This is the 1st chapter and the rebooted version. I'm planning to finish what the writer, Master Mister B, has started.
Listen, the writer is maybe passed away, but his story is just unfinished, that's all. And since no one else is going to get up there and rewrite the story and finish what he started, I'm going to. But I must warn you, I'm planning to make some adjustments of Mario Star. The reason is because I don't like him being dramatic much or anything like that which I might be able to fix that.
However, his traits are kept as a jack-of-all-trades, but he'll be an martial artist. Also, he'll be a no crossover character, like Master Mister P told you all years ago.
My version of him is a blend between Cole from Ninjago and Tommy from Power Rangers. And yeah, his cutie mark is kept.
Also, I'm planning to add a story about a human boy had a dying wish to have a better life which he'll be turned into a pony, unknowingly.
So, I'm no troll or a brony, just a run-of-the-mill fanfiction writer who just doing this for fun. Also, I respect Master Mister B for his writing and yes, I've read it. Despite that, he didn't get the chance to finish it and I'll be sure to finish it.
So from now on, there will be no cussing like sailors on the reviews or non-construction reviews. If I ever see it, it'll be reported and removed. So, be nice if you want to post a review.
Now with that out of the way, I don't own the series of MLP: Friendship is Magic or the someone's OC.
And before that, I would like to put a song. This is song is called 'You Haven't Seen the Last of Me', sang by Cher. This song is a soundtrack of the movie 'Burlesque' and for the people who gave up are needed to get back up on their feet and keep on trying.
You Haven't Seen the Last of Me-by Cher
...Feeling broken
Barely holding on
But there's something so strong
Somewhere inside me
And I am down but I get up again
Don't count me out just yet
...I've been brought down to my knees
And I've been pushed way past the point of breaking
But I can take it
I'll be back
Back on my feet
This is far from over
You haven't seen the last of me
You haven't seen the last of me
...They can say that
I won't stay around
But I'm gonna stand my ground
You're not gonna stop me
You don't know me
You don't know who I am
Don't count me out so fast
...I've been brought down to my knees
And I've been pushed way past the point of breaking
But I can take it
I'll be back
Back on my feet
This is far from over
You haven't seen the last of me
...There will be no fade out
This is not the end
I'm down now
But I'll be standing tall again
Times are hard but
I was built tough
I'm gonna show you all what I'm made of
...I've been brought down to my knees
And I've been pushed way past the point of breaking
But I can take it
I'll be back
Back on my feet
This is far from over
I am far from over
You haven't seen the last of me
...No no
I'm not going nowhere
I'm staying right here
Oh no
You won't see me begging
I'm not taking my bow
Can't stop me
It's not the end
You haven't seen the last of me
No no
You haven't seen the last of me
You haven't seen the last of me
Mario's Prologue
Many of the histories were reflected on Equestria, back to the fall of Nightmare Moon, because one that is engraved in all their minds: Elements of Harmony.
Every pony knew of the six most powerful elements: Kindness, Loyalty, Generosity, Honesty, Laughter, and Magic. But what ponies didn't know that history is clouded over one of the most important factor of all: The Seventh Element.
How would this truth be known? What the Seventh Element remains a mystery.
Also, I was there...I was there where the story begins...My story...
My name is Mario Star. I was being found by Princess Celestia from the burned and collapsed building at Sire's Hollow. Apparently, I survived because of the magical surge that saved me. Normally, unicorns have magical surges whenever the stress were high and goes out of control.
And yes, she took me in and raise me as her own. Even though, I never knew who my real parents are or what they like.
I've got a pale peach colored fur with orange mane and tail with brown eyes. While I am a colt and during my days as a foal, I was very small. It made me very shy when I was growing up under Princess Celestia's care, but I've learned to overcome my insecurities and shyness through martial arts by my teacher, Wu, and learned the basics of magic by my Princess Celestia and Princess Cadence. During my early days as a foal, I learned the basics of martial arts and magic since it's very important. However, despite living in Canterlot, I traveled with my teacher for training in between meditation, strength, stamina, endurance, and reflex. Sometimes I spend some time with either Princess Celestia or Princess Cadence for breaks in training. But as time went by, I know there's something missing in my heart and I want to find answers to whom I related to.
