This story is due for a rewrite. I've been having lots of free time these days, and I spared some to check this out again. I don't think I'm satisfied with it, but I loathe the idea of leaving something unfinished.
It shouldn't be too big a deal, right? It wasn't long at all, I mean. A big update with the rewritten chapters should come around Christmas, though I'd be surprised if anyone were waiting for them at all.
If the update doesn't come, it either means I forgot, I hit writer's block, or I died. The poison is yours to pick.
Until then, farewell.