New Journey
Author: Marina (taelle@yahoo.com)
Pairing: none for now
Rating: G
Dislaimers: This story uses characters and
universe belonging to J.R.R.Tolkien. They
characters are not used for profit. Please view my
story as a respectful comment on the work of a
beloved writer.
Series: sequel to First Song and Dinner Guest.
Warning/summary/notes: this story contains an OC,
and more than that, it's from the POV of that OC,
though a Tolkien character does figure in the
story. If the original content is unacceptable to
you, do not read any further.
--------------------------------------------------
(Time and place indefinite)
Alder leaned back and looked at the bonfire. The
flame was steady and would certainly last all
night. It was time to rest — if he could.
Maglor was laying quietly a bit further from the
fire, but with the man's ability to keep still and
quiet Alder couldn't really say whether he was
sleeping. At least now, settled into Alder's
father's old bedroll and with the fire going, he
was sure to be warm. Alder didn't even want to
imagine how he got by before that.
Everything was quiet around them, so quiet that
Alder could distinguish the soft whisper of the
pines at their back, and much further along the
shore voices and snatches of music — probably a
dance at some village.
It wasn't Alder's first night out of home — even
not counting their fishing cruises. He went to the
fair that one time, and sometimes had all-night
parties and dances on the beach with other young
people from the village. But all these times there
was a lot of people around. Now he was alone with
Maglor.
Alder looked at Maglor again and decided that the
man was definitely asleep. Nobody could be that
still while awake. He should sleep too — it was a
long day, and Alder was tired, but Alder could not
manage to calm down. His brain continued churning
the events of the day.
Back in the morning he had woken in his own bed —
it was so long ago, it seemed to him now. He woke
up, and the first thing he remembered was Maglor's
presence. Alder jumped off the bed, joyfully
buoyed by this, and dressed hurriedly. Then,
though, he slowed down, unsure about bothering
Maglor first thing in the morning. But when he
entered the kitchen, their guest was there
already. Mother bustled around, preparing the
breakfast for all the family, and Maglor helped
her. For a moment Alder just stood there,
observing the contrast between mother's energetic
movements and Maglor's slow and deliberate ones.
His injury apparently put some restrictions on his
abilities but still he never dropped anything or
even made a single graceless movement.
And then mother saw Alder and called him in to
help, and he didn't have a free moment until the
whole family sat down for breakfast.
They ate and then they cleaned up and went on
their different business. There were chores that
Alder had to do, even though the strange festive
mood still stayed with him. He hesitated, but then
Maglor went to the yard with him and sat there
watching Alder work. The chores did not really
take that long, now that he could raise his head
any time he wanted and check that Maglor was still
here. Every time the man caught him looking, he
answered with a tiny smile. Alder wished Maglor
would sing, but did not dare to ask for it.
And then they went back into the house, for it was
almost time for dinner, and mother gave Maglor his
clothes, washed and mended. "Thank you, kind
lady," Maglor said softly, bowing his head.
Mother looked at him for a moment, then nodded.
"Will you stay for dinner?"
"If it won't be a problem," he said. "I'll be gone
afterwards."
Alder wanted to cry out, but there was a lump in
his throat that did not let him utter even one
sound. Maglor was leaving.
Perhaps he did utter some sound, for when they
were alone in the dining room, Maglor looked
straight at Alder with his strange eyes and said,
"I cannot stay, Alder."
"But why?" Alder suspected he sounded like a
petulant child, but somehow he did not care.
Maglor frowned. "I... it would be wrong. There's
no place for me anywhere, especiall here..."
Alder stared at him, dissatisfied with the answer
bur not knowing what else to say. Maglor sighed
and went to change into his own clothes.
The dinner after that felt much less cheerful than
the previous meals. Alder was restless and uneasy,
and his parents and siblings seemed to feel this.
The younger children hurried to eat and asked
immediately for the permission to leave. Father
tried to talk about the next cruise, but soon felt
silent. And then Maglor spoke.