As I grew, my muscles, my magic, and my martial arts abilities evolved me. I spend years mastering martial arts from Wu, and magic from Princess Celestia and Princess Cadence, but the truth is I was a natural runner. At first, I tested on running which I was surprised that I'm really fast, but didn't get a chance to slow down which that's something I need to practice and try to get use to the speed. However, it suddenly drew a lot of attention which it's unexpected, mostly of the stuck-up elites who're trying to look down on me, but I didn't let it get to me despite being bullied because I know how to bite back and learn how to stood my ground. One day, I've got enrolled by the academy for the gifted unicorns. Passing the entrance exams is one thing, but making friends is another story and it's never easy.
Despite all of that, I was able to learn many skills and abilities during my time in Canterlot and with my teacher which I've learned that having a cutie mark will come in time, but I'm in no rush for having it because I still have time to think what my talents are.
Princess Celestia and Princess Cadence always watches me trained in martial arts and try to learn new things, they knew that I'm a special pony. I was at the top of the class and played in sports and junior athletes. I'm just no better than myself because...I was alone and all I want was a friend to whom I can talk to. Not to go the wrong way, but Wu is my teacher and the only friend I had, but he was more than that, he was like a father-figure to me. A some pony I look up to.
After my training was over, I went to the room to find out what's going on. And there she was, a most beautiful unicorn I have ever seen which it made my eyes wide and my jaws dropped.
I remembered it very well: Her mane and tail were such a lovely shade of between dark sapphire blue with moderate purple and brilliant raspberry streaks, her pale light grayish mulberry fur coat, and those eyes...Those violet eyes. The teachers introduces the filly named Twilight Sparkle, a fitting name for her. I stared at her, went goo-goo eyes like she's the apple of my eye...Wait, did I say that? Sorry.
Anyway moving on, I was watching her when the exam begins. She was trying to hatch a dragon egg which it's not an easy task. She was trying so hard to get the dragon egg hatched with different methods, but for some reason her magic refuses to glow. She seem so sad, I couldn't help but feel sorry for her since she did everything she can to get it hatched.
Suddenly, just as when she was about to walk away, there was an explosion...like thunder strikes the ground. There was a massive rainbow shook the entire Equestria. To make it worse, Twilight's magic is going crazy, blasting everything on sight. I saw her parents turned into plants, the egg hatched releasing the baby dragon, but only to make it grow into 50 feet. It was a complete mayhem, I barely made it unscathed.
Thanks to Wu's training, I used my chi and magic to protect myself from her magic and not to cause any further harm. I was able to block them with my chi and conjure shield big enough to deflect the magic blasts before rushing to Twilight and encasing her with my own mango orange magical aura. I felt a tap on my shoulder, and I quickly turned to me Princess Celestia in her calm aura. Twilight finally calms down when she saw her, her eyes was normal, and everything turns back to normal when I release her.
Rather than a lecture, she offers Twilight and me to serve her as a proteges of the school. And of course, Twilight accepts it wholeheartedly and joy, but I politely decline because it's something that I have to find out what my goal is and to find out who are my real family. Princess Celestia was surprised about it and taken aback for what I have told her.
But that didn't stop her when she told me and Twilight that we both got a cutie mark. Hers was a magical pink star, while my cutie mark is a golden star with either a heart or an apple with a gold ribbon underneath it, giving a majestic appearance which, it got me surprised. But to be honest, I never saw myself as Princess Celestia's student nor destined for great things. But she told me her offer still stands which it got me a lot to think about. If I accept, then it would mean that I would leave behind for what I have learned from Wu, but if I decline, then it would mean that I won't get a chance to have a new friend.
I went to my teacher and told him I've got accepted from Princess Celestia and it put me into a dilemma. He understands that it's not easy to give up on something I like, but he told me I should learn more from school of the gifted unicorns. However, he made me a promise that I have to come here after school for further training in martial arts, I gladly accept.
