Author's Note 2
Well so far so good, I just received my first reviews and I think they seem promising. They were helpful to show what I need to change early on so I can amuse my audience and perhaps gain more.
One thing did come up in the review that needs to be settled now to stop the confusion. I have not used Gohan's actual name yet. In this story he is called Harry for a reason, he has amnesia. As the story goes on he will remember more and more about who he once was, and what happened that Halloween Night. I am not going to disclose anything else right now. I want my readers to get that "what happens next, I want more" feeling when reading this. If I tell you what is going to happen, then you'll lose interest.
I am thinking about only releasing chapters two or three at a time, so when you read, you read a whole section, not just a different scene. That will depend on the reviews I get from the next couple of chapters that I will post.
If you got something to say, whether it is good or bad. I want to hear it.