The family already noticed that their guest spoke
rarely, so everybody turned to him. "I thank you
for your hospitality," Maglor said. "I will leave
after dinner, and I will remember you always with
gratitude."
Alder's parents answered with standard
well-wishing in his journey. Alder did not say
anything. His father glanced at him sharply, but
did not voice a reproach, only nodded to himself.
After the dinner mother went to the kitchen again,
declaring against Maglor's feeble protests that
she was going to pack some food for him to take on
the road. In the end he went after her meekly, and
Alder was left alone with his father.
For a moment both of them were silent, and then
Alder's father asked quietly, "You want to leave
with him, don't you?"
And suddenly Alder understood that that was
exactly what he wanted. Maglor was right, he could
not stay at the village, it wasn't his place — but
he showed something to Alder, and now the boy knew
that he had to leave home too.
"I..." he started to talk hesitantly, "I know I
have to help you, and I love fishing, honestly, I
do, but..." The boy took a deep breath. "I just
never knew. Not even when we went to the fair, and
now..." Alder had no right words to explain why
his own village suddenly seemed too small, but he
had to try. "Now I know that there's something
else in the world. It is bad to wish for more than
my own home, but I can't stop feeling it. Feeling
the call."
"I know," his father answered gently. "Maybe I
always knew that a song will call you away..." The
man sighed and for a moment embraced his son
tightly, then stepped aside and looked at the boy
seriously. "I have helpers enough. You are almost
a man already, Alder, and no man should be tied
down when his destiny calls. Go, son. Go where you
need to go, but never forget your home."
"I..." Now it was even more difficult to speak,
but Alder swallowed and went on bravely. "Thank
you, father! I love you all, and I'll be back, I
promise..."
His father smiled and said "I love you too, son.
Now let's go tell your mother and your friend that
you'll be leaving with him, and then we have to
prepare you for the journey."
And so they went. Alder explained his decision
hesitantly, looking at Maglor, as if apologizing
for intrusion. After all, he never asked — maybe
Maglor was tired of him, of them all already, and
*that*'s why he decided to leave quickly. So his
mother's reaction caught him totally unprepared.
"Why on earth would you want to leave?" she asked
in surprise and disbelief. "Your home is here, you
don't need to go anywhere!" She turned to Maglor,
suddenly enraged. "It's all your doing! You've
bewitched him somehow! We all were fine until you
appeared!"
Maglor stumbled backwards, his face white. "I'd
better go now," he whispered.
Alder's father stepped closer to his wife. "Now,
now, Mora," he said, hugging her. "Let the boy be.
He's growing up, it's normal for him to go into
the world to seek his destiny..."
"His life's here with us!" his mother exclaimed
and began to cry in earnest. Alder knew he had to
talk to her, but first he needed to stop Maglor.
"Don't go, please," he said entreatingly. "It's
not your fault, Maglor, don't go..." He caught the
man's shoulder and squeezed it slightly, trying to
project reassurance.
"I brought discord into your family," Maglor said
tonelessly, looking straight ahead as if not
really seeing Alder.
"No, you didn't!" Alder said decisively. "Mother,
father? Tell him! Tell Maglor he did not do
anything wrong!"
"I don't want you to go!" his mother sniffed.
"But he would've gone anyway," father told her
quietly, and then looked at their guest. "Do not
worry, friend Maglor. You did not make us do
anything we wouldn't do on our own."
Maglor still looked a little worried, but father
said, "Now, I wouldn't want the boy to go on his
own, so would you please look after him for us?".
And then mother started to pack even more food and
give them both instructions about keeping clothes
dry, and drinking only fresh water, and gods know
what else. Alder did not take his eyes off
Maglor's face. Finally he saw the man smile
slightly and sighed in relief.
They left in the early evening, after the whole
family and friends came in for tea and to say good
bye to Alder. Maglor sat quietly in the corner of
the dining room and watched. Alder almost lost
hope to ever get out from all this hustle and
bustle. From time to time he looked on to check
whether the man was still here, and Maglor's quiet
smile reminded him that an adventure waited for
him.