Years went by, Twilight and I grew a rift since our friendship have grown short due to my focus on martial arts and magic while she focused on books. And to be honest, Twilight is a bookworm, but the only flaw she had was that she never gets to make new friends and she mostly focus on studies. At first, we made some friends during class: like Minuette, Twinkleshine, Lyra Heartstrings, and Moon Dancer. The two seem to enjoy studying together while the rest of group tried to take my physical training to the next level, a little bit extreme. I continued to improve my training in martial arts and magic, but my physical prowess grows. I was able to defend myself against the bullies because they thought they can take me down, but I know enough that even fighting will do more harm than good. So, I prove my point in self-defense and remember my lessons from my teacher.
I remembered the time when Minuette and Twinkleshine encouraged me to the school track team competition. Of course, I was against it because it wouldn't be fair for the other teams despite my speed and me being a unicorn. Much to their protest, the coach was reluctant to put me on the team but did let me try out. Thanks to my training, I was able to catch with the other runners for the trails, but as I continued to run, my speed and determination continued to grow. By the time the final sprint came, I literally pulled away from the competition at twice the top speed. The coach was impressed, and I earned my spot for the team.
Then my first race came and I blew away the competition by finishing 25 seconds ahead of the other runners. Of course, I was disqualified for cheating simply because I was a unicorn and accused of using a speed spell, which it wasn't true. Princess Celestia was about to have the race redone, this time, using a spell that disables magic. I actually use my natural ability to run and won the race by the same 25 seconds run, and earned a first prize.
Apparently, it was only one time thing and give the other racers some advice to eat their green vegetables and work hard, just to give them motivation. I didn't enter any of the race competition nor any other competitions at all because it felt like I was showing off and not given them a chance to win. So, I kept it to myself and keep myself in shape while in training with my teacher. He even knew something was troubling me and tell me that showing off is not the same as do what I like to do. I know he tried to cheer me up, but I still feel there's something missing inside my heart.
Years went by, I went to Ponyville with Filthy Rich and his fiancée, Spoiled Milk, the same mare I was being bullied back at the day. He even explains to me about his finances and his business with the Apples family which it led me surprised. When I came here first, I saw the Apples named Applejack and Big Macintosh, or Big Mac for short.
Applejack is few years younger than me. She's a teen mare with pale light grayish olive mane and tail which her mane is styled in pigtails in red ribbons, brilliant gamboge fur coat, and moderate sap green eyes. Her cutie mark was three red apples.
Big Mac is only a year older than me and let me tell you, he's got the same built like me. His mane and tail were brilliant orange, his fur coat was brilliant amaranth, and his eyes were the same color as Applejacks. His cutie mark was a big green apple slice in half.
Even though, Filthy Rich is trying to negotiate with the two about the apple cider which Big Mac told him about it, but Applejack made a deal. Of course, it would lead her into a lot of trouble if she didn't tell her family about the deal. So, I set out to the town hall and ask the mayor of this town about my records when I told her my name. She even led me to the record hall and manage to find a file, I even look through it and it got me stunned that I'm related to Apple family and my parents names were Bright Mac and Buttercup.
After all these years, I'm related to the Apple family that I never knew and Princess Celestia didn't even tell me. So, I was with Filthy Rich and Spoiled Milk to get to a place called 'Sweet Apple Acres', a farm where the Apples tend the apple field...no pun intended...they explain to me that Granny Smith was ill, led to my dismay, but I'm starting to get suspicious about it. I explain to them of what I found out at the Town Hall in Ponyville, told them that I'm related to the Apple family which Filthy Rich and Spoiled Milk were stunned. They thought I was related to Princess Celestia, but told them she found me at the collapsed building at Sire's Hollow.
After the explanation, we went to Sweet Apple Acres to pay a visit with Granny Smith and her family, but Big Mac is talking. I was taking a look around at the farm, hoping that I can get some answers if I'm really related to them or not which I was able to find Granny Smith, grumbled something about Applejack, not that I blame her.
Granny Smith is an elder pony. She had a light gray between mane and tail, tied into a bun, her fur coat is light lime green, and her eyes light brilliant orange. Her cutie mark was apple pie.
