted to bring you this.". He proceeds to pull out a flower he picked from the outside, which makes Longclaw happy. However, Longclaw notices a tribe of echidnas in the trees, aiming their weapons at the duo. She then shuts the door and grabs the young child in hopes of protecting him while yelling "Get down!". The echidnas fire their arrows from their bows and they hit almost every corner of Longclaw's house, with one arrow breaking the window, barely missing Longclaw, and passing through Sonic's flower, pinning it to the wood floor.
Present Lincoln "Turns out, with great power comes great power-hungry bad guys. And I led them right to us."
The echidnas proceed to climb through the windows and prepare to attack, but Longclaw and Lincoln escape through the back window as the echidnas continue firing arrows at them. Eventually, one of them fires his arrow and it strikes Longclaw, knocking her and the young boy out of the sky and sending them plummeting to the ground. A wounded Longclaw gets up and puts a very concerned Lincoln on his feet and he looks up at her.
Longclaw starts speaking "Listen carefully, Lincoln. You have a power unlike anything I have ever seen. And that means someone will always want it. The only way to stay safe is to stay hidden." Longclaw takes a ring from her satchel and tosses it, which opens a portal to a forest on another planet at night. She continues "This world is on the far side of the universe. You should be safe there."
The young boy says, in fear "I don't want to go without you!"
She replies "You must." As she hands the boy her satchel of Rings. "These Rings will be your most important possession." she gasps as she hears the echidna tribe getting closer, then she looks back down at Lincoln. "If you're ever discovered, use one." Gently pushes him closer to the portal with her wing. "Never stop running. Now, go!"
He runs through the portal and looks back, horrified, as his care taker prepares for attack.
He can only yell her name before he starts running back, Longclaw looks back at Lincoln one last time as the echidnas get even closer.
Longclaw "Goodbye, Lincoln."
He yells "No!" Before He can get back to his parental figure, the portal disappears. He screams "No!" Hoping she will be okay.
He now realizes that he is by himself and must do what she had instructed him to do. The young ashen haired kid just lets a few tears fall.
To be continued?