Finally when Lyta the sailmaker's daughter kissed
him, Alder had enough. He found his father and
told him it was time to go, and soon all the
guests left. The family stood on the porch to say
the last good-bye. Father hugged Alder briefly and
then let mother kiss him all she wanted. When
Alder looked again, he saw that father was shaking
Maglor's crippled hand carefully.
The twins went with them till the last house. They
chattered incessantly about where *they* would go
when they were grown up. Alder looked at Maglor
and noticed that the man was humming quietly. That
made the boy grin so widely that even the twins
noticed.
Finally the younger boys had to turn home. Alder
promised for the last time to come back with
presents, and then they went along the shore,
leaving the village at their back.
They went ahead in silence, comfortable with each
other. At one moment Alder said, "Are you going
anywhere in particular?"
Maglor shook his head, and Alder grinned. "That's
okay anyway," he said, and Maglor smiled in
answer.
Leaving so late they could not travel far this
day, and when they stopped for the night it was in
a place Alder saw before. He supposed it was okay
— nothing too strange for the first day. Alder
started the fire, glancing doubtfully at his
companion. He still did not know how Maglor burned
his hands. Could he be afraid of fire? But the man
did not protest, and Alder went on.
"What were you humming back in the village?" he
asked when they finished their supper.
"Just an old song," Maglor said. "Your brothers
reminded me of it somehow."
"Will you sing it to me?" Alder asked hesitantly.
Maglor closed his eyes. "Tomorrow, maybe..." he
said quietly.
"Good night, then," Alder said.
"Good night, Alder."
Then they fell silent. Maglor seemed to fall
asleep, but Alder was too excited to sleep, and so
he lay thinking about his day.
It was a good day, he decided finally, and
tomorrow will be better. And maybe Maglor will
sing him a song. Alder closed his eyes and fell
asleep.
--------------------------------------------------
The end for now
--------------------------------------------------
Author: Marina (taelle@yahoo.com)
Pairing: none for now
Rating: G
Dislaimers: This story uses characters and
universe belonging to J.R.R.Tolkien. They
characters are not used for profit. Please view my
story as a respectful comment on the work of a
beloved writer.
Series: sequel to First Song and Dinner Guest.
Warning/summary/notes: this story contains an OC,
and more than that, it's from the POV of that OC,
though a Tolkien character does figure in the
story. If the original content is unacceptable to
you, do not read any further.
--------------------------------------------------
(Time and place indefinite)
Alder leaned back and looked at the bonfire. The
flame was steady and would certainly last all
night. It was time to rest — if he could.
Maglor was laying quietly a bit further from the
fire, but with the man's ability to keep still and
quiet Alder couldn't really say whether he was
sleeping. At least now, settled into Alder's
father's old bedroll and with the fire going, he
was sure to be warm. Alder didn't even want to
imagine how he got by before that.
Everything was quiet around them, so quiet that
Alder could distinguish the soft whisper of the
pines at their back, and much further along the
shore voices and snatches of music — probably a
dance at some village.
It wasn't Alder's first night out of home — even
not counting their fishing cruises. He went to the
fair that one time, and sometimes had all-night
parties and dances on the beach with other young
people from the village. But all these times there
was a lot of people around. Now he was alone with
Maglor.
Alder looked at Maglor again and decided that the
man was definitely asleep. Nobody could be that
still while awake. He should sleep too — it was a
long day, and Alder was tired, but Alder could not
manage to calm down. His brain continued churning
the events of the day.
Back in the morning he had woken in his own bed —
it was so long ago, it seemed to him now. He woke
up, and the first thing he remembered was Maglor's
presence. Alder jumped off the bed, joyfully
buoyed by this, and dressed hurriedly. Then,
though, he slowed down, unsure about bothering
Maglor first thing in the morning. But when he
entered the kitchen, their guest was there
already. Mother bustled around, preparing the
breakfast for all the family, and Maglor helped
her. For a moment Alder just stood there,
observing the contrast between mother's energetic
movements and Maglor's slow and deliberate ones.