Soon as I get her, I offered her some help because I'm being generous and how to respect their elders is important. She accepted my help and told me about the blight sprayer at the orchard, but she also told me the cider season won't happen due to the blights which his cider business have went down the drain. I even told her may name after finished helping her, it led her in a deep state of shock. I was worried about her, but she even got me to look at her closely in the eyes. It left me stunned when she told me that I'm the second son of Bright Mac and Buttercup, meaning that Granny Smith is my grandmother and both Applejack and Big Mac were my siblings. However, she wanted me to tell her the truth which I did, told her that I was born in Sire's Hollow and even told her I was found by Princess Celestia from the collapsed building.
After I give her an explanation, Granny Smith was in a breakdown, telling me that I was a lot like Buttercup. She even told me what happen to my parents before my time and after Big Mac was born. My parents left Ponyville and moved to Sire's Hollow, where I was born, but went wrong when the building collapses after it got caught by fire. They were able to get Big Mac, but left me behind. Buttercup tried to go back and rescue me from the building. The reason why she didn't get back in time is because of Princess Celestia rescued me. Now I found the answer to whom I related to, but little did we know that Applejack heard everything and ran up to Granny Smith, wanted to know why she was kept in the dark.
The only reason why she was kept in secret is because Buttercup was devastated, thought that I was lost. After they got back at Sweet Apple Acres, Buttercup couldn't even talk to anypony for weeks. She even made a birthday cake for me in my honor, weeps down after singing. Bright Mac made Big Mac promise not to mention my name, meaning that they kept it a secret from Applejack. However, every time my name was mentioned, Buttercup would breakdown and cry for hours. Applejack begins to understand why, but she was upset and hurt for not being told about her brother.
After I left the Sweet Apple Acres, I just need some time alone at the park since I have a lot to think. Even after being kept hidden from Canterlot for a long time, trained in martial arts and magic, being educated from the school for the gifted unicorns, made some friends, and even learn the truth about whom I related to. Big Mac somehow managed to find me at the park, told me that he learned that I'm alive from his family. He even told what happen to my parents, told me they passed away. I was in deep state of shock and sad, I'll never knew what they really look like, but Applejack and Granny Smith told me they still love me. Of course, it made me a little better, but they wanted me to come to Sweet Apple Acres whenever I feel like it because it's my home. I told them I can pay a visit to them and promised that I'll keep in touch.
When I return to Canterlot, I give Wu an explanation of what I have learned, told him that I'm related to the Apples family. He was surprised at first, but he was very happy that I finally found an answer that I was looking for. I even told Princess Celestia, it did leave her jealous that she felt replace, but I even explain that my parents passed away and all of its leave was my siblings and my grandmother. She was sad of hearing about it, but glad that I was able to find the answers.
But things will change if anything happens to us and it'll change our lives in the future.
Comet's Prologue
My name is Comet Stardust Sparkle, I'm a unicorn, but to give you a heads up, I was once a human. My real name is Elijah, but I was usually called Eli. I was born in Brooklyn, New York. My mother was a waitress at the cafe and my father was a surgeon, but aunt and uncle, they're mobsters affiliated with the Italian Mafia which my mother was Italian and my father was American, basically, I'm half Italian-half American.
We tried to live a normal life since the city is always bustling with people rushing. Mostly because we were living in a rough streets that involved in street fights, murder incidents, and gang members beating up against each other. The only thing I wish is to live somewhere quiet with my parents.
Despite all of this, it's a wishful thinking and it won't happen because neither of my parents can afford to travel. Uncle Alonzo and Aunt Giovanna came to the cafe very often for the gathering of their members, mostly between either which buildings they can try to raid or recruiting a new member. He even wanted me to carry out his work when he passed, which I don't want any part of it and my parents doesn't want me to be a criminal because of him.
Even at school, I was being picked on by kids around my age only because I was related to Uncle Alonzo and Aunt Giovanna, who're the Italian Mafias. Not to mention I've been getting into fights outside of school. Neither of the teachers are doing something about it, ignoring the situation and neglecting their jobs for getting them to stop. I was only a 6-year-old child and yet, they've neglected their job.
Even after everything I've been through, I just couldn't take it anymore. That night, I secretly left home and ran away without looking back. I know my parents have done everything they can to help me, but it's...it's just...I can't take it...can't take it of being picked on...being hurt...and being with my uncle or my aunt.
If you are reading this, understand this is where my new life is about to begin. The life that will change me forever.
That's it for the 1st chapter.