His injury apparently put some restrictions on his
abilities but still he never dropped anything or
even made a single graceless movement.
And then mother saw Alder and called him in to
help, and he didn't have a free moment until the
whole family sat down for breakfast.
They ate and then they cleaned up and went on
their different business. There were chores that
Alder had to do, even though the strange festive
mood still stayed with him. He hesitated, but then
Maglor went to the yard with him and sat there
watching Alder work. The chores did not really
take that long, now that he could raise his head
any time he wanted and check that Maglor was still
here. Every time the man caught him looking, he
answered with a tiny smile. Alder wished Maglor
would sing, but did not dare to ask for it.
And then they went back into the house, for it was
almost time for dinner, and mother gave Maglor his
clothes, washed and mended. "Thank you, kind
lady," Maglor said softly, bowing his head.
Mother looked at him for a moment, then nodded.
"Will you stay for dinner?"
"If it won't be a problem," he said. "I'll be gone
afterwards."
Alder wanted to cry out, but there was a lump in
his throat that did not let him utter even one
sound. Maglor was leaving.
Perhaps he did utter some sound, for when they
were alone in the dining room, Maglor looked
straight at Alder with his strange eyes and said,
"I cannot stay, Alder."
"But why?" Alder suspected he sounded like a
petulant child, but somehow he did not care.
Maglor frowned. "I... it would be wrong. There's
no place for me anywhere, especiall here..."
Alder stared at him, dissatisfied with the answer
bur not knowing what else to say. Maglor sighed
and went to change into his own clothes.
The dinner after that felt much less cheerful than
the previous meals. Alder was restless and uneasy,
and his parents and siblings seemed to feel this.
The younger children hurried to eat and asked
immediately for the permission to leave. Father
tried to talk about the next cruise, but soon felt
silent. And then Maglor spoke.
The family already noticed that their guest spoke
rarely, so everybody turned to him. "I thank you
for your hospitality," Maglor said. "I will leave
after dinner, and I will remember you always with
gratitude."
Alder's parents answered with standard
well-wishing in his journey. Alder did not say
anything. His father glanced at him sharply, but
did not voice a reproach, only nodded to himself.
After the dinner mother went to the kitchen again,
declaring against Maglor's feeble protests that
she was going to pack some food for him to take on
the road. In the end he went after her meekly, and
Alder was left alone with his father.
For a moment both of them were silent, and then
Alder's father asked quietly, "You want to leave
with him, don't you?"
And suddenly Alder understood that that was
exactly what he wanted. Maglor was right, he could
not stay at the village, it wasn't his place — but
he showed something to Alder, and now the boy knew
that he had to leave home too.
"I..." he started to talk hesitantly, "I know I
have to help you, and I love fishing, honestly, I
do, but..." The boy took a deep breath. "I just
never knew. Not even when we went to the fair, and
now..." Alder had no right words to explain why
his own village suddenly seemed too small, but he
had to try. "Now I know that there's something
else in the world. It is bad to wish for more than
my own home, but I can't stop feeling it. Feeling
the call."
"I know," his father answered gently. "Maybe I
always knew that a song will call you away..." The
man sighed and for a moment embraced his son
tightly, then stepped aside and looked at the boy
seriously. "I have helpers enough. You are almost
a man already, Alder, and no man should be tied
down when his destiny calls. Go, son. Go where you
need to go, but never forget your home."
"I..." Now it was even more difficult to speak,
but Alder swallowed and went on bravely. "Thank
you, father! I love you all, and I'll be back, I
promise..."
His father smiled and said "I love you too, son.
Now let's go tell your mother and your friend that
you'll be leaving with him, and then we have to
prepare you for the journey."
And so they went. Alder explained his decision
hesitantly, looking at Maglor, as if apologizing
for intrusion. After all, he never asked — maybe
Maglor was tired of him, of them all already, and
*that*'s why he decided to leave quickly. So his
mother's reaction caught him totally unprepared.
"Why on earth would you want to leave?" she asked
in surprise and disbelief. "Your home is here, you
don't need to go anywhere!" She turned to Maglor,
suddenly enraged. "It's all your doing! You've
bewitched him somehow! We all were fine until you
appeared!"
Maglor stumbled backwards, his face white. "I'd
better go now," he whispered.
Alder's father stepped closer to his wife. "Now,
now, Mora," he said, hugging her. "Let the boy be.
He's growing up, it's normal for him to go into
the world to seek his destiny..."
"His life's here with us!" his mother exclaimed
and began to cry in earnest. Alder knew he had to
talk to her, but first he needed to stop Maglor.
"Don't go, please," he said entreatingly. "It's
not your fault, Maglor, don't go..." He caught the
man's shoulder and squeezed it slightly, trying to
project reassurance.
"I brought discord into your family," Maglor said
tonelessly, looking straight ahead as if not
really seeing Alder.
"No, you didn't!" Alder said decisively. "Mother,
father? Tell him! Tell Maglor he did not do
anything wrong!"
"I don't want you to go!" his mother sniffed.
"But he would've gone anyway," father told her
quietly, and then looked at their guest. "Do not
worry, friend Maglor. You did not make us do
anything we wouldn't do on our own."
Maglor still looked a little worried, but father
said, "Now, I wouldn't want the boy to go on his
own, so would you please look after him for us?".
And then mother started to pack even more food and
give them both instructions about keeping clothes
dry, and drinking only fresh water, and gods know
what else. Alder did not take his eyes off
Maglor's face. Finally he saw the man smile
slightly and sighed in relief.
They left in the early evening, after the whole
family and friends came in for tea and to say good
bye to Alder. Maglor sat quietly in the corner of
the dining room and watched. Alder almost lost
hope to ever get out from all this hustle and
bustle. From time to time he looked on to check
whether the man was still here, and Maglor's quiet
smile reminded him that an adventure waited for
him.
Finally when Lyta the sailmaker's daughter kissed
him, Alder had enough. He found his father and
told him it was time to go, and soon all the
guests left. The family stood on the porch to say
the last good-bye. Father hugged Alder briefly and
then let mother kiss him all she wanted. When
Alder looked again, he saw that father was shaking
Maglor's crippled hand carefully.
The twins went with them till the last house. They
chattered incessantly about where *they* would go
when they were grown up. Alder looked at Maglor
and noticed that the man was humming quietly. That
made the boy grin so widely that even the twins
noticed.
Finally the younger boys had to turn home. Alder
promised for the last time to come back with
presents, and then they went along the shore,
leaving the village at their back.
They went ahead in silence, comfortable with each
other. At one moment Alder said, "Are you going
anywhere in particular?"
Maglor shook his head, and Alder grinned. "That's
okay anyway," he said, and Maglor smiled in
answer.
Leaving so late they could not travel far this
day, and when they stopped for the night it was in
a place Alder saw before. He supposed it was okay
— nothing too strange for the first day. Alder
started the fire, glancing doubtfully at his
companion. He still did not know how Maglor burned
his hands. Could he be afraid of fire? But the man
did not protest, and Alder went on.
"What were you humming back in the village?" he
asked when they finished their supper.
"Just an old song," Maglor said. "Your brothers
reminded me of it somehow."
"Will you sing it to me?" Alder asked hesitantly.
Maglor closed his eyes. "Tomorrow, maybe..." he
said quietly.
"Good night, then," Alder said.
"Good night, Alder."
Then they fell silent. Maglor seemed to fall
asleep, but Alder was too excited to sleep, and so
he lay thinking about his day.
It was a good day, he decided finally, and
tomorrow will be better. And maybe Maglor will
sing him a song. Alder closed his eyes and fell
asleep.
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The end for